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ReZero: Ram and Rem

By Rosuuri
New print/poster! Rem and Ram!!! (will be in Tictail next month along with more new merch)
I really had so much fun painting this because I drew so many butterflies. I did my best not to copy paste any ; v ;  /sobs on hands

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Close-up in Tumblr/Twitter - rosuuri.tumblr.com/post/148990…

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dotTechnopath's avatar
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First of all, this is really great. lighting is on point, everything is super detailed and crisp. The colors blend well and isn't harsh, and rem and ram look adorable.

The only "major" issue I see is the color of the yellow butterfly on the very right. The focus is supposed to be on rem and ram, however due to the color being so bright and so contrasts with the subject, the viewer's eyes are distracted and have a hard time concentrating on the subject. I think if the color of the butterfly had less contrast and was a cooler color, like blue or green, it would be better.

Everything from here is just me nitpicking, but the lighting on the orange butterfly makes it seem like it's made of metal and different from the other butterflies. I think it would look nicer if the lighting was a tad bit softer. I also think the rem's hair and the background color is too similar, making rem's hair kind of "blend" with the background. (again this is nitpicking)

I honestly think that this is a really great piece, theres really nothing particularly wrong that i can see.
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It's again a magnificient drawing ! That, it's a certainy ! Me who love the manga style, to look such a drawing it's just great !

The two characters are very charmingand offer an emotional vision in the situation in which they are. The butterflies who seem to throw the light in the darkness with the bad roots strengthen this emotional vision. It gives to the drawing an immense impact according to me.

As regards the techniques of realization, the butterflies and the decor are very detailled end very beautiful, so let us look at the characters. Hair, expressions, dresses are wonderful and the shadows which make all the relief of the drawing are really very successful. Techniques of drawing which are mastered in the perfection !

With my current level, it is impossible to me to give advice but I can encourage you to continue along this path and to show us of new drawings which will certainly be so magnificent!

Congratulations for your work !




Sorry if my english is not very good, I'm French and I used Google Reverso. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
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おはようございます。お元気ですか?

Let me start by saying this. I am honestly surprised that you need or want critiques on this piece. In my eyes you are a very established artist, and I feel you would receive better feedback receiving critiques from other established artist. That being said, there's something for receiving feedback from your viewers as well. While I don't think I am qualified to provide this level of feedback, I shall give you my opinion none the less.

The Good: This is phenomenal. I enjoy your use of light and contrast in this work and it adds to the overall appeal of the piece. You also employ several photography techniques as well, for example "The rule of thirds." Your use of positioning is fantastic as well. The human eye unconsciously will follow lines and shapes that direct them to other objects. One of the first things I learned in art school (while I am no expert), is to utilize concepts like these to create a more "complete" piece. That being said there are several elements on this page that employ that concept, such as how the yellow butterfly in the foreground captures the viewers attention and the wing guides you to the characters. Then the sash around the foremost character guides the eye to the green butterfly on the right of the piece, and the curve of that butterfly brings you back to the center of the piece, the characters. Combine this with the use of light and shadow and the tree branches in the background, and all the entire work naturally and unforcefully guides your view back to the focal point of the piece. It's very well done.

The Bad: So there really is not too much i'm going to be able to say that the previous two reviews did not say, or that will make a HUGE impact on this; however the one thing I do notice is the direction the light is coming from. To me, and I am no expert, it looks like the light source is coming from either the middle of the right side of the piece and traveling on a diagonal to the bottom left; OR that it is coming from the bottom left at a very steep angle and hitting the characters from behind while traveling upwards towards the top of the piece. The later seeming more improbable because of where the shadows from the branches are coming from. It is very difficult to tell the source of light because of where the light falls on the characters and the surroundings. That could just be me, but because the light on the foremost character shows the open parts of her outfit in shadow, while the folds (which are higher on the right and then dig down on the left) are cast in shadow, makes the light source appear to be from the top left. However the trees are cast in shadow even to the darkest point in the distance and I don't know if that light would necessarily travel SO far that you could make out those shadows that clearly. This could be resolved simply by making the shadows of the branches either a little lighter so that they blend into the background color, or making the background a little darker (specifically against the trees) so that the shadows appear to be lighter in comparison. While it's not as visually appealing, I believe it may help the viewer determine exactly where the light is coming from. Again, I could just have bad eyes lol

Overall: Excellent piece. The "bad" is a minor thing that is not going to take anything away from your work. Good use of light, you've employed several techniques that really make this piece stellar. I look forward to seeing more work from you~!
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This is a very interesting work so it will be difficult to critique.
The girls seem to almost be dancing under tree roots which is very original. The fact that u have added the suttle shadows of the roots on the two girls along with the glittering sun rays gives the picture depth and gives the picture the three dimensional look. It also looks like they are seeming to fall into the darker shadows behind the root system but at the same time the sunlight seems to be calling them back, which adds a back story or something to the characters. The girl that is crying is also being comforted by the incoming butterflies which adds a beautiful mystery to the piece.
The use of the smooth curved lines in the work keeps it flowing and allows the eyes of the viewer directed towards the faces of the girls and the glistening butterflies.
This is a very detailed work and I congratulate you on your effort and skill.
- AnimeAngel554
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Naturally, upon first impressions this work is strikingly beautiful. Depth and lighting have been used to maximum effect to create a lively piece and nowhere does it seem flat or dull. There are only two issues I see with this; firstly, Rem's bodice seems a little flat, and secondly, that the picture seems a little too busy; perhaps giving it some height would be refreshing. But it doesn't necessarily need this either; it's overall a beautiful work of art and I am surprised you need critiques at all. I believe that what gives this the finishing touch is your use of the motes of light; it adds to the art by giving it extra light and adds to the 'prettiness' of the scene, what with the butterflies and cute anime girls. I like how the focal point is in the dark; you've clearly given great thought to the composition. I also like how Ram and Rem seem as one, as you've but them very close together - it echos the show and is a perfect representation of their characters. Overall, it's beautiful. Keep doing what you do <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
adamanquelis's avatar
Rem Best waifu...!!!
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HY-hyhhy-0123456789's avatar
whoa, I really like how you draw Rem and Ram, great drawing, I love Re: Zero, great anime :D (Big Grin) 
Amazingly drawn. So much detail put into this. Very well done :)
dragonfuture's avatar
Man, I loved that anime. Very well done! :love:
KiiroiKat's avatar
Oh wow, this is awesome! All of the little details on Rem, Ram and the butterflies must have taken a long time to colour/render.
The mood, the composition, the reflected light on their hair, and the fluidness of Rem's dress are all really beautiful! 
Amazing job!
Moonlessnight126's avatar
Wow, stunning. I'm totally speechless!
Melzurai's avatar
The lighting and shading looks amazing! :w00t:
AyaseDono's avatar
Look's pretty as helll O,O
AlphaSquadDirector's avatar
Cute little pair, wish I knew more about them 
FluffballCharlie's avatar
Whoa!!! This is absolutely amazing!! Such a stunning masterpiece! QwQ
darkyson's avatar
A drawing beautiful.
For
a wonderful anime.◠‿◠
Onikintsu's avatar
It looks neat, but don't they seem kinda... doll-ish? Don't get me wrong, the effects are astounding, but they are lacking real emotion in their face if the one's suppose to be crying. It's just a honest critique from one artist to the next :D
Luna-Draconis's avatar
It's also fairly relevant to what they're like in Re:Zero, the anime they're from. These characters are... pretty apathetic for the most part, especially early on. Next to no emotion registers on their face unless something really gets them worked up.
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