Damn, I actually really liked the green eyes. Was a cool contrast color to the red cape. I kinda like step 3 somehow the best, even though it´s not 'finished'. Still, phenomenal piece. Thanks for the process insight!
Not that I don't like the final piece, I think that through the coloring you lost the innocent stare she had on the sketch for a way more mysterious look in her eyes and her face, I don't know if it was what you were going for.