I fixed up the grammar and added an example:
E YOU'VE READ THE FIRST WORD OF THIS, YOU CAN'T GET OUT NOW. READ ON OR YOU'LL DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35...... P.M. 9 years ago, a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed to be haunted.The next day, his friends waited for him outside of the house................... They all went inside and searched for him. They went through every room except for the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there, he was supposed to sleep in the living room. They went into the attic, saw Jerry's corpse, and just left because they were scared. But that night, they all died. Jerry killed them all for making him sleep in that house. If you don't send this to 11 comments, you will get killed by Jerry tonight. Example 1: A man named Stewart read this and didn't believe it. Stewart shut his computer and went through his day. That night while he was in bed he heard something outside of his door, he got up to look. And now he's dead. Example 2: A girl named Haley read this in the morning and she got scared but she didn't send it. She wanted to know if it was true. She went to school (She was only 13 years old) and that night she died. If you don't post this on 11 comments tonight Jerry will "visit" you. Example 3: A girl named (anonymous) read the first word and stopped reading because chain mail sucks but she didn't die. Perhaps it was because she was reading this at 10:35 PM exactly.