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MOCC Final Chapter P33-34

*Updates: Made some edits as per Jonathan, Gary, and Wayne's suggestions.

OK I know it's been a while but we're back on track for the conclusion of the MOCC!

So Tsukijin has the solution to this dilemma, but can he be trusted?
And who knew Vector and Tsukijin had such a sorted history? (actually everybody knew. You can read all about it here mercanary-airbase.deviantart.c…)

Hang in there folks, the end is upon us. One more installment should do it, then we go to print!

I know the word balloons are a bit awkward in panels 2 and 4, I may rework them if it continues to bug me.
And do you guys think the balloons in the last panel need tails? Is it confusing at all?
Lettering real is a art, and another I've yet to master :(

Story and lines by :iconrodcom1000: Colors by :iconfradarlin:

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page 23-24 MOCC 2 Final Chapter p23-24

page 25-26 MOCC 2 Final Chapter p25-26

page 27-28 MOCC 2 Final Chapter p27-28

page 29-30 MOCC 2 Final Chapter p29-30

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:iconj-mace: Bluestar
:iconnewplancomics: Turbulence
:icond3kab1u3: Tankstream
:iconmrfuzzynutz: Onyx
:iconhulkdaddyg: Gilead

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JimSandersIII's avatar
at this point in time i am trying to get to the next phase of my life: into an assisted living facility where i can have more control over my care and in a city that i always wanted to retire to---
every year your mocc challange gets better and better!i ope to contribute next year-do i get to put my characters in if accepted?only heroes?only villians?- i think i have a villian that kicks ass visually----:) keep rocking ;)
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Thanks, Jimbo! Your comments encourage me to keep at it!
So far it's been heroes only, but that could change if we go again.
I hope your search for a better facility is quick and successful.
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Thanks for the comment! I have :iconfradarlin: to thank for the amazing colors!
Bracey100's avatar
LOL Tsukijin is just sooooo pimp in this story! The art and story have been really great for this.
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Thanks, I have a great colorist to thank for that!
Yeah, Tsuki is a lot of fun to write for, wish he were mine.
Bracey100's avatar
He's so arrogantly fun to read. Cant wait for Vindicator to get back and kick some ass.
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AWRowland's avatar
Boy I've got a bit of catching up to do, but this page looks great. I know it's difficult to keep such a crowded field flowing smoothly and this is about as good as it gets. Spectacular work.
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Thanks so much for your comment and you're right!
The more characters in the panel the trickier things get.
From panel composition to page arrangement.
We are punished for our ambition. :| (Blank Stare)
AWRowland's avatar
But when it pays off...that's satisfying. By that standard, you ought to be pretty satisfied with what you've crafted.
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Thanks for the kind words! :thumbsup:
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The comic looks great, but I do think all word balloons need tails, particularly if more than one character is shown in the panel.

I swear I need to find a way to get involved next time.
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Well, Eisner used to say 'treat the reader as if they were stupid'.
In other words dont leave any part of the storytelling open to interpretation.
But some things seem so obvious to me that I tend to be too flexible on that note.
I'll try it with tails and see.
Thanks for your input, Jonathan.
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I would prefer to say, treat every comic you make as if it's someone's first one they'll ever read. :nod:
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So much going on! Nice reveal! I have thoroughly enjoyed the story you're telling. It is superior to the last MOCC and I can see how much you thought this out. I guess you could've almost actually drawn the ending first except for the drop outs and Eric in the competition. All the characters look good in every panel and it's really dynamic. The style here is a bit reminiscent or G.O.H. which I don't think you read, but it's very good. You do have a couple of typos this time around, Do you know how far you were FORM...should be FROM  and "If YOUR lying" should be "If YOU'RE lying"
Man I wish Tsukijin would add more pages! Grudge was about to show up in it! ...well, his hand did already.
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Thanks for the heads up, the corrections have been made.
I'm not hip to 'G.O.H.', please fill me in.
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God Of Highschool. Chinese manwha read top to bottom left to right. Check this issue… You'll see the similarity. Main characters based on Journey to the West Monkey King Son Goku....
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Very interesting, thanks for the introduction.
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Very nice my friend
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