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RobVinc

I am alien (in Japan)
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My Bio
German, living and working in Japan for some years now

Favourite Visual Artist
Robbie Coltrane
Favourite Movies
Dr. Stragelove
Favourite Writers
Roald Dahl, P.K.Dick
Tools of the Trade
Epson R-D1, Bessa R, and more
Other Interests
Internet, Ham Radio, Unix/Linux, Photography, History, Land Rover

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Thank You very much for the critique!

Yes You are right, the white burn-out is distracting.
Also the sharpness could be greater, soon I will have the chance to make a better scan, so stay tuned for an update..
We will reopen very soon..
It is a picture I did not do any painting on it..

And btw the white stuff on the floor is concrete in sull sunshine..
Do not disturb me..
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You're very welcome!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I think I understand the idea behind this picture and why the artist choose this way. The composition of this shot is quite good, I think.

However I would have tried to work even more with the depth of field. The background could be even unsharper and less noisy. Maybe also some sky would help the picture to gain more depth.

The focus could have been better placed onto the top of the red stone in the middle right.

The colours could have been more brighter, in my opinion they are too flat.

The format of the picture is in my eyes not the best choice, I would have tried to stick in a 2:3 format.

All in all a good picure with some small flaws, which prohibit the picture to be a very good one.
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