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"RinoTheBouncer"

"You could take all this, take it away. I still have it all, 'cause I've climbed the tree of life, and that is why no longer scared if I fall. When I get lost in space I can return to this place 'cause you're the one".

Model : RinoTheBouncer (RENO) [Myself]
Photographer : ~xKillerEyesx
Edited by : RinoTheBouncer (RENO) [Myself]

Special Thanks to : ~xKillerEyesx for the special and elaborate efforts :)

"I wanted to keep the title strictly limited to the model's name (Myself), to leave the explanation of the meaning up to each viewer, I myself thought of it as portrayal of a new generation, like the family tree this man came from different origins, they all met to form one human being who is a mixture and a variety of different new / old social, political, emotional, sexual, psychological properties and characteristics. and I also had a personal explanation of Desire, as putting model centered in shot of a tree and a garden which are both references to desire might actually portray that meaning but I'll still leave it open to people to explain it" - RENO

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Comments, Critiques, +Faves and Daily Deviation Suggestions are highly appreciated !

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The first thing I noticed about this photo was the colors--so beautiful and vibrant! The colors give so much life and energy to this photo.

I really like the setting/subject matter. The tree is wonderful and I love the rock outcrop in the background. The random rocks in the front combined with the dead/brown grass makes the foreground much more interesting than if it was all green. I like the model's pose, but I wish we could see the model's eyes better.

The main thing I have for critique is the composition. There's a lot of movement in the piece, but all the movement sort of leads the viewer's eyes out, and there's not much to really lead the viewer back in. I sketched up the following to hopefully point this out better:

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One of the commenters mentioned that the spaces in the front are sorta empty and they detract a bit--while I don't feel they detract, if there were some other objects there to help bring the movement back inwards it would help.

Hopefully this makes sense!
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Eaven Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011
don't jump :D
Cool photo :aww:
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RinoTheBouncer Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
HUGzz
thanks a lot :hug:
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Karaaaa Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011  Professional
Love this!! :D
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RinoTheBouncer Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank youuuu xD
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demonsaintdante Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011
You put a lot of thought in this piece. I think you leave the lower left and right of the image pretty empty which distracts from the overall power of the piece.
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RinoTheBouncer Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks a lot for the kind words :) and for the advice, I actually had another version showing two metal arms of a garden cart but it wasn't as bright and as clear as this one hence I used the vignette on the two lower sides to hide a little bit of the emptiness :)
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February 23, 2011
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Canon EOS 1000D
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1/1250 second
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30 mm
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200
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Feb 9, 2011, 3:31:30 AM
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Adobe Photoshop CS5 Macintosh
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