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Ok this is my first story on dA that has chapters. It is about you and Germany, whom is a Nazi. No you're not a Jew calm down.I HAD TO WRITE THIS 3 FACKING TIMES SO PLEASE BE NICE. Also lets pretend they had cars back then. Not cars like today but cars.
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You lay on your thin matress looking at the wall which had peeling wall paper on it. You had been sent to ''bed'' in disgrace because you had opened your eyes during your lunch prayer. You didnt even get to eat your small lunch of a slice of bread and slice of cheese. Icey cold air circulated through the room. The icy air blew around your legs and you shivered. Your thin dress  made sure you stayed freezing cold and they didn't give you blankets at the orphanage.
''Only a few more.... maybe days....  how... how many...'' you whispered softly to yourself.You didn't get education at the orphanage, or food alot of the time. There were loud screams and cries outside. Or that could very well be inside the orphanage. No, it was definately  outside. Of course, as usual,  the Nazi's were at their usual work. Killing Jews.
''Things could be worse..'' you whispered softly to yourself.
''I could be a Jew.''
That was one of your strong traits. You always tried to look on the brightside, though these days there didnt seem to be much brightness in your life. The only thing that was remotely bright in your life at the moment was the small blue toy dog you owned. Your dear mother had made that dog for you. It was no bigger than your dainty hand. It was made of light blue material and had small eyes and a mouth that smiled gently. Your mother had been killed. You had once been so high in society, though after she had been killed you lost everything and thats why everyone here hated you, because you came from a loving home. All the girls made fun of you and the mistresses hated everyone. You didn't know why everyone hated you. Before this evryone told you that you were a beutiful young girl who would grow up to be an amazing young woman. You lay on the thin matress shivering, when suddenly you heard your name being shrieked.
''____! Get DOWN here now! You pathetic excuse for a human being!'' The mistress called. You sighed and wearly got up. You put the small dog under your matress so nobody would steal it and trudged down the dusty stairs in your oversized black boots, that were torn at the soles. You didn't get lunch or even water, just some beatings.

~Random time skip to the next day because I can~

You stood in the yard with 29 other girls. You were the third oldest, being 17. However, lack of nourishment made you look like 14. A very flat and bony 14 year old. The oldest were two girls of 18 and the youngest was 5. The older girls walked around in little groups of two or three, walking arm in arm and whispering, while the youngest girls ran around playing chasing. You stood in the corner alone, staring into space while thinking about a better life. Suddenly, the mistress was in front of you.
''____. MY office. Now.'' You stumbled after her in your dirty dress and big boots.

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''____. This man is here to... adopt you.... all you need to do is serve him'' The mistress said. You looked around. You couldn't see any man. Suddenly a tall man walked out of the shadows. He was very tall, very broad and muscle-y, very blonde and had piercing blue eyes. He was wearing a long black coat which had lots of official looking badges and medals on the right side of the chest. He was also wearing an official looking cap. You shivered when he looked at you.
''H-he can just... t-t-take me... w-what a-about p-p-paperwork....''you stammered.
''____! Mr. Beilschmidt is a very high ranking officer and you will NOT question him. OR me, for that matter. Now shoo and wait outside.'' she commanded. As you left you heard them talking.
''How much?''
''I dont see why you would want her. Shes useless and barely ever talks. She is like a doll. Useless''
You went to your room to retrieve your small toy dog. You shoved it down your dress so the mistress or the Nazi wouldn't take it. You heard in the yard that Nazi's were heartless. All the girls stared jelously at you as you walked after the Nazi to his car.
''____! Dont forget to tell Mr. Beilshmidt how happy you've been here!'' the mistress called after you, now sarcastically sweet.
''Oh yes, I have been deliriously h-h-happy.'' You whispered, climbing into the car.

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As the car pulled up to a big house, you failed to hide you shock and gasped.
The German chuckled and got out of the car, so you followed him. You walked up the wide steps after him. When you walked inside, you gasped. It was so fancy. He removed his black coat on hung it up, revealing his uniform. He took of his cap and sat it on top the the coat rack. The German then showed you around the large house, more like a mansion. He showed you your room which was relativly small. It had cream walls, a proper single bed with clean, white sheets, a glossy brown bedside locker, a window beside the bed and a glossy brown wardrobe that matched the locker.
''Here. Change into zis, zen meet me in zhe living room'' he commanded. He gave you a change of clothes then left. The shirt was a white, frilly, knee length shirt with long sleeves and tight cuffs. He had given you white bloomers(underwear) and white knee length socks with a white headband. To break the whiteness, he had given you a black pair of flat shoes.
You walked to the living room and saw him, sitting on the sofa with a mug of coffee.
''Now. Im sure you're vondering why I 'ave done zis. You vere suffering, vern't you? Ja. So, all you need to do iz serve me in anyway I ask, and in return, you can ztay here, un I, vill not kill you'' He said, smirking. You looked at him, wide eyed. This, was going to be interesting.
Basically a story of Slave/Maid!Reader x Nazi!Germany.
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LUANthehuman Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Continue? please! 
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YourCrazyNazi Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
whoa nice work!!!!
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LordAresWar Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cars did exist they had tanks and planes ships submarines
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LittleGothKitten Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015
Ew
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Jack-Master-442 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
During Nazi Germany cars did exist.
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:iconlordareswar:
LordAresWar Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bro they had fucking tanks and planes and battleships of course they had a car at the time
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:iconlordareswar:
LordAresWar Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually they did
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Undertakers-Shop Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just pretend. This is a fanfiction. Keyword: FICTION
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xxemogamergirlxx Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Part 2??? :D
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I Like this already
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KiddoKunsGirl Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
Omg will there be moar??
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IronPiedmont1996 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
Very creative. I like it. ^^
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
love it ^w^
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ladymahayla Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
i want more!!!! this is exactly what ive been looking for in a german x reader story! please continue!!!
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Foxy-fox-Amber-Haze Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
pleas pleas pretty pleas make a part two
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eleysegottman Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014   General Artist
I only came on this to correct you as to their possession of cars. They had cars by the First World War, let alone second ;)
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myrjanna Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
Thank you so much. If I had been the one to clear this up, I wouldn't have done it so calmly.
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eleysegottman Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014   General Artist
Haha, welcome!
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Lagoonaxjackson Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
This story looks great! Makes me want to keep reading!! La la la la 
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CIChantea Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the feeling and thoughts in my mind about this are a bit non-descript...
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EveValentine213 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I luv this!
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AmuletDreamer Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a good story
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RilakkumaKissesXx Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Thanks :)
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Hetalia1775 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
I like this story already!!!!
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RilakkumaKissesXx Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
hehe thanks!
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FrozenFur Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can there be like…… a series? I would like this as a series. I'm very interested on how this will go.
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RilakkumaKissesXx Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
I have up to ch.15 done :)
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FrozenFur Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So I've read. It's so cute and wonderful. Can't wait for more
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Miss-Plain-Jane Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
They did have cars...If you remember history class, they probably showed you many poster from back then and there was one that said if you drive alone you're Driving with Hitler. I was to get people to car pool to save gas ^^ Love the story ^^
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RilakkumaKissesXx Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
I cant drive yet xD Yeah I realized after I published this I was like.
''Wait a minute we watched The boy in the striped pyjamas today in class... THEY DID HAVE CARS IM SUCH A TWIT!!!!''
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Miss-Plain-Jane Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Lol That move made me, cry, :iconsadplz: I was so zoned in on it I forgot we were in class and when the boy died I jumped up and yelled Nuuuuuu really loudly. XD The whole hallway heard me :P
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RilakkumaKissesXx Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Yea it was so sad :'( On a lighter note, the teacher asked us to draw pictures, and I pulled one from the hat and I had to draw like a rally, so we were all drawing or painting (I was using pencil and crayon) and when I had FINALLY finished, I was bringing it up to leave it on the teachers desk, and my friend, whos a complete and utter klutz, tripped and bumped straight into me. Her drawing was done using WATERCOLOUR and PAINT and both pictures got destroyed! :(
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Miss-Plain-Jane Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Oh Nuuuu :iconthefeelsplz: That must have sucked
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RilakkumaKissesXx Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
and she tried to wipe it off and she was like ''OH NOOOO'' and freaking out and tried to dry it with a tissue and it just SMEARED everything Dx
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Miss-Plain-Jane Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
:iconthefeelsplz: Don't worry I fix it. :iconspiderplz: = friend + me = :iconikillitplz:
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ImOnlyLittle Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student General Artist
They did have cars in those days ...
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oO0RyuuHeartsYou0Oo Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
uphold the illusion~ wooooooooooo~
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ImOnlyLittle Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student General Artist
XD
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RilakkumaKissesXx Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
I realized that like 5 minutes after I posted this.
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:iconimonlylittle:
ImOnlyLittle Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Lol xD
Good story btw~ just finished reading all the chapters you have so far~
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Kuraudia-Ve Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh this sounds like its getting good!
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BlackjackMonster Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
updatee
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RilakkumaKissesXx Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
I have up to chapter 13 done :)
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BlackjackMonster Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Yes, sorry i didn't see xD
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GermanaPlz Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Student General Artist
I want more write more x3
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Swifti56 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
:iconukeblushplz: I AM SUCH A BUNKING MASOCHIST. Why do I enjoy these fics? <3
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GallifreyanGeek Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Hmm, seems like an interesting fic :D Hopefully you're planning on continuing it?
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RilakkumaKissesXx Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
The other chapters are already up :) Well up to ch.10 I still need to do more xx
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GallifreyanGeek Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
Thanks, I'll go take a look :)
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blueeyewarrior180 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
this is so cool *o*
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