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[[HELLO THIS STORY HAS AN ABUSIVE DAD BECAUSE I'M SO ORIGINAL (not) OKAY BYE]]

It's a fine day outside. I'm pretty used to the sunlight... And so is daddy.

Ever since daddy got cheated on by mommy, he felt stressed being a single father. He sometimes would tell me to go to my room when he got too mad. He sometimes would work himself out of exaustion, but most of the time he goes to his room and takes a nap. 

That was years ago. But now, it's way more different. 

I'm just a adolescent, but he doesn't treat me like it. When I get upset, he doesn't help me with my issues, but tells me to "get over it" angrily... Or would do nothing. He'd punch me when I complain, slap me when I talk back, and ignore my crying. He says that i'm being too sensitive, which Is why he does this. 

But today, the misery ends. I don't want to go through that again. It feels awful. He makes me feel horrible inside. So what I did was run away from daddy... 

I hear his shout, a sad cry. He cried out to me, his son, that he never meant this. He never meant for me to become scared of him. He wanted me to grow into a confident, strong man. He wanted me to be like him. He didn't mean to hurt me. 

But I don't believe him. If he truly wanted that, he wouldn't do this to me.

And off I go...

...

And he cries for my attention yet again. And again. Till his echos fade away slowly into the abyss...

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