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Amada lluvia(Beloved rain)

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Hi!!
I really like pose and the background! The choise of colors is good because violet,blue, black and white are mixed in a relly great way! Looking the woman i think she is a little bit "off". I would have given more "presence", more in first line. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> Other thing .. i see a little parting between the face and the hair coloration. ( but maybe are only my eyes!). <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> The rain effect is good but maybe too. The choise to show the woman like a fairy dancer is really kind and fantasy! I love fantasy so you did well! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> Mainly is a good job and i'm sure that you will do a lot of good draws in the future! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
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You're welcome! ^_^ 
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Well, I think this is a good piece just by looking at it. The atmosphere here looks amazing, especially with the huge rain storm that is going on here. The line work here is also impressive, with a lot of detail going on in the forest. There are a couple of places where the light, such as on the woman's legs, probably shouldn't be there. With all the rain, it also kind of makes things hard to look at by making it blurry. The woman herself looks amazing as well. Overall, this is really good, so keep up the good work.
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Thank you so much for your critique!:hug:
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Hayo!

well, what I can say about this piece is that it is truly amazing! good technique, immense detail and just a wonderful feel! although, there is still room for improvement!

-firstly the woman's body looks a bit off. the size of her waist looks strangely small, like way too small. it might be the way she is bending, but it looks to me that the torso is unnaturally thin.

-secondly, that arm reaching above the head. at first I was really confused to what it was. it looks like a bent chicken leg. I mean its way thinner than the other, bends as if it was broken and only has three triangles for fingers. the other hand looks a bit off too, maybe its just the angle? but I defiantly recommend revising that left arm. (the arm reaching over the head)

-thirdly, the light spots could be a little less intense, I think they are a bit hard to look at.

despite the negatives this is truly one amazing piece! keep up the great work!
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Thank you very much for your critique!:hug:
SummerDreams-Art's avatar
Most beautiful cool blue tones and such a splendid artwork dear! You have done such a lovely job.:aww:
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You are most welcome.❤️❤️❤️
AnnMLoveArt's avatar
Wow! I really love this one!
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You´re very welcome :)
Secretadmires's avatar
Great use of colours and effects! You did an amazing job here dear Petras!:heart:
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You are most welcome!:rose:
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Simply Gorgeous work:love:
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With all my pleasure dear:heart:
mshellee's avatar
Oh wow, I love the rain. Amazing
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Fantastic work!  Heart Heart Heart 
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