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in Manehattan, Babs Seed has three bullies, Short Fuse, Rouge, and Branché Sabot. here's Short Fuse and his description paragraph in Babs' story I'm working on.

The leader of the gang was an earth colt named Short Fuse, and he was the nastiest of all. His name described him well, for he had a very short temper, and blew up like a bomb. Maybe that's why his cutie mark was a bomb, or maybe it was because he liked to blow stuff up with home made explosives he built himself. Short Fuse's mane was black and hung slightly over one side of his face, and he wore a red bandana around it. His hide was a dark soot color, making him look like a shadow, which made him even more terrifying. One thing was for certain; you did not want to get on his bad side.

I have three more original characters from Manehattan to draw, the third one being Babs' friend.


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Six-Princesses's avatar
He kind of cute.Blank Face Emoji 
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Now there is a Short Fuse pony. Too bad the episode is awful.
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i liked that episode
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xXMidnightMuffinXxHobbyist Digital Artist
I immediately thought of Rei's character when I heard the name. I personally haven't yet seen the episode but I'll take your word on it. The show's really gone downhill.
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Ok, maybe it's not straight-up awful. There's a funny Spitfire moment that got a few chuckles out of me and everyone else.
It's just that Scootaloo seemed way out of character and was being excessively bitchy to Rainbow, and there's also a continuity error: she apparently didn't know about this thing that she said she DID know about when she showed Rainbow's parents her scrapbook. ...However, now that I think about it, the episodes don't have to be in perfect order. Maybe this one took place BEFORE Scootaloo met Rainbow's parents.
I just have mixed feelings about it. There's a chance you won't feel the same if you check it out. People's opinions differ, after all.
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For me, two episodes that were painful to watch were Pinkie Pride and Crusaders of the Lost Mark, believe it or not.
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I like to think Babs did Equestria a public service and exterminated a potential future terrorist
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Would it be alright with you if I drew him??? If anyone asks if I made him up, Ill tell them that you did. 
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Reitanna-SeishinHobbyist General Artist
as long as you show me
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Barrel2s1coolStudent Digital Artist
If I saw him, I possibly join the bakers. Oh wait, he's dead.
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Is he Rain Cloud's brother?
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Reitanna-SeishinHobbyist General Artist
no, her brother's name was storm cloud
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Oh, okay. Can you make him next?
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Reitanna-SeishinHobbyist General Artist
no
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every single damn time i look at him, i think of Melanism; which is the opposite of albino.
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Reitanna-SeishinHobbyist General Artist
yeah, I know what melanism is :)
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SheeziiHobbyist Digital Artist
ah, i see, well did you ever think about making him have melanism or something? i KINDA have a feeling that you did, but i could be wrong.
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Reitanna-SeishinHobbyist General Artist
no, I just made him black. there are black equines.
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fffair enough.
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I love his design <3 
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I don't give a damn if I got in his bad side, I dealt people like him before 
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Reitanna-Seishin this is so cool i want him on the show also did you post mr ranger? yet
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I don't plan on drawing mr. ranger
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