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56 Watchers13.5K Page Views333 Deviations
Artist // Student // Varied
  • Sep 26, 1995
  • United States
  • Deviant for 10 years
  • She / Her
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My Bio
Current Residence: California
Favourite genre of music: anime
Favourite style of art: anime, manga, comic strips, drawing, photography
Favourite cartoon character: Spongebob
Personal Quote: "Randomness is awesomeness~!!"

Favourite Visual Artist
Takeshi Obata
Favourite Movies
Monty Python and the Holy Grail, A Bug's Life
Favourite TV Shows
SpongeBob, Pokemon, Regular Show, Avatar: The Last Airbender, The Legend of Korra
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Joe Hisaishi, Piko
Favourite Books
Spice & Wolf, Death Note: Another Note - The Los Angeles BB Murder Cases
Favourite Writers
Isuna Hasekura, Aldous Huxley, George Orwell
Favourite Games
Pokemon, Harvest Moon, Rune Factory, Devil Survivor 2, Tales of Vesperia
Favourite Gaming Platform
Gamecube, Wii, DS (everything Nintendo)
Tools of the Trade
tablet, dynamite, mechanical pencils, and erasers
Other Interests
anime, manga, comedy, science fiction, fantasy ("unless it involves unicorns")

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I really appreciate the information and feedback. I'll take all that into consideration. ^_^
First of all, thank you for such a detailed and helpful critique. I really appreciate it, and this is the reason I posted my chapter up here. I do plan on expanding on Charlie's character, and I have already been told by my friends that he needs more explanations. Things like electricity and phones I have already been planning to talk about, and I'm somewhat surprised you brought that up. And as for setting, it takes place in present times (though there isn't a specific year really/yet), but the location is somewhat isolated and rarely gets visitors. As for state, I haven't really decided, but I guess it should be in California since that's all I know.
It was... intriguing just as the last one. I think you did a really good job with the writing this time, Haruhi. =w=

...Why did I read this, awmawgaw...
ReiniCloud commented on ReiniCloud's profile
You're welcome. :3
ReiniCloud commented on ReiniCloud's profile
:shakefist: おい、かみさま!まって!