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Welcome to Youth Fall, I have been writing this story by hand since around early May and typing it out piece by piece, the story is still being written and I am about to begin the rest of the story either by hand as before or typing it out.
This story came to me in a dream and has been refined and touched up from the original draft while typing with additional scenes.
When dreams are not dreams, then who are you if you are not who you thought you were?
*Update, prologue remade, additional detail added and the past and present scenes now labeled correctly and italics for the past scenes changed*
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This story came to me in a dream and has been refined and touched up from the original draft while typing with additional scenes.
When dreams are not dreams, then who are you if you are not who you thought you were?
*Update, prologue remade, additional detail added and the past and present scenes now labeled correctly and italics for the past scenes changed*
*Second Update, final edits made, some words adjusted, some added, a little more detail added*
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Comments (11)
In the bar scene, where shed like to test on a dart board, the word 'buy' is missing. So it looks like
"Through there, need to something though” Quickly scanning the menu, Lenia picks something cheap enough and non-alcoholic."
"Through there, need to something though” Quickly scanning the menu, Lenia picks something cheap enough and non-alcoholic."
I went with picks since she didn't pay for it then, she was going to pay for it afterwards since she didn't trust Arthur to provide the juice and chips in a safe way. So she intended on paying after having them, which she didn't, I left it open to the reader to think on if she left some money behind or not when she left
That makes sense, but I was referring to this line
"Through there, need to something though"
In the end, it doesn't matter much. Thought I'd point it out since it broke the story flow. Good story though, its up to you if you want to fix it or not.
"Through there, need to something though"
In the end, it doesn't matter much. Thought I'd point it out since it broke the story flow. Good story though, its up to you if you want to fix it or not.
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