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:iconheisenking: Nicola Balocca - Story and script
:iconrh1n0x: Chris Vernon - Script and edits

:icontxs-1089: Thomas Sjöström - Art
:iconm3gr1ml0ck: Franco Villa - Lettering



- Previous chapter of this storyline: "Renegades Over America…".

- Breakdown's paranoia is a reference to his original Marvel profile.


- Before their arrival on Earth, Transformers had never even heard of water.

- Hudson Bay, located in northeastern
Canada, is a large body of saltwater. It's because of this that Breakdown met a whale.

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:iconryugassj3:
RyugaSSJ3 Featured By Owner May 7, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Guess if he stuck around and not kill...this would happen: youtu.be/ZxFD7Tk8Kps?t=2m8s Yes,I'm a sentimental f***,shoot me. T_T
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kyrtuck Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry, Whales don't eat fish robots, they only eat krill.


Hey look, Krill!
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:iconregenerationplus:
RegenerationPlus Featured By Owner Edited May 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes but Breakdown isn't so experienced about marine creatures. :-)
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:iconjoeteanby:
JoeTeanby Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
This is awesome. Great expressions and design on Breakdown. 
Good to see he ends up with a positive outlook on the last panel at least...
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:icontxs-1089:
TXS-1089 Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks Joe! I tried to pull a lot from the toys design when I drew him :)
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:iconregenerationplus:
RegenerationPlus Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Breakdown the optimistic! :-)
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:iconlemniskate:
Lemniskate Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015
What, Breakdown, never seen a Klud before?
Who came up with the Pipes-like visor thing?

Ah, so this is (one of) the fruit(s) of the teased collaboration between :iconheisenking: and :iconrh1n0x:! (By "teased" I mean "buried in a comment thread on one of their profile pages".)
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:iconregenerationplus:
RegenerationPlus Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually this the only fruit of our collaboration.
But it was fun and I hope in the future to work with Chris again. :-)
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:iconrh1n0x:
Rh1n0x Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
The story is all Nicola's work. I just ironed out the script a little :)
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:iconregenerationplus:
RegenerationPlus Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're too king. Your edits on the dialogues are simply great. :-)
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:icontxs-1089:
TXS-1089 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I came up with the visor thing. I thought it would look kinda cool since the toy had a visor but the character model didn't, much like Milne did in MTMTE with Pipes.
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:iconlemniskate:
Lemniskate Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015
An artist not afraid to add things. I like :thumbsup:
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:icontxs-1089:
TXS-1089 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
An artist should always try to make the script his own, screw the writers ;) lol
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner May 3, 2015
O_o
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:iconlemniskate:
Lemniskate Featured By Owner May 11, 2015
Surely you're not truly surprised?
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:iconm3gr1ml0ck:
M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner May 11, 2015
The choice of words may be a bit unsettling.
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:icontxs-1089:
TXS-1089 Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, no offense, of course ;)
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:iconlemniskate:
Lemniskate Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015
Yes. :D
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:icontxs-1089:
TXS-1089 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice to see it up!
Lettering looks great and woah, that art is amazing! *Unashamed pride* lol

I spot a few errors though, but I guess that's the artist's folly, you always see what's not good when you're done.


Looking forward to working with you guys some more!
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:iconregenerationplus:
RegenerationPlus Featured By Owner Edited Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, the art is amazing!

I'm sure in the future we will work together again. :-)
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:iconlemniskate:
Lemniskate Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015
I see you like Alex Milne's style.
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:icontxs-1089:
TXS-1089 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Milne, Roche, Yaniger and Senior. My favorite four tf artists have all contributed to my style.
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