Well guys, I decided to do it one last time. So welcome to the Choose Your Own Edit duel of 8 and 9. For those of you who are new, here’s how this works. I create a very bland and generic character and you guys with cool ideas post ways to change the girl in the comments of said girl, NOT HERE. This all culminates into making a cool and interesting new character with an RP style purpose or power. Ok now you can control a whole route but you can’t dump the whole idea at once, you can only pick one feature to change at a time and you can be sniped. Oh and I am accepting hand accessories this time but they don’t count as a transformation item for the RP purpose. Also cosplays are welcome but you can’t use characters that have been in past CYOEs.
Now you may notice from the tittle that this is a special Choose Your Own Edit. You see I decided to have 8 and 9 be linked CYOEs. Basically when one girl’s form changes the other girl’s does as well. For example someone suggests for girl 8 get blue hair, but nothing for girl 9, so then I give girl 9’s counterpart say red hair. Or for another example someone want devil wings on girl 9, I’ll give 8 angel wings. And for one last example, someone can suggest both girls changes say like a Peach cosplay and a Rosaline cosplay. (Those characters have been used FYI.)
Ok I guess I should introduce the characters. They’re a set of twins, the one with the white hair is called Zariya Shusei, and the one with black hair is called Adreana Shusei. I hope we can get these ladies to the cap in no time. And remember, have fun with it.
this is the stand alone girl:
here are the final forms:
these are the unfinished lines:
is ready to end
here's some unused ideas:
mirrored side ponytails
multiple cosplay possibilities
here's an example of the rules and character page:
Choose Your Own Edit 8 or 9
Brought to you by: Me
This forms’ twin:
4) Hair Color:
1. You can pick ONE feature category from the list above and submit a suggestion of an alteration in the comments below. Example: Give her red eye.
2. The features go one way (can't go back to a previous feature or overwrite a new one completely).
3. No nudity or extreme stuff, such as blood, gore or sexual themes.
4. Everything is subject to me (more rules might be added).
5. THIS CYOE IS SPECIAL, this girl has a twin that must advance at the same time, ether by me countering you or by a twin idea like angel and devil.
6. I reserve the right to veto, move or combine any suggestions.
7. Links to references are suggested.
8. Bust and hips have 4 levels to them. And level 4s can only be used 3 times and I’m very hesitant to use them
9. A route is finished when options 1, 2, 3, 4 and 5 are filled and the form has an accessory and a RP style power and/or purpose.
10. No’s maybe subject to context, reposting elsewhere is ok if the idea is still doable but not on the original location.
11. Ideas can’t be used more than once per CYOE each.
12. Branching is encouraged.
Here is a link to the hub journal: theme ideas, suggestions and notifications can be found there.
Any questions, just ask.
This is based off TheXtra89’s Choose Your Own Edit experiment, both the format and the first 4 rules are his.