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happy pride month 
So to begin with, the lines are pretty messy, a lot of them do not intersect like they should. Other than that its well made! Although, the first character's hair confuses me. Keep up the good artwork and do not at all take this critique too seriously, I am a beginning artist and am not as well as other artists and I am pretty horrible at human anatomy. But I will never ever give up on my art career, I hope you seek the same artistic career as me. So good luck and I hope your future works turn out very well! <333
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Well kek I saw this show up and decided to critique it because I sure do love critiquing.
The clothes look really heavy and rough, like thick winter jackets. I don't know if this was intentional, but I'm saying that because of the way it curves and folds. The flags where the eyes would be would be a nice touch, but they are too far back.
The hands look like mittens for goodness sake- you need more sharp edges on your art to be honest.
I don't want to critique anymore to be honest, there's more I would say but it's hard to critique due to my browser.
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NeverBeenSatisfied Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
My life is complete
DawnTheWaffle Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
The Hamilton fandom confuses me
i mean lams I can see with those letters but
these two have never met before
i am genuinely curious I need answers 
Redpandaseas Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
its just a crack ship among the fandom. I see these two working well with each other based on their personalities and how they would work off each other. But thats just a personally thing of course its not for everyone
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