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I like me better when i'm with you by Redpandaseas I like me better when i'm with you by Redpandaseas
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This is a great piece as you've gotten the shading and lighting right. However, you can work on getting the anatomy right, the positions or the bodies are okay, but the side view of the faces, could be improved. You could also work on making the characters more recognisable by adding traits that people are familiar with. You've also gotten the clothing in that time right, which is quite an achievement, because sometimes people can draw these wrong. You could also work on the fingers, as when fingers wrap around hair, they usually show more than three fingers, and are twined through the hair more.

Great in all, but there are a few tweeks you could make. I'm sure you'll improve!
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August 28, 2017
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