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在写角色独白的时候,特意用到了一些有北方特色的口语和措辞,目的是让人能脑补出某种接近辽吉黑一代的口音。而被绑着的主人公会在故事中操接近南方普通话。南北方语言特点的差别,总给我带来北方更粗犷大条,南方更细腻而有时给人‘装’的印象。在这样一个我偏爱的下克上主题中,感觉这样的文化差异恰好用来增强反差的效果。

独白内容(在正文推出时或有修改):

“怎么样,好闻不?丝袜可能有点磕碜,穿一天了。今天太忙了,为了你还特意加的钟。我看你表情好像不是很舒坦的样子?你知道吗,你老公老喜欢我这双脚了,没够!尤其是我捂了一天那味儿,他每次找我,直接就往地上趴,隔着鞋一闻到那酸味他就能射裤裆里。今天你也好好尝尝,下回亲你老公的时候说不定他也会重新发现你的可爱之处。不过你这张嘴比我脚可臭多了,还不定谁污染谁呢。
我的鞋既然留给你了,你的鞋我穿走你不会介意吧?我看你这有几双看起来好贵的样子,你这么有钱么?扔在办公室里的鞋都是几千块一双的?咱俩号差不多,我就不客气了哈。
你说周末会有保洁阿姨自己开门来打扫这里是吗?那你正好利用这个时间充分体会一下。你老公说你老是拒绝他,他一碰你你就发飙。我看你现在也挺进入状态的呀,小屄里淌水那老多。你就是欠收拾你自己还不知道。看把你厉害的,现在这姿势舒坦不?你这是啥毛病你知道不?我告诉你,俗称叫贱,学名叫受虐狂体质。
摇头?不承认?点头不算摇头算。你就接着装吧,谁舒服谁心里明镜儿似的。你上面这张嘴里是塞着鞋呢,下面那张嘴可老诚实了。那水流的,比你哈喇子流的都多。”

When writing this portion of monologue, I adapted some dialect and slang from north east region of China. The local dialect there has always given me a unique impression that is bald, street wise and antic. Dramatically different from the soft spoken dialects and often timid mannerism from southern China. The 2 polarizing features are given to the two characters, as it helps highlighting the power exchange and authority reversal, therefore exaggerating further the impact of the proper lady's downfall.
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Shockleyq's avatar

hah,难怪读起来浓浓的东北味,啥时候出全本啊?