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Pies on the Window Sill

By RedApropos
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I love drawing comics where friends are jerks to each other. :D
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This is really awesome, but i think your technique is too much simple :S But all of the comic is really awesome and the part of appejack angry is really funny for me! This is a cool comic with i see, is really perfect but don't have any shading and i love de shadings! But is really original and perfect, well this is what i think abaut your comic dear, i think is gonna be better with shadings! Accept what i say (Or not) and you comics is really gonna be better, not i saying is ugly but the sadings make all better.
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I admire your style of drawing on this comic, It looks as if it came from the real comic books that D.W.I. made!
I can literally imagine this in my head as an animation.
The puns were just so... Pinkie pie. (That means that they were funny)
The value and color of the ponies were spot on.
Since i have read many, MANY , comics in my life, I read along with the comic Just fine.The Eyelashes Were long Pretty Though. The style and everything Else of the comic was very original, And i say everything was just great! I give 20/20 stars!

-From, Blaze
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Shoot, I JUST realized a typo. It said
"The Eyelashes Were long Pretty Though"  and it was SUPPOSED to be "The Eyelashes Were Pretty long, though"
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Knowing your art style and skill, this is a top notch comic, the ponies look clean and well done. Originality is very good, although it is the classic window sill theft joke, you gave it a good and funny twist to it. When I first read it I was laughing at Pinkie's bad jokes and that's what got me over. If I were to get someone to join the herd without them becoming something bad that this fandom has made, this would be my first choice to show them. Keep up the good work and hilarious jokes, and make sure to be a little window silly. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=":P (Lick)"/>
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Nice comic! The puns were very awesome, and made the comic VERY hilarious! I saw the preview for this comic, and I couldn't WAIT for it to come out! KNEADless (XD) to say, I think this is a very awesome comic!

I did a voiceover of this in my computer room... XD I should record it the next time I do it again...

I have a suggestion: I think your next comic should have Maud Pie and Pinkie Pie baking a cake for Applejack or something. I guess you could say this idea KNEADS a little work... XD Laters, friend!
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Original recipe makes 1 pie

3/4 cup white sugar

3 tablespoons cornstarch

1/4 teaspoon salt

1/2 teaspoon ground cinnamon

4 cups fresh blueberries

1 recipe pastry for a 9 inch double crust pie

1 tablespoon butter





Directions

Preheat oven to 425 degrees F (220 degrees C).
Mix sugar, cornstarch, salt, and cinnamon, and sprinkle over blueberries.
Line pie dish with one pie crust. Pour berry mixture into the crust, and dot with butter. Cut remaining pastry into 1/2 - 3/4 inch wide strips, and make lattice top. Crimp and flute edges.
Bake pie on lower shelf of oven for about 50 minutes, or until crust is golden brown.
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OMG!! Wow, that was soo funny, ok first, I loved how you made it look. The drawings were perfectly lined, and has super clean lines for har, body and eyes. Not one mistake in colouring or anything. But for originality, I gotta give you a 3.5 because you could've made a different stlye for the eyes, or something, a signiture for yourself. Technique was amazing, don't even have the words to explain it. And impact was also a five. So, you had 18.5/20, woohoo! you had a ! for your comic!! And just for additional commenting I loved the jokes Pinkie made, making it seem like there are more like her, and how as Aj didn't change her expression, Pinkie got more nervouse with sweat coming down, but her beautiful smile never leaving her face!!
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I like the drawings. They all look cute, and there is no mistakes in the vision, accept, if this wasn't on purpose, in the 4th box, Pinkie's hair sticks out of the box, on top, and one of the sides. Which, gave it a 4 and half of a star.

It is original, good puns, and wonderful artwork. The joke is funny, and so is Pinkiepie's wording. You have original ideas, and some classics, and put them in comics! That's what any good artist would do.

The technique is amazing, How you designed it, made it & stuff.

The impact, coloring, beauty, and how good you made it will impact other artists to draw because of you inspiring them.

You're styles are great, the way you make you're comics, and everything. Thanks, for making amazing artwork.

From, <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/i/a/i…" alt=":iconiamberstar:" title="iAmberstar" />
iAmberstar.
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Hi Edwin!

As always, your comics are EXCEEDINGLY funny, and I get so excited to see when your newest comics pop up in my inbox! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

For the sake of this being a critique and not just me fawning over how fabulous your comics are (which I could do, trust me), I will point out some things that I noticed. 1., the first four panels had me confused--I read the 4th panel after the 2nd, then had to back-track because the story didn't make since!
The joke came off really nice and pretty much anypony could understand it! (I don't get how you do this traditionally)
This probably helped none but I can't seem to think of ways that you can even improve! Maybe with practice I'll become a better critique writer, lol.

Keep up the good work!
SilverBuller's avatar
Pinkie, your logic is sound.
TheThunder-Art's avatar
And what did G1 Applejack do when Firefly accidentally crashed into her back when My Little Pony began in the 80s?  She cracked a joke.  Applejack cracked a joke.
DiscordantPrincess's avatar
I don't THINK so, AJ. *throws her out the window* That's for threatening best pony. 
TheThunder-Art's avatar
Oh, did you see that Mickey Mouse version of Nutcracker when John Cleese narrates and throws the toymaker out of the house?
DiscordantPrincess's avatar
YES. That was funny stuff. 
TheThunder-Art's avatar
Your comment reminded me of that. :D
bigonionbean's avatar
So this is how the average person with an average job feels like. An individual stressed beyond limits by the society around her while having to ignore the sheer irritations of reality. Next stop, insanity 💀
rautamiekka's avatar
Well, it's Pinkie Pie, what'd you expect ? :D Rainbow Dash's pranks are great fun compared to what Pinkie can do :D
SongbirdSerenade's avatar
Have to say, I love this. MLP Twilight Sparkle (Nodding) Plz 
zsocreed's avatar
Honesty☺️
ColonelFrontline1152's avatar
Pinkie Pie: 0_0 "Ohhhhh Crap"
SilverSonglicious's avatar
OOooh! Pinkie pie just got burned! or cooked
namiichu's avatar
Silly AJ; Pinkie's already a Pie!
**Crickets chirp**
I'll leave...I'm sorry...
xD?
BurtonLovr's avatar
Oh my god this is gold
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