Maybe Later, Spike -2

Once again, this review is the same as the first, but the vision is different.

VISION:This took more of a comedic step rather than a serious step, and that was a step into a good direction, I got more of a laugh rather than a chuckle in this one compared to the other.

OVERALL RATING:4.5 Stars... still.

Was there something wrong with my review(s) that you found wrong, please inform me! I would love to get more experience as a reviewer! Thank you for listening to my critique! And keep in mind that this is MY opinion, if you do not like what I say here, that is perfectly fine, but don't send me hate comments please.

What about replacing the "grrr" in the last panel for a "twitch"?

Let's go bowling!

rating= i don't get it


   

This time she better listen to Spike. XD

Yeah...I think she's busy Spike.

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Fuckin' biiiiiitch.

-*COUCH*BI-TCH**COUCH*

Spike, you should know better than to interrupt Twi's studying for anything less than the end of the world.

DIE SPIKE.

I know that feel Spike

This reminds me of me and my brother sometimes.

Do you wanna build a snooooooooooowman?

Pretty much me and my brother nowadays...

Spike don't kindly ta maybe laters. Not even future Spike likes dat!

If this continues, she might throw the book at Spike!! 0m0

So, I guess I'll have to go to bed now?
Maybe later, Spike.
YESSS!

Twilight's a jack-a$$, no offense Cranky Doodle Donkey.

And then she beats him.

you finished the second part , FINALY!