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An Unexpected Visitor

She'll have to live the rest of her life knowing that everyone will think she's crazy if she ever told anyone.

I'm drawing a lot of Twilight comics.
Because I like Twilight a lot.

This is based off something Bill Murray did.

-------------PLEASE NOTE, COMMENTERS--------

No, it was not Discord disguised as Star Swirl.
It wasn't ANYONE disguised as Star Swirl.
It was ACTUALLY Star Swirl.

If there was a legitimate explanation to how this happened, it would be infinitely less funny. Otherwise, I would have given an explanation.

Got it? Actually Star Swirl.

...I really hope he gets introduced in the show...
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staswirl is a jerk all i got to say (to fill the 100 word minimum)i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i watch asdf move-es
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Vision - Pretty good, I really enjoyed it. You are definitely getting the point across to your viewers.

Originality - Decent, I have seen a lot of other comic like style art like this, but overall it is all your own <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>.

Technique - Flawless, it looks amazing in my opinion, there isn't anything that I would change to it. It is visually appealing to the eye, and I'm a pretty harsh critic, so you did a fabulous job.

Impact - This is pretty self explanatory, your watchers seemed to like it, and I would love to see more stuff like this in the future, no matter what fandom it comes from.
RedApropos's avatar
Yay! I haven't read a critique so fulfilling in a while. :D
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AWESOME! I like how you had Star Swirl the Bearded wand Twilight just gawking over him. But it would be nice if you added some crazy thought of the old paranoia Twilight Sparkle. I miss the old Twi.
Dat face tho. She was just flabbergasted and such. It would have been hilarious if she had a small nosebleed.
And by the way, what did cause the possible hallucination? Was it Discord or a troll?
I did not mean to be mean, it's my first critique ever.
One of you best pieces RedApropos, really.
His mouth was not moving, creepy as f*** though.
NinjaYoshi585's avatar
It was the real star swirl
My only explanation is time travel...
MidnightFire1222's avatar
And we never had any idea he actually was a jerk at the start.
DarkWarrior44's avatar
Well if you watch season 7 we figure out the he really is
Bandicoot-Sauce's avatar
'Avoiding Stupid Fanon'

If a book of that title has to be featured WITHIN an example of the fanon, it's already too late. Lol!
spamer921's avatar
i knew it that was familiar;i heard/see that joke first on this fairy odd parents episode
Me if I could time travel
CharlestheComicArtis's avatar
was this from something because I feel like this was from something
ApparentlyImStupid's avatar
why couldnt twilight sparklefart just punch that retard or something
This actually seems in character for Star Swirl.
TamaraOfTammyland's avatar
ok, that was hilarious
turns out you were right
MaddyThePilot2413's avatar
I need the book she was reading. 'Avoiding Stupid Fanon' lol. Also, good job.
Khiloh's avatar
nooo rainbow dash is better
kimseohyung's avatar
r.i.p. germany.
samawolf's avatar
you got your wish
Selvira's avatar
And then Season 7 ended. This comic is now plausible. And totally believable.
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