The way it is drawn is perfect, because I recognized it... immediatly (without reading the title ) ! But the impact would be great if you have considered that awfull room where we had no way to escape (I curse you, electric tentacles !!!). The monster is here, but I miss the danger, the sweltering apperance of this creature. IT IS A BOSS ! And I hated it when I had to encounter it the first time. This feeling is missing here. (sorry for my bad english)
On the other hand, I love the way you emphasize the electric side of this ... cruel monster, the places we had to hit. I want to play again ! (I miss you, Ocarina of the time!)
Thank you for reminding me of this awesome part of my childhood.