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this is just half written lines of poetry..,
forgive me i just want to get some shit off my chest.

ミ☆


i. if i had to pick, i think it would be your eyes
loving someone else would be easier:
not because you are hard to
but rather because there are too many things
to fall in love with
with you
(how am i supposed to pick one?)

ii. i've figured out who i want you to be, though
you are many things to me-
maybe that's why you mean the most.

iii. a poem best served with the smashing of piano keys
a haiku about when i figured my friend liked you:

FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK
SHIT FUCK MOTHERFUCKER FUCK
SON OF A BITCH FUCK

iv. i can't seem to let go of my one liners
that was sometime ago.
sometimes i even let myself think i've forgotten how to adore you.
yesterday i even forgot i dreamt about you.
but today, i remember, i turn around, and-- 
-oh, fuck, there you are.

will the thought of you please, please leave me alone?


v. self sacrifice can be cowardice
i'd let you go in a heartbeat:
is that good?
(if it helps, i'd still look at you during
the spaces in between words.
see, i'd do anything to see that smile
even if it's not for myself.

would you regard me, for that at least?)

vi. goodbye;
see you-
tommorow? probably.
forever? hopefully. 


vii. it's easier saying it to myself than to you.
this is in case i don't get to say it-
well, to your face, that is-
and in case can't let the words fall from my lips-
i love you.



ミ☆
FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!! FUCK OFF!!!!!!!!!!
pvlimpsest FUCK!!!!!! SHIT!!!!! IM GONNA ACTUALLY COMBUST HE'S SO CUTE
if u read this pls drop a comment i need validation bc this is original writing

can u believe this all belongs to me
c) me
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Im-P-ulse Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
God, unrequited love can be such a pain.
But I loved this! I felt this on a spiritual level :') It's all too real.
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readyaimfireaway Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
aw, thank you!!!
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starrymayflower Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2016
THAT HAIKU DOE :^))
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readyaimfireaway Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
(dabs) i put all my feelings into that haiku
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lachremorse Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016
wowwow!! i wouldn't mind seeing more of your original writing bc i like this! a lot!
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readyaimfireaway Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
"original work" i have so many prompts just not the time to write for my ocs :'^ )

thank u tho!!
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flowerknees Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016
I love this omg
this is so relatable ahhhhhh

that haiku got me like-
you're words sound so smooth, and the details mix in well
ur so wonderful and talented!!!
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readyaimfireaway Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
?!!! THANK U SM FOR ALL THE KIND WORDS!!
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flowerknees Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017
no prob!!!! u rlly deserve it <33
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pvlimpsest Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I'M SCREECHING BC THIS--

THE HAIKU GOT ME ROLLING LMAO (i remember when you told me about the friend i almost threw my phone across the room bc i was like 'OOOHH BOI THERE'S COMPETITION NOW')

okay but real talk these are all rlly good like wow i don't know how you make your cheesy feelings into words so well but good on you 

i especially liked number six like hOLY i love it
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readyaimfireaway Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
binch im so late im sorry--

BUT YES!!! THANK YOU!!!! i have thus far moved onto better and gayer things!!!! dont catch feelings they're the worst

in an interesting turn of events, the close friend who liked my crush is now dating another close friend who's a girl. wlw, in my pasty ass white privilege school!!!! im so happy honestly
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lunarosej Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Student Writer
that haiku omg bless
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DiamondMusicNotes Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
B O I
im critgn i love this
i also love the "FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK
SHIT FUCK MOTHERFUCKER FUCK
SON OF A BITCH FUCK" haiku
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