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©Randall Hobbet
Models: Femina & Dasha
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:iconpronikon:
This shot is nice on many levels. From a print / tone perspective, it's almost perfect. The right side of the rock she is on is just a bit hot, but not so bright that it's distracting.

Both of the poses are very nice as they accent the curves of the models and flattering to them. The overall exposure is perfect, a balance of shadows on the front model with a hint of highlight on her hip and breasts.

If I had to pick something to improve upon, and it's a not that bad... but the model in back, her left shoulder blade looks a bit odd (position of it) compared to the rest of the seamless skin. If her hair were longer, it could have hidden it.

Overall this shot screams of artsy, elegant nude in nature that had to have been thought out ahead of time with some planning.

Well Done. -Mark
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JCC5 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2018  Professional Artist
Wow superb models and setting!
My only comment would be the vertical lines. The backdrop and the models create great upward eye movement but I would move the front model or the position of the camera a bit to the viewers right. The lovely hipline of the fore model covers the rear model and my sense of view would be to have a tiny  vertical air space to create more vertical integrity and parallel lines. It is nigh on a perfect photo regardless of that. A very intriguing mood is created.
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mecengineer Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018
amazing
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SkatingJesus Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018
A great picture, and two really gorgeous models!
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Collinder Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Well done the two ladies blend in fine with the sand stone formation -all quite natural.
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Inversioned Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2018
The models are really reflective of and one with their surroundings. Beautifully composed and shot. (Feminism and Dasha are clearly fearless.)
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Gargapitics Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2018
The girl in the rear says nothing to me, but there is no mistake I could find. Great job!
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popandroid Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2018
awesome
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LETMESEEBEUTY Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2018
I love naked women in the great outdoors 
Thanks for sharing the gorgeous fun dreams 
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kramus Featured By Owner Edited Oct 19, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They are posed, shot and lit beautifully - a truly gorgeous palette. Not being a photographer, and only because a critique was asked ... I'm thinking an image taken slightly closer through the foreground opening stone framing the models would have allowed a bit more separation of their forms while maintaining that awesome, slightly cooler and less focussed negative space framing them.  Maybe that tighter shot would create a tad more separation between the curves of the foreground model's hip/thigh line and the complex counter recurve of the rear models leg/belly/torso/arm line? There is a lot of close foreground rock wall for what I'm seeing as the main elements. Would a tighter shot have added more curved interplay between the models while allowing your final overall cropping to remain proportionally close to this one?
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docjim10 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2018
-I think I might have centered the focus more on the model in the background
the golden rule might have applied a bit better and the center of the viewers attention would have immediately been drawn up and to the left
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:iconilovechallenges:
this is beautiful
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Observer14 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2018  Professional Traditional Artist
wow... love the warmth of the stone as it mirrors the warm skin tones, and even the almost organic shapes of the rock. They work together beautifully - Femina, Dasha and the warm lines of the stone.
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segura2112 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Wow!!! Thank You
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n-l-e Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
very nice
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MichaelCPhotography Featured By Owner Edited Oct 17, 2018   Photographer
Beautiful... well done!  Beautiful models too!
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Gymnophile Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Not only are the women exquisitely beautiful, also the rock color harmonizes with their skin color.  A perfect photo!
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bumpyride Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2018
Truly exceptional work all around. Thanks!
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DDGrafix Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2018  Professional General Artist
So graceful!
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Bhr3730lhp Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2018
Outstanding composition, gorgeous colors .
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nikonwaddy Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2018
I am in awe of the art and form here. Beautiful models performing at top shelf level. Lighting well captured. It will be a fav....Also pretty impressed you had a D850 in Aug of 17..
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Vibra-Lynx Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2018  Professional Photographer
I've been to the slot canyons when I lived in Arizona of myself and they're such beautiful places for doing any type of artwork and this is above exception and quite  beautiful
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untuox Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2018
Excelent Randall!
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NFGphoto Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2018  Professional Photographer
Wow!  
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