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Sieger Hartgers, Alex Ross, Frank Frazzetta, Théodore Géricault, William Turner, Artemisia Gentileschi, Francisco Goya
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Batman Begins + Dark Knight = best movie ever
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Breaking Bad, Daily Show, Ninja warrior, Young Justice
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1st: Queen 2nd: Beatles 3rd: Cake
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kingdom come, Ender's Game, Johnny Got his Gun
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Dalton Trumbo, Edgar Allen Poe, Rachael Brown
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Uncharted 2
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PS3 and sega genisis
Tools of the Trade
Photoshop, graphite, and a pretty face
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art, anime, Magic: the gathering, video games

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Thanks so much for taking the time to crit. 
I won't be revisiting this piece, as it's a published work. I think your note about focus on the action is spot on for a more successful piece, though it would not have worked with the specific description I was given for this piece, which wanted a focus on both the environment and the action. 
Fire Environment
Thank you so much for the crit!
Life Environment
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You're far too kind. 
Fire Knight
commented on SATYR 2 by
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

There is one major flaw in this piece, which is the far leg of the satyr. It's missing a segment, which looks strange even without the comparison of the other leg, but even more so with it. The line you currently have with the leg is good for moving the eye around the page, so keep that in mind if and when you add the appropriate section to the leg. Also, the upper portion of that leg, near the arm, is simultaneously in front and behind the arm. adding some fur in front of the arm will fix that easily.
These are the only major flaws though, and I feel the image is extremely successful otherwise. Great job!

(also, I apologize for posting this in the normal comments first. I don't critique on DA often, and didn't know I needed to click the "Write a crit" button)
SATYR 2