Chapter 9; Gods (Part 2)
Rachel could not get Willow off her mind all day. No one else would make the connection because the thought of a guy turning into a girl was unheard of. But for Rachel, she knew it was possible, she’d been there. Layering away the feminine features of Willow, all Rachel kept coming up with was William. The thing that bugged Rachel the most was that Willow didn’t act anything like William.
“You look troubled,” Evan said as he walked past Rachel in their Statistics class.
Rachel looked up at Evan, her eyes lingering on him for a second. A brain like his would be more than helpful in figurin
Panel 1 (row 1, left)
Travis looks a bit surprised, Rachel looks defeated
Travis: R-really? you will? cool!
Panel 2 (row 1, right)
Travis looks to be pondering excitedly, Rachel looks up a bit worried
Travis: Now, I've been thinking about what kind of costumes me and my date could wear to the dance, and there's lots of good ones, but I want your opinion before we settle on one.
Panel 3 (row 2, full row)
Mostly head shots of Rachel and Travis with a whole bunch of bubbles of Travis and Rachel in different costuems float above.
"Prince Charming and Snow White?"
"Superman and Supergirl?"
just found the comic today, and read through it all, and it is the best comic i've ever read. I'm sad that it isn't continuing on as a comic, but i'll have to say thank you, for giving me the best reading experience i've ever had. You've done a great job. Thanks for making my day just that bit better. I hope one day that this continues, because it is the best. I would challenge anyone to find a comic better than this. It's great, and thanks for giving me a chance to see how great a comic can be.
It is just a great story, it for some reason feels like it could be real, nothing too mad has happened, and everyone is responding normally to their personality. I also may relate to ryan a bit because his friend and family seem a lot like mine, but i haven't been changed into a girl, but my friend Bradly got me to go to the woods at night to find treasure, long story short, when ended up running home being chased by a mad farmer shooting at us, saying something about us stealing his eggs, which i didn't do (but my friend on the other hand, less said the better).
I take pride in being able to create realistic characters and making very believable dialogue. If I weren't so tied up with work which makes it hard to even get AG done, I've got a few other story ideas is love to start developing as well.
I'd love to see AG done and what ever other story ideas you come up with.
After have a think, i'm going not going to any abandoned houses with Bradly anytime soon, or possibly ever. Which lucky for me, there none in my local area. If anyone in my area is reading this please don't abandon your house and create a roomer about treasure, also mad scientists please don't use said house if it does happen for experimenting on the idiot friend and his other much smarter friend who realistically only came along to stop the other from hurting himself (even though the smart one out of the two seems to always come worse off), for my manhood, please can the said set of events not happen, but if this does happen can i steal the name Rachel Hawke (it just sounds like a really cool name).