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ACLC114Professional Traditional Artist
Few stories can keep fresh in my memory and stay interesting to me after much of a hiatus. I remember reading chapters of New Girl as they came out and for whatever reason it popped back into my head after spending years away from the fandom as a whole. I love this story and still want to see it finished. You've created an amazing world here and I know a lot of people think it deserves your finale.
Meagan62603's avatar
I love this so much! When's the next chapter going to be done because I want to read it so badly. I can't wait. Awesome job on this. Best Appledash Fanfiction I've ever read.😊
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RiniginiannaHobbyist Digital Artist
when's the next chapter?
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duffman10Hobbyist General Artist
Bizarre Love Triangle...........I like that song.
LoveAppleDash's avatar
I looove your storyy!!! This is amazing!

And to be honest, I just made this account to read your awesome fanfiction :)

I really hope you're going to update soon
^-^ ♥♥
LoveAppleDash's avatar
Ommgggg I can't wait for the next chapterrr!!!!

I hope you're going to update soon :3 ♥
sk8boardzer's avatar
If you don't update soon I'M GANNA DIEEYYE!!!!
Dashhole's avatar
my friend and i have been keeping tabs on this story for a while, and we both love it so much. its crazy amazing, right down to the last detail. as far as appledash fanfics, or even mlp fics in general, this is by far the best i've ever read. at first, i found this on fimfiction.net, but when there werent anymore chapters there, i came to deviantart. this story is so good, it's the reason i MADE a deviantart. this account was created for the sole purpose of reading your story.
anyway, i can totally see exactly how much you've put into all these chapters, and although i'm pretty disappointed that the next chapter still isnt up, i respect as a fellow author that it can be hard to finish a chapter quickly AND make it good AND not piss off your awaiting readers for making them wait AND juggle whatever else may be going on in your life, as well as your motivation or lack thereof to finish a story or chapter. the point of my long rambling is that i get it, and that while i really hope you finish this as soon as is possible for you, feel free to take the time you need. after all, you can't rush perfection, and story is sure as hell perfection.
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Big-Brother84Hobbyist Writer
Out of curiosity, will this ever be finished? It's been over a year, which I know isn't actually that long, but I kind of wish I had some closure.
It's bad enough gravekeeper never finished "The Ballad of Twilight Sparkle", I don't want to add another forsaken story added to the list.
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Doglover1659Hobbyist General Artist
I've reread this story three times now and every time, I laugh or tear up and get attached to the characters all over again. This is an amazing story and you've managed to capture the charcter's quirks while adding your own spin so perfectly. I anxiously await the next chapter. Until then, I'll keep rereading cx
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Thank you so much! This comment really made my day! 
CMsrataN's avatar
I really love your work, can't wait for you to get the inspiration for the next chapter and thank you for taking your time and not rush it.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter and once again, thank you so much for all the work put into this.
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Awh thank you!! :D first person to thank me and not yell at me for the delay. 
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stormtwister5768Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Srsly, it's almost been a year. You need to finish that chapter. Here's some motivation 

RAINBOW LA slap Kitty Dance Taiga and Minori (I miss you hug) [V1] Twilight Sparkle HI, GIRLS. animated icon cat face 
Rayna-Crazy's avatar
wow....that is amazing!! hahaha best motivation ever~ ;)
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stormtwister5768Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Since I am here to annoy you, how much of the next chapter have you finished? I struggle with the exact same problem in motivation to continue my stories, I have like 20 half finished chapters on my compute.
Rayna-Crazy's avatar
It will....



but by all means until it does go for it and write your own ending.
Chihuahuapie's avatar
Where is chapter fourteen! So annoyed!! Been waiting for six months now!!!
Rayna-Crazy's avatar
Some have been waiting longer....



it will continue 

when I get the motivation, I don't want to half ass the last couple chapters just to get it done.
Chihuahuapie's avatar
Honestly with an author at your level I don't think that's possible. Seriously, I'm dieing, at least tell me what happens so I can sleep again!
Spocins01's avatar
to be honest I'm writing a story too and I lost my motivation few times but reading comments that people love my peace of #### ;DD [sry] I get a little motivation so ... just trying to help :D
Chihuahuapie's avatar
Your an author what are you writing?
Spocins01's avatar
i wouldn't say im an author but im writing a humnized Appledash fanfic - Anger Can Hurt 
you can check it on my DA profile or in this link :D www.fimfiction.net/story/18217…
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