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Kurt Von Hirsch appeared to be a young Prussian man in his 20’s. Living around 1870’s - 1940’s. But don’t let his charming humanoid figure fool you. He’s actually an ancient creature from greater beyond.



He was defined to be an ancient inhuman, immortal, and universe-destroying entity that predates time and space. disregard for the natural laws of the universe as we understand him.

Appearance

Kurt Von Hirsch cosmic form

True form

uncertain shape, but appears to be layers of fibers stacking up in a ball. On the surface area, stood long and thin 2 tails tentacles waving around and growing further. The numbers of tentacles are uncountable as they multiply every second. There are also moving holes everywhere as they represent the universes he consumed.

Human form

A young caucasian man in his 20’s with light blue eyes and golden blond hair. His appearance resembles a German man. He is 218 cm. tall (7'2). Has a 10 inches penis with small bumps on the sides and tiny tentacles inside coming from the hole. He is able to speak High German fluently. But still struggles with Bavarian dialect and Low German.

Kurt always appears wearing a Pickelhaube and Prussian military uniform. But during WW1, He put a cover on his Pickelhaube and changed into a 1914 German infantry uniform. There’s always an impossible shadow on his face no matter which direction the light is coming from. The shadow covers all of his face, leaving only 1 eye visible. His face can be fully visible when he’s in a good mood. Showing a long shaped smooth face with small stubbles. The wound on his leg in WW1 told us that his human body can be harmed. But killing his human body will not kill his consciousness. He will just find a new human body to replace the old one.

Behavior

True form

Hostile, reckless, easily distracted, will consume everything in its way, lonely and upset about it, curious about everything around him

Human form

  1. To everyone else : Arrogant, quiet, hostile to commoners, short tempered, very stubborn, wants to be left alone most of the time, enjoys collecting Pickelhaube and spending time with his wife, and will insult you for no good reason

  2. To his wife, The Witch (Astenia Anyushka) : easily annoyed, very protective, touch starve, very touchy with her body, can sometimes be genuinely nice to her, curious, doesn’t mind her messing with him, scared of her, submissive, easily flustered, likes to annoy her

  3. To his brothers : He doesn’t mind their presence. But rather not interact with them if possible

Cosmic life



Early cosmic life

Kurt hates the sun and every shining star imaginable. As the stars were nebulae that condensed into a very thick mass of gas with nuclear fusion happening later. Something that he once was, a powerful colorful fog in space. But the energy from the chemical reaction inside him was too much. It not only turned him into a star, but further. The fusion kept happening until he became an enormous carbon mass. The majority of his body was no longer gas but mass, with nuclear reactions happening inside his core non-stop. The mass part stayed but the burning part still consumed him bit by bit. He needed to consume other space mass to exist or else he’ll be eaten from inside. But no matter how much he feeds the black holes inside his body, it never gets satisfied.

Due to the diversity of elements of his floating body, he gained sentience from the lesser being developing on the surface. The same way earth might have its own mind after humans develop a program to translate nature’s waves that could explain every phenomenon on the planet. But the civilisation on Kurt’s surface didn’t make it. Leaving Kurt a sentient planet floating aimlessly for centuries and the next million years.

Late cosmic life

Being able to feel. The very first feeling he ever felt was anger. He was upset and disappointed by the fact that he couldn’t be a star. He looked back and viewed himself as a lonely failure. A failed star. With nothing better to do, he only eats and eats more, just that he could be the most powerful being ever to exist. He traveled far and starved until he reached the solar system. Which is nothing but a speck of dust to him. But one thing caught his attention and it will change his life for as long as he remains. That was the day he discovered earth and its culture.

Kurt arrived near the earth’s orbital radius around 1800 BC, observing the human silently like a curious child. He started to intervene in 1870 in the Franco-Prussian war. It was the day he watched a young soldier die. That young Prussian man was from a noble family called The Von Hirsch family. And as the man took his last breaths, Kurt transferred his consciousness into the dying body of the dying soldier, bringing him back to life by sheer determination. And it will be Kurt’s very beginning on this planet as its population.

Human life



Early human life

The human body he possessed was already weak and in agonizing pain. Everything was overwhelming as the pain from the shrapnel wound overtook him in a matter of a minute. But through the process of getting used to the fragile mortal body he just got, he can feel something else too. Warmth from his own blood, stinging aroma of gunpowder, and every gunshot fired. It was supposed to be unpleasant yet he enjoyed it. This is what being alive feels like. but that’s barely a start for a human life. He had to learn a lot about these creature’s culture.

After the war ended, he stayed and recovered slowly in a small town before returning back home, where the original Kurt Von Hirsch was supposed to be. He had taken a dead man’s place and he’s willing to do whatever it takes to fulfill the role.

At first his family and friends thought the concussion had messed with his memory and the ability to show emotions. The new Kurt observed and took notes of what people viewed the old Kurt was like. From just basic family background to personal details, adopting them is like wearing a mask. He didn’t know how human hierarchy works or why humans have preferred items or preferences in lifestyle. His curious nature made the learning process faster than an average human could do in decades. He understands how politics and war works by the time he got out of the foreign land. Learning language was tricky but he proceeded to communicate fluently in no time. And in just a year, he aced the basis of the human way of living.

Finally being able to function as a normal man in society, Kurt still faces one of the hardest obstacles to get over. To feel genuine emotions. He only understands anger and irritation but not admiration. The easiest thing for him to be fond of was his own country, Prussia. Followed by his human appearance and the noble title his family holds. The power those things brought made him feel accepted. But it was not enough since none can actually be claimed as truly his. He can get anything he wants but they still belong to the original Kurt.

He later learned that he had 3 younger brothers at home when he got back. Each with different preferences and personality. But they all described the original Kurt Von Hirsch to be a hard working man. A serious graceful nobleman with pride and values dignity and honor over anything. He’s not interested in finding a spouse and only focused on keeping the Von Hirsch title sacred as the first day his ancestor was granted a baron title. The rest of the brothers find the original Kurt to be cold and distant due to the age gap and different goals. Yet he was still their family and they still love the way he made the family look.

The Von Hirsch family

The origin of the family could be traced back to ancient Germany. But in 1871, the alive and known noble members of the Von Hirsch family were Erhard Von Hirsch, the father of 4 sons and a proud commander of the Prussian army. He was known to be charismatic and warm when talking with fellow noblemen or his comrades. But known to be brave and prideful in the army. His wife, Frieda Von Hirsch, was only a domestic lady. Traditional and reserved was the perfect way of describing her. After all her children are grown up, she tends to spend most of her time in her own room, reading with a cup of warm tea and cake by her side.

But the most well recognisable members of the Von Hirsch family couldn’t be anyone but the 4 brothers. With Kurt, Konrad, Kessler, and Klaus as the original cast. We will talk about the original Kurt Von Hirsch more later after a brief description of the rest of the brothers, first starting with the second oldest brother Konrad Von Hirsch. Konrad was born in 1846. He studied science and made a living out of it by the age 25. He was the polite and introverted kind like his mother. A big contrast to Kessler Von Hirsch, the third brother. Who was talkative and extroverted like his father. With only a difference in career path. Kessler was born in 1847 and became an attorney. By the age 24 in the year 1871, he did show a lot of interest in pursuing his education in politics and language. A truly diligent and hard working man just like Konrad with a bit of a party animal in the mix. His father did not expect him to settle down and get married first for certain. Last but not least we have to mention Klaus Von Hirsch. A truly ordinary man with no outstanding quality. Born later in 1850, Klaus desired to be a full time poet or a writer. He is neither hard working nor prideful like the rest of the family. But more of slow, soft spoken, and sensitive. Yet he became one of the most important factors in Kurt Von Hirsch’s love life.

Late human life

As the cosmic being took his time to adjust in the high class society, suddenly the father decided to introduce everyone with one of the most exotic and unusual human beings into the house.

Either Kurt never cared enough to pay attention to her presence before or she just decided to interact with him one day. As mentioned before, the original Kurt was never interested in romance. So does the new Kurt. But that’s because he never understands what a romantic relationship is. Since the day he arrived as human, the only thing he was taught to admire was power and the determination to fight for honor. Money, fortune, fame. He thought that was all he needed to be happy as a mere human. But observing his youngest brother taught him that “love” can be strong enough to make a man sacrifice everything he has for a loved one.

Klaus’s beloved painter

Her name was Astenia Anyushka. A young girl around Klaus’s age from a land far away in the north sea. Lavidennia was her home country. A small island above the Netherlands with their own little merchant culture. She has long silky black hair with porcelain white skin. But the striking ruby eyes were what caught every man’s attention. They weren’t just hazel or light brown. Astenia’s eyes were bright ruby red. From what the brothers have told Kurt, she couldn’t even speak German when she arrived the first several months. She was in a traditional dress with a large set of oil painting kit. From 1868 to the start of 1869, she would stay in a cheap motel at night and went down to paint by the cafe everyday. Fortunately, her paintings were noticed by many upper class Prussians. Those people bought her painting and kept her fed for a while. But still not enough for her to get a comfortable life.

On a busy night in 1869. She was spotted outside the cafe by drunken Erhard Von Hirsch with his commander friends. He was just back from a mission, his uniform was far from neat. But at the very unexpected moment, he stopped his friends and sat down right in front of the foreign painter, almost scaring her away. But with half of the consciousness left, the baron ordered her to paint him right there for his own amusement.

It took her a few hours to finish everything in a hurry as she, herself, was also concerned for her own safety. But to her surprise, the general took a look at her sketch in a pleased manner, shoving a hefty amount of money into her hand before leaving with the picture that wasn’t even dry yet. By the sunrise, the baron reached his mansion, finally sobering up he noticed that the painting was ruined by the way he carried it back last night. So he needed it done again by the same artist. He went back to the cafe and offered to go paint the whole family at his mansion. She accepted his request and by the same week she arrived at Von Hirsch’s place. The first person Astenia saw was the original Kurt, leaving the gate to somewhere else. As he was in a hurry and thought art was a useless thing, he paid no mind to her and left without a proper greeting. But not with the other brothers who welcomed her in a warm manner.

She was introduced to the family as their new personal painter. Starting her job with the youngest brother, Klaus. Whom she quickly grew fond of. Followed by Kurt, Konrad, and Kessler. But with Klaus, she felt like it’s more than just a job. She felt comfortable with him. The painting may have finished but they still spend their time together to the point they finally became a couple. The rest of the brothers were happy for their little sibling, including the original Kurt who wasn’t that fond of the painter at first but still torelates her. The original Kurt was quite concerned about war during her arrival but kept it to himself. On random occasions he can show his gratitude to her by tipping way too much for a painting. But the way he talked to her made she think he hated her.

But the truth is he just didn’t know how to talk to a girl.

The original Kurt Von Hirsch left for war in the early 1870. His human body was supposed to be dead if the cosmic entity didn’t intervene. But in the mansion, the rest of the brothers seemed fine. They didn’t have to serve since their dad is a powerful man. And that left Klaus and his new girlfriend to spend a lot of time together.

By the mid of 1871, they had suggested an idea of marriage to Erhard Von Hirsch. He seemed delighted and offered to give most of the family fortune to the first son that got married. And in their tradition, The older brother will get to choose the maiden to wed first. And with human decency, they had a little practice where Astenia went around the room and asked the oldest to youngest son if they wanted to marry her. Konrad and Kessler obviously denied so Klaus can have his girlfriend turned into a wife. But who would have thought Kurt Von Hirsch came back home, with human memory still in his mind he made the worst decision ever.

Everyone thought he’s dead. But little did they know that’s no longer their brother but a husk of him controlled by an entity. He wasn’t aware that Klaus got a girlfriend that he was going to marry. To his alien brain he was curious as to why a man with noble title and such fame like Klaus would date an ordinary girl instead of taking a chance with another noble. What makes her so special to the point a man is willing to sacrifice the world for a day with her. Even in his former human memory he had never seen a smile this big. But he knows he must have it. He’s an outer world being, powerful and mighty, a mere human like Klaus doesn’t deserve that kind of happiness. Kurt does. So Kurt asked Astenia to marry him.

A forced marriage

Erhard Von Hirsch, surprised and conflicted, looked at the pride and joy of his family. The oldest son who went to war and checked every box on being the perfect son, Kurt. The father asked Kurt to make sure again if he doesn’t want to marry a noble lady instead. And to Kurt’s stubbornness, he said no. Which made Erhard dragged Klaus to another room for a discussion. He asked Klaus to give up his girlfriend to his brother and maybe he could let Klaus be a successful writer instead. To Erhard Von Hirsch, he definitely has a favorite child. And it’s Kurt. So if he died and had to give everything to his children, Kurt would have most of his belongings. Unlike Klaus who is a loser in his eyes. And since the first son that got married will receive a hefty amount of his treasures. He wants Kurt to be the one who gets it.

Klaus had no choice. It might seem like he had but he didn’t. Even if he insists on marrying Astenia, his dad wouldn’t allow it due to favoritism and he might even cut Klaus out of his family. So he had to let his brother marry his girlfriend.

As soon as the bad news arrived, Astenia was furious. She will not agree to marry a man she didn’t love. But if she declines the offer she might as well also get fired and have to live with unstable income by the cafe again. So she agreed to marry Kurt. She barely knew Kurt Von Hirsch, the original one before the war. And he made a bad first impression. But she thought maybe she could divorce this guy after the father of the Von Hirsch family dies and be with her boyfriend again.

On the wedding day, every important figure was invited to the celebration. This made the divorce process harder since the rumor will definitely spread faster than wildfire. So both Astenia and Klaus were drinking away their feelings the whole ceremony. In contrast to Kurt and the other guests who were joyous and happy for the young man to finally continue the bloodline.

Enemies to lovers

No matter how much Kurt showers his new wife with gifts, she just wouldn’t care. Though her relationship with Klaus slowly dies down, the progress in his relationship with her is not good either. It took him a whole month for her to agree to sleep on the same bed as his and another to make her talk to him. And as Kurt did his research on human behavior, he thought telling her his secret might get her to lower her guard down and open up to him. So on a quiet night, he told the wife that lay on his bed, facing away in the most calming voice ever. He knew she’s still awake so he started telling her about the stars and how he became the man he is today. After knowing she’s married to an alien, Astenia silently freaked out. She tried to stay calm and told him to stop joking. So guess what…he showed her his tentacles and whatever bullshit miracle he can do. And he begged her not to tell anyone.

Indeed, Astenia kept it a secret and pretends to open up by saying she’s actually a witch from Lavidennia (She was being sarcastic but he actually believes it). They slowly grew closer like enemies to lovers. Kurt finally knew why Klaus was willing to trade anything for her. But he also realized she’s a mere mortal. And she will die one day.

She’s the one

Kurt was devastated but the fact that she may not live to see the end of the world with him. He wants her to be able to have a body that could stay with him forever. And with the ability to travel between dimensions, he started searching for a universe that has a technology advanced enough to make her immortal. But come on, it was 1914. He got drafted again and no one suspected a 70 years old man to look like a 20 years old man? So basically, Kurt joined the great war for fun. Which was concerning for his wife but she knew he can’t die so she just let him go. In the war, he hunts a British soldier called Leo Winchester for fun too. But that will cause him big trouble later.

To Kurt’s luck, he found a universe where time traveling and anti-aging technology exist. But the same universe with the Trench Angel exists too. She was sent to help soldiers with medical stuff, but also a time traveling police. She noticed the abnormality in the timeline and started searching for the cause. Because she thought it was just another illegal time traveler and not a cosmic entity. So the Trench Angel began her hunt. But Kurt is not stupid, he knew someone was after him so every time he senses the presence of the Trench Angel, he just goes back to his original universe and disappears from her radar. And it goes like this til 1918.

Offsprings

ROTS creatures : Tentacles

The tentacles

As Erhard Von Hirsch wishes, Kurt and Astenia had a child together. And it’s not a human, obviously. Their child was a giant deep red sphere of flesh with mouths full of sharp teeth all over its body and long tendrils for limbs. It doesn’t even have a name and Kurt didn’t care enough to feed it so he sent it to Estonia. And Johann Kriez, a concentration camp chief had to deal with it in 1943 to 1944 when the Väine concentration came to an end.

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The Order of the Future is a free state in Russian land living as an oligarchy government, having its own set of laws with the goal to abolish the world’s original governing system. It started off as a mercenary company led by Leon Levatius, the founder and current leader. After it grew bigger, Leon sorted his army into 10 main brigades, each led by one elite general. After he conquered Europe the Order of the future is considered an empire.

During Leon’s regime, he had picked 10 talented commanders to be the empire’s elite general.



Current 10 elite generals

  1. Yaroslav Kirillovich Komarov - from Russia

  2. Johannes Ansgar Friedrich Wagner - from East Germany

  3. Alena Artyomova Yurkova - from Beralus

  4. Anatol Artyomovich Yurkov - from Beralus

  5. Arvo Jõgi - from Estonia

  6. Sasha Yarikovich Kuznetsov - from Russia

  7. Sean Matthew Deerhill - from USA

  8. (will update soon)



Flag meaning

The bird symbolizes old power, normally birds, especially eagles resemble national animals or the government. And killing the bird means destroying the old powers.

Uniforms

  1. Elite Belarussian general

  2. Elite Russian general

  3. Elite German general

Uniform 1-3
  1. Emperor’s outfit

  2. Empress’s short dress

  3. Empress’s long dress

Uniform 4-6

The social hierarchy of the Order of the future

In the empire, populations are sorted into 4 classes : the ruler, the army, the people, and the exiled. And 15 sub classes.

The ruler & inner circle

are the people who rule the empire, including people who are involved in the process but have no power directly. These people rather remain unknown to the public for safety reasons. But those who reveal themselves use this as a tool to manipulate the crowd into doing something.



1. The emperor/empress

As the title said, they're the only leader of the empire. Selected by the previous emperor/empress. They have absolute power in the empire. Their current location is always unknown to the public for safety reasons.



2. The heart

Being the spouse of the emperor/empress, they do not have any power in the army or the government. They're allowed to be with the emperor/empress all the time without permission. They're not the successor nor they can choose the next successor.



3. The successor

Chosen by the emperor/empress, the successor is considered the second most powerful role in The Order. They're chosen to become the next emperor/empress of the Order of the Future. But until the ceremony declares them an official leader, they do not have any power. If The emperor/empress dies before they choose anyone, the high observers will vote for the next leader.



4. The high observer

The process of choosing the next successor can be hard for the emperor/empress as they already have to deal with everything including choosing the next ruler. The high observers are there to make the job easier by, as the title said, observing the behaviors of the elite generals. And report them to the emperor/empress. They have to gather every week to report the info and then switch places (Each high observer will be assigned to look after each general and every week they switch to the next person). Their identity will be kept secret, even to their spouse. Also the high observers cannot choose the next leader. Only the emperor/empress can. Unless the emperor/empress dies, then they have to gather once again to vote for the next leader.



5. The Secretary

The emperor/empress’s personal helper. They’re with the emperor/empress most of the working time. Keeping track of all info. The emperor/empress’s presence is kept secret until a mission with only his secretary knowing where he lives. This role is important but just like other people, they can’t choose or try to change the emperor/empress’s mind in the successor choosing process.



6. The officials

Running the government is their main role. In other words, they’re party members. Most of them don’t have knowledge in the army, they’re just a bunch of nerds who know how to maintain the economy and control people. Contrary to the title “The ruler class”, they don’t even have a chance to approach the leader unless given a special permission. Making them not so powerful inside the circle. Just a fancy civilian.



The army

as the name said they bear weapons and fight in wars. But as an oligarchy government, the army is a very important factor to the empire. Without them it is doomed to fail. So the leader has to treat them well so they don’t rebel against the empire.



7. The elite generals

The elite generals are responsible for leading the troops and creating war strategies. Being watched all the time must be pretty uncomfortable for them. As they’re pretty much the most powerful class of the army. They’re close to Leon Levatius and even have a chance to be considered the next successor. They receive unbelievably high payments for each mission. Their lives are basically dream lives for those who dream of being royalty or billionaires. They’re free to go wherever they want as long as they report the whole journey to Levatius.



8. The elite trooper

By passing the exam, any soldier can be in one of the 10 elite brigades. They’re trained to be a killing machine, the perfect soldier, the apex predator. They’re as respected as the high rank officers.



9. The generals and officers

Receiving more payment and welfare benefits. their lives are more restricted. They will have to fill out lots of documents each time they wish to exit the land under the Order of the Future rules. They’re well respected and they have access to a lot of luxuries that NCOs don’t. They still have access to the outside world but it’s kinda risky.



10. The soldiers

Just like most armies all over the world, they have the most freedom, serving under the Order of the Future as just mercenaries. They’re granted basic needs and good payment for each mission. They’re free to do and go anywhere they wish with low surveillance. And they must return to their base as soon as the next mission is declared.

The people

being the main portion of the population, their lives are almost the same as before, as Leon thought though they might not be very dangerous, they can easily rebel against him if they wish to. And a sudden change in their lifestyle might upset them. Making him proceed carefully.



11. The civilians

They’re just people. Their lives are pretty much the same in their countries, except for the new government and mass confusion.

The exiled

These people can be from any classes, but they did something to upset the party so they’re deemed enemies of the state.



12. Political prisoners

Most former leaders of the old powers are in this category. Including the presidents and the whole government. Royal families are sometimes spared as long as they don’t get involved in the current government.

Another type of political prisoners are anti government and protesters.



13. The rejected I

Unable to contribute to society or choosing not to do so, can’t provide for themselves and refuse to work in the government factories, these people are deemed useless by the government and they’re left to die. If they do not pay any taxes then they don’t get anything from the government.

Disabled people such as war veterans and others can still contribute to society. Or if one has the record of former contributions to the empire are allowed to use the benefits that the government provides. Only if they pay taxes.



condition of the rejected

  1.  Unable to find a job after rejected the government’s job offer in a year

  2. Unable to provide for yourself or have no one pay for your living necessities.

  3. Is not studying in any college

  4. Hasn’t done anything to society in the past 3 years

  5. Hasn’t paid taxes for the past 3 years (For people in coma, they’re an exception but they have to pay later)



14. The rejected II

The people in this category are not allowed to reproduce without government’s permission as they have too many health problems or deformities that might affect their lives and can be passed down to the next generations. This is to prevent the next generation to be perfectly healthy and lack health problems.

If they insist on having a child, they must pass the medical standard and sign the paper that allows the government to abort the child if the child is confirmed to have health problems that will affect their lives heavily.



condition of the rejected II

Has serious genetic problem(s) with high risk of passing it down to the next generations.



15. Criminals

They break the laws. That’s all. Since they will have a criminal record, it’s harder for them to get a job. But most of them were not shunned by society.

Anthem

Ye mestee kusiset.

(From the west, they talked about us.)

Dennia ye danhoite.

(The land of tomorrow.)

Ecke astdan kolu astyaka

(We follow one and only leader)

 Ko sanha danha dennia

(As he did create this one country)

Suuiryaka mit kotekaset

(Warriors and all the people)

Ecke sunkun vahrkaset

(We shall get rid of the fiends)

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