Let not this world confuse you
With its slowly rising sun,
Covered by a wisp of Smoke at night,
Smoke that thickens over time then
Slowly fades away before the
Sounds of morning flow from our
Cities and towns, metal constructs
Built to keep us bound.
Day by day and year by year
The chains of cities
Bind and blind,
Forcing us to stay inside and
Never look towards the sentries
Clothed in green and brown,
Standing in a line, all tall.
Verbose in their mournful siren call.
Reaching out, they only catch
Unseeing eyes which gloss over,
Seeing only scenes of black and blue.
Eyes blinded by lies and countless mistruths,
Deceptions
I feel like an outsider watching his world.
Who am I to intrude when my presence begets destruction he can't endure.
Who is a stranger here but me, when I destroy everything I work to procure.
I enter, and become the stranger.
My right is his wrong, I widen the distance between us.
I can not see, and so I wait.
My patience is tried, but I endure.
Filled with a thousand doubts, I look inwards, and there I stay, waiting.
And finally, I see a tiny light in the distance, calling, waiting, and I go.
I feel like an outsider in his world.
Who am I to intrude when my presence begets destruction he can't endure.
Who is a stranger here but me, when I destroy everything I work to procure.
Caught and confused, snared and held without chance for reflection.
I move forward and my destination moves farther away.
I move back and my destination does not move at all.
Only by standing still, moving not of my own volition can I reach my target,
But then the thrill is gone, the thirst abated, the prey now something less.
I am caught, herded through time, never allowed to take a leap of faith and leave everything to chance.
Let not this world confuse you
With its slowly rising sun,
Covered by a wisp of Smoke at night,
Smoke that thickens over time then
Slowly fades away before the
Sounds of morning flow from our
Cities and towns, metal constructs
Built to keep us bound.
Day by day and year by year
The chains of cities
Bind and blind,
Forcing us to stay inside and
Never look towards the sentries
Clothed in green and brown,
Standing in a line, all tall.
Verbose in their mournful siren call.
Reaching out, they only catch
Unseeing eyes which gloss over,
Seeing only scenes of black and blue.
Eyes blinded by lies and countless mistruths,
Deceptions
Favourite genre of music: Classical/Metal Operating System: Ubuntu 7.10 MP3 player of choice: Amarok Personal Quote: Make it yourself, or it wont be reliable.
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Dream Theater
Favourite Writers
Robert Jordan
Favourite Games
Soccer
Tools of the Trade
Laptop, lined paper, pencils, and when I can be bothered an A4 or A6 sketchbook.
I just looked at the notice on the critique system, and I can sum up my thoughts in three short words:
What the fuck!?
Why should artists submit their works to a site that wants money for the ability to receive critiques on your work? The current comment system is good enough, I guess, but when there's a system for the specific purpose of critiquing art, and people don't want to pay for such a thing, many are not going to think of dropping a critique comment...
Those are my thoughts anyway.
School and the newly formed band has me tied right now. Most of my art is random doodling while I try to figure out canine anatomy, so until I have at least a general idea of that I probably wont be posting much here.