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Descent:I
"FIND ME!"she screamed into the darkness that  enveloped her.Though her body convulsed as the words seemed torn from her throat,they fell soundlessly into the air.The Miasma that sought to extinguish the light within her soul was heavy.Something swam in it's depths.It seethed with the fierceness of all that was vile and obscene.It was as a whirlpool,tumultuous,yet coldly silent.She could not see through it,could not steer herself out harms way.She grabbed for something, anything,that could help her pull free.With each movement raven tendrils wove toward her seeking to embrace and invade her flesh.As they seized,and she struggled, it stung and
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Descent:I
"FIND ME!"she screamed into the darkness that  enveloped her.Though her body convulsed as the words seemed torn from her throat,they fell soundlessly into the air.The Miasma that sought to extinguish the light within her soul was heavy.Something swam in it's depths.It seethed with the fierceness of all that was vile and obscene.It was as a whirlpool,tumultuous,yet coldly silent.She could not see through it,could not steer herself out harms way.She grabbed for something, anything,that could help her pull free.With each movement raven tendrils wove toward her seeking to embrace and invade her flesh.As they seized,and she struggled, it stung and
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Blinded All by Myself
I have to close my eyes to let them adjust to the darkness.Like so many times before,vainly trying to shield myself from the encroaching ruin.It feels evil.Intelligent,damning,yet capable-more so inescapable.I've been here before,trying to raise my eyes up from the floor,only to have my spirit flee on out of the door.This all seems so familiar and strange,like I should know what to do,I resist it,fight it,so it can not be true.All this time,I was looking to such a beautiful place,lying to myself,refusing a most obvious disgrace.I know what I am,the things that I've done,but always,for me,in my heart,there was room for just one.Now,to open my
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Blinded All by Myself
I have to close my eyes,to let them adjust to the darkness.Like so many times before,vainly trying to shield myself from the encroaching ruin.It feels evil,intelligent,damning,yet capable-more so,inescapable.I've been here before,trying to raise my eyes and spirit.Then,all is discarded,upon the floor.This all seems familiar and strange.Like I should know what to do-I resist it,and fight it,so it can not be true.All this time,I was looking, for such a beautiful place,lying to myself,enduring,refusing, an obvious disgrace.I know what I am,the things that I've done,but always,for me, in my heart, there is room for but one.Now,my eyes,wide open t
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Invisible Demons
Doubt.Worry.Fear.Pain.-When I found deviant art I was re-introduced to an emotion I have not truly felt for some time now(I should say emotions).I felt like I had just made a new friend and we hit it off right away!As I look around at the myriad great works of art,literature,poetry,etc. I can felt my confidence shrinking,wanting to run the other way."You are not good enough-none of these fabulous artists are going to be interested in your little scribblings-definately out of your league"And I hear demonic laughter echoing through my conciousness.Thoughts like these seem to contain me like some sort of Mages' freeze spell combined with a secon
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diresphinxHobbyist Writer
Hiya would you like to check out my new book? It's on my DA page :)
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Thankyou for favouriting my story, it means a lot for someone to notice the stuff I care about! Nice to have you joined!
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Thank you to anyone who even noticed me.I used to be able to draw a little (not like all you guys)then one day my hand was almost completely destroyed--true story-always have I somehow found the best fantasy stories ever written.Tolkien,Jordan,Moorcock,.These greats I found while in traction for broken neck.It fired my imagination to heights I'd only dreamed of before.Then I found more,so much more,R.A.Salvatore,Weis&Hickman,Terry Brooks-Marvel&D.C.-ok i'll stop now.It is just been my lifes dream to become a great writer.
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FanBoy67Professional Artist
Thanks for the SPIDER-MEN 3: SUPERIOR vs 2099 & HULK SMASH SPIDEY Faves!
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sure man it's awesome!
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TenoreRobustoHobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for the favorite, glad you liked the story!
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TheRavenMichaelisHobbyist General Artist
Thank you for your recent comments!  Your support is greatly appreciated!