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Comic Author for Webtoon. Creator of Magic Soda Pop, Live Forever and Tinkers' Trilogy. Mexican, Japan-based.


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In fact, this model is from '70s. I dunno if there were other brands before, but seems like this was the pioneer.

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
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All great, just a comment about the child who seems to be falling. There is a problem of shapes that doesn't let us see what's happening. Perhaps changing tongues colors to red would differ over the elements in the purple environment. Personally I'd redraw that part, maybe by pulling the child's legs left to right and the he enjoying. In this way the child's silhouette would be clear if you put another white creature behind him. It's just lack of contrast.

Another thing, maybe I would change the driver's body language and as well his wife. Of course we cannot see their faces but the body language can tell us that they are amazed.

I love your universe, I hope you can make a project in this world.

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Hay un problema de formas que no deja ver con claridad lo que sucede. Quizá un cambio de colores en las lenguas de color rojo diferenciaría más los elementos en escena del entorno púrpura. En lo personal redibujaría esa parte, quizá los seres jalandolo de las piernas de izquierda a derecha y el niño disfruntándolo de esta forma la silueta del niño sería clara si pusieras a otro ser detrás de él. Falta contraste.

Otra cosa, quizá cambiaría las expresión corporal del conductor y su esposa. Claro que no podremos ver sus rostros pero la expresión corporal puede decirnos que lo que están viendo los está sorprendiendo.

Me encanta este universo. Espero desarrolles algún proyecto con este perfil. ¡Un abrazo!
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