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Heartbeat Page 11 (End of Chapter 1) by Rated-R-PonyStar Heartbeat Page 11 (End of Chapter 1) by Rated-R-PonyStar
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DeathAngelRei Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
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DuckInATopHat Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Fluttershy and her evil self are sleeping in bed together.

Still a better love story than Twilight.
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Small-IrkenXX Featured By Owner May 1, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Oml-
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NightskyMagic Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You can say that again
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Sanluris Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
:( Flutters needs to have a sleepover with someone. Maybe for a while.
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nioniosbbbb Featured By Owner May 9, 2016
Seems a little sudden to time skip like that.
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wolf-spirit62 Featured By Owner May 22, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
So what you want 10 panels of watching her just cry? I'd rather a time skip. 
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nioniosbbbb Featured By Owner May 22, 2016
Maybe a smoother transition was in order
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wolf-spirit62 Featured By Owner May 22, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Lol it's a comic. There's literally no "smoother" transition then mentioning a time skip...
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nioniosbbbb Featured By Owner May 22, 2016
Well it's not exactly mentioned past the sky. I just think it was too important of a moment to just skip.
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wolf-spirit62 Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Her just sitting there crying for a few hours is an 'important moment'?

I'd like to remind you that panels cost money...

Unless the commissioner is rolling in money, they probably don't want to pay for 5 panels of the same exact picture with at most varying lighting changes.
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nioniosbbbb Featured By Owner May 23, 2016
... I'd like to remind you that that is irrelevant to whether or not the moment matters, or that the inner ramblings of a character at their moment of weakness are pure gold entertainment. Also that this isn't a fight. Are you really that upset?
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wolf-spirit62 Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I would like to, once again, point out that all she was doing was sitting there and crying. Why, exactly, do you need panels of the same picture? I'm genuinely curious why you feel that waste of time is at all necessary instead of a simple time skip. And in a situation as she is in you can be safe to bet there was probably no inner ramblings. We're SEEING the inner ramblings. Being upset and loathing an internal issue doesn't require inner speeches and it would make more sense she is actively trying to not let her mind wander. Which again, would have therefore ended up a waste of time and more suit for a story, not a comic. Not everything in a story needs to have hand holding. So honestly no... sitting there and crying about herself isn't a 'moment that matters'. Sure they could have ADDED something, but as the story goes she's not doing anything so we don't need to see it.
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Dezd7 Featured By Owner May 9, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
creepy as hell
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Shadow-Ichigo Featured By Owner May 8, 2016
Yikes, the demons inside her
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DashCentry Featured By Owner May 8, 2016
Keep up the good work!
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Diablo2000 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016
I think the only way Fluttershy may find a path to recovery is she faces the one who murdered her family.
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Isaacleija Featured By Owner May 8, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
OMG, Kill his evil side with fire. O_O
I love fluttershy.
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Animatorsnake Featured By Owner May 8, 2016
Shoo evil Flutters, we got no time for your shenanigans
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Pokebreeder25 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
so thats your version of fluttershy's parents if so not bad i still think futtershy's mom is posey from g1
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Delta52775 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016
Good God the other Fluttershy is scary!
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PandaisQued Featured By Owner May 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Flutterbitch is coming
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Dragondash98 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016
....... WELL SHIT.
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ilegalgamer6 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016
KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!!
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NecromancerKing85 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Now I'm scared of Fluttershy :scared:
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