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January 17, 2018
Woe to the Jester - The Intro by RangerRed09
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This is a piece I wrote a short while back as part of character exploration for Jester. After revisiting it recently, I'm thinking about possibly continuing his story to see where it would go. I was thinking of constructing the story collage-style, where different aspects of the character are revealed gradually through different scenes. We'll have to see.

Any constructive feedback is always welcome!
I'm particularly curious about first impressions of Jester --What do you think of him? Is his story is something you'd be interested in seeing more of. Is the prose style confusing at all? I want it to be somewhat mysterious, but is it too much so?

Thank you for reading! :)
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This is an intriguing opener.  Jester feels like a complex character, and you also write the children in a very authentic way.