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In the rain by Rameslack In the rain by Rameslack
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Just a few things that could have improved it (in my opinion).
- The pony is brighter than the ground or the background, which is kinda confusing. if there is light on her, wouldn't it be reflecting the wet ground? In that case, an audience could see the light source in the reflection of the water.
- The light reflections on the eyes are on opposite sides. There is four reflections, and the top three are correct, but the large light shining from the whites of her eyes doesn't line up as well as the other reflections in the eyes do.
- The mane appears to be rather dry in rain. It looks pretty puffy and dry to me. It would make it more clear that it was raining if the mane was weighed down with water.

That's all! Just wanted to point those out, considering you asked for critique. If I sounded rude at all, know that I certainly did not mean to be! It's a beautiful drawing, but I wanted to give some small critiques. No one ever gives critique when I ask, and I find it frustrating, and I don't like it when others are frustrated, so, here's some critique!
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I would like to start by saying that I really like the darker theme to this picture. I think that your shading is excellent and it provides smooth transitions from the highlights to the shadows. I also like how you made the mane and tail very realistic by adding highlights on specific strands of hair. A few things your could work on in your next piece are making the hair look less dry and the highlights in the eyes to have correct placement. If it is raining then logically the mane and tail would be pretty damp. Also the highlights in the eyes don't match which would make for many confusing light sources. Although you have some things to work on, I love the way that you did the raindrops on scoots and the reflections on the area around her. Keep up the good work!
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Fire-Link Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Amazing job, Your art work is great. What's up?
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Rameslack Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Thanks, and the sky is usually up
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Fire-Link Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Yeah true. but I meant how is life going.
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Rameslack Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
life is just fine thanks for asking
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Fire-Link Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
That's good.
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GUILLE832 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
:clap: Marvelous! I love it! Her design is excellently detailed, specially her mane and eyes. The coloring is superb as well, and the rain effect is spectacular. Adjectives :dummy:
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Rameslack Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
Thanks 8-)
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veryoriginalponyname Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
Never give up, Scoots. Very pretty drawing.
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Rameslack Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
Thank you
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gabesz92 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
Scoot, what are you doing out there?
Come inside, hurry :)
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Rameslack Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
hehe :meow:
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gabesz92 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
That's a very suspicious hehe :P

Nothing funny business, I swear
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KlowdTheUmbreon Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I just realized how many of your pics I've faved from you... And yet I still haven't watched you for some reason. XD
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Rameslack Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
Well you seem to have fixed that problem now ;)
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KlowdTheUmbreon Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I certainly have. :3
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Icanhazmochi Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
Aw... this pic is so friggin' sad! D; Anyways, I love what you've done with it, it looks great aside from the fairly bronze Scootaloo, but that's something I can get over. :P
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Rameslack Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
Glad you like it
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SleepingSilentBelle Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Nice one, Rame. I love seeing Scoots. I am curious though, why have you been choosing to make so many pieces recently with such dark backgrounds?
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Rameslack Featured By Owner Edited Jun 13, 2014
Becaus my soul is dark :D..... no but seriously I just think dark backgrounds are easier to work with and I think they look good.
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Argus456 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Well, Scoots looks more confused than sad in the rain, so that's a plus in my books. The little rain drops dripping down her mane and the sheen in her fur looks great. Plus, you haven't been doing that many pieces of the other CMC aside from Sweetie Belle, so it's a nice change of pace too :)
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Rameslack Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
Thanks and Im trying to cut back on drawing Sweetie belle
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Rotorix Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
:( Poor Scoots.
But excellent work with this; everything looks wonderful! 
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Rameslack Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
Poor Scoots? its just a little rain =P
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