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The Recital

Hey thar people!

Sorry I've been so inactive, been working on commissions as well as the day job.

Heres one of the latest. It was an unusual request which the commissioner was quite specific in what he wanted. There was quite a lot of back and forth feedback (especially to get the piper's garb right) but in the end he was happy.

I learned a lot during this, but still I don't feel too impressed with the outcome. Feel free to rip it apart, mateys. :)

Hope you're all doing well!
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kungfoowiz's avatar
Hey Ralph

Cool paint, it looks like much effort went this one. One thing I notice which you should probably work on, is the hands drawing. You did some nice hands on one of the guys in the crowd, and then the piper dude's hands aren't so hot in comparison, yet he is the focus of the piece. Tbh, I would've spent more time getting the piper guy's hands right and then just make the crowd more vague in general imho.

Okay man, hope this helps, didn't want to rip into your stuff too much, rather thought to point out some important stuff instead.
RalphTart's avatar
Hey hey, thanks for the feedback. I agree with ye, the hands are bad. :/
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Rastrelly's avatar
Moria approves!