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They parked at a Circle-K and hiked up the canyon trail behind the store, making it to the top of the ridge by sundown. The day had been blazing, katydids buzzing past them in lethargic arcs the whole way. Tall grass bit at them and stuck to their sweat-soaked clothing but presented little challenge otherwise... but now the sun was down and warm desert winds gave way to cool breezes.
The railroad tracks were as they remembered, twin gleaming beams carrying moonlight off to the horizon in both directions. Track so straight they appeared photoshopped, movie magic as done by lazy CGI animators who couldn't be bothered with realism.
She bent down to touch one cool rail. It sang in her hand.
"Soon," she looked up at him, expression unreadable. "We haven't much time."
He nodded, unslung his pack. Started removing items: tent, camping gear, food for breakfast. From the bottom he fished out a tiny digital camera and tripod, began setting it up directly in the center of the track pointed west. The camera had an unusual bulge over the lens, an expensive night-vision attachment purchased from a Russian ex-military merchant on eBay.
She gripped the rail tighter, closed her eyes, listened to something only she could hear. Nodded in satisfaction. "Very soon," she whispered.
"All set up," he announced, dusting his hands. He noted a distant rumble from the west, as if a storm approached with continuous thunder. He squinted but saw nothing. Not yet.
She stood abruptly, took his hand. He noted it was colder than it should have been. He squeezed reassuringly. "We've done this a few times... you know it'll be okay."
Her shrug was non-committal, and he almost missed it as the headlight appeared off in the distance. It made him jump. The rumble grew louder, too, and with it: a plaintive whistle. Something from the 1930s, steam blasting through pipes, not normally heard in modern times.
"It comes," she said, nodding, eyes closed. He adjusted his stance next to hers, one foot inside the rails, the other outside. Braced himself.
The light grew with shocking speed and intensity. The world exploded with new light, pale and yellow. Cold. And with it, came the thunder: the roar of a machine manufactured a century ago, thumping and grinding its way on steel wheels towards them at impossible speed. Its whistle blasted repeatedly, dopplering weirdly. And in a flash--
--it was upon them. Through them. It blasted through their bodies with no sensation other than chilling cold, and yet they leaned into it, hearts hammering frantically. She screamed then, wordlessly defiant. Released his hand to hold hers up, palms spread to face the specter.
Car after car rumbled over them, through them, the clackity-clack of wheels challenging their heartbeats. It smelled of burning oil and wood, of leather, of hay and animals. A whiff of perfume, the scent of a cigar, of liquor and steak. The flickering sensations came and left so quickly they felt like a seizure: their brains forced to process impossible information at impossible speed.
Then it was past. The silence was shocking, the rumble receding to the east, behind them. They gasped in unison. She gripped his hand again, suddenly, turning with him to watch the caboose's red lights diminish down the tracks.
"Soon," she repeated, sadly.
She squeezed his hand convulsively as the wreck happened. The way it had always happened: shriek of tortured metal wheels throwing sparks, the collision with -- something, nobody knew what -- and the endless rumbling slow-motion explosion that followed, cars tumbling off the ridge as toys. Distant screams dying off. The flickering flame of burning wood cast in a circle surrounding the wreck.
Then, silence. The scene faded before them and all was serene. Eventually crickets began their symphony around them again, and the cool breezes returned. She released his hand then, staggered, sat down on the ground.
He was already reviewing the camera footage, touching and stroking the LCD panel to rewind and replay. He shook his head slowly.
"Nothing," he announced. "Same as before."
"Same as before," she agreed. "I told you that wouldn't work."
"Next time, maybe I'll try going retro. Maybe I could borrow the Hasselblad from Bill, find some high-speed film. Go oldschool."
"Won't work. Mark my words."
"Oh well, next time."
He put the camera away and began assembling camp.
The railroad tracks were as they remembered, twin gleaming beams carrying moonlight off to the horizon in both directions. Track so straight they appeared photoshopped, movie magic as done by lazy CGI animators who couldn't be bothered with realism.
She bent down to touch one cool rail. It sang in her hand.
"Soon," she looked up at him, expression unreadable. "We haven't much time."
He nodded, unslung his pack. Started removing items: tent, camping gear, food for breakfast. From the bottom he fished out a tiny digital camera and tripod, began setting it up directly in the center of the track pointed west. The camera had an unusual bulge over the lens, an expensive night-vision attachment purchased from a Russian ex-military merchant on eBay.
She gripped the rail tighter, closed her eyes, listened to something only she could hear. Nodded in satisfaction. "Very soon," she whispered.
"All set up," he announced, dusting his hands. He noted a distant rumble from the west, as if a storm approached with continuous thunder. He squinted but saw nothing. Not yet.
She stood abruptly, took his hand. He noted it was colder than it should have been. He squeezed reassuringly. "We've done this a few times... you know it'll be okay."
Her shrug was non-committal, and he almost missed it as the headlight appeared off in the distance. It made him jump. The rumble grew louder, too, and with it: a plaintive whistle. Something from the 1930s, steam blasting through pipes, not normally heard in modern times.
"It comes," she said, nodding, eyes closed. He adjusted his stance next to hers, one foot inside the rails, the other outside. Braced himself.
The light grew with shocking speed and intensity. The world exploded with new light, pale and yellow. Cold. And with it, came the thunder: the roar of a machine manufactured a century ago, thumping and grinding its way on steel wheels towards them at impossible speed. Its whistle blasted repeatedly, dopplering weirdly. And in a flash--
--it was upon them. Through them. It blasted through their bodies with no sensation other than chilling cold, and yet they leaned into it, hearts hammering frantically. She screamed then, wordlessly defiant. Released his hand to hold hers up, palms spread to face the specter.
Car after car rumbled over them, through them, the clackity-clack of wheels challenging their heartbeats. It smelled of burning oil and wood, of leather, of hay and animals. A whiff of perfume, the scent of a cigar, of liquor and steak. The flickering sensations came and left so quickly they felt like a seizure: their brains forced to process impossible information at impossible speed.
Then it was past. The silence was shocking, the rumble receding to the east, behind them. They gasped in unison. She gripped his hand again, suddenly, turning with him to watch the caboose's red lights diminish down the tracks.
"Soon," she repeated, sadly.
She squeezed his hand convulsively as the wreck happened. The way it had always happened: shriek of tortured metal wheels throwing sparks, the collision with -- something, nobody knew what -- and the endless rumbling slow-motion explosion that followed, cars tumbling off the ridge as toys. Distant screams dying off. The flickering flame of burning wood cast in a circle surrounding the wreck.
Then, silence. The scene faded before them and all was serene. Eventually crickets began their symphony around them again, and the cool breezes returned. She released his hand then, staggered, sat down on the ground.
He was already reviewing the camera footage, touching and stroking the LCD panel to rewind and replay. He shook his head slowly.
"Nothing," he announced. "Same as before."
"Same as before," she agreed. "I told you that wouldn't work."
"Next time, maybe I'll try going retro. Maybe I could borrow the Hasselblad from Bill, find some high-speed film. Go oldschool."
"Won't work. Mark my words."
"Oh well, next time."
He put the camera away and began assembling camp.
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The Memory Box
She locked her heart in a box as summer ended
And tucked it under her bed, in a nest of cobwebs
Waiting for winter to frost her eyes closed
For her long hibernation until heat spilled again
Through her bedroom window.
But as she lay down on silk sheets,
Hair cascading across her shoulders in an overflow
Of spring flowers and memories,
He appeared, standing over her,
Holding the box in his palm.
"Summer isn't over yet, my dear." He said.
"Autumn is turning the world orange,
And there's a butterfly waiting on your windowsill.
So let's pick sunflowers till sunset comes."
He reached out a hand, she took it.
The box clicked open, s
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Writer's Block
The numbers on my desk calendar started to blend together as my eyes began to close and I dozed off. I regained consciousness with a start, and I involuntarily slammed my hand down to what should have been my desk.
"Wh-where am I?"
"Oh my dear! We certainly weren't expecting you today; we would have cleaned up a bit. Heh, you see, we're having a bit of a well
technical difficulty." Said a round, rather pleasant woman wearing a polka-dot dress with a nametag simply saying "Dot."
I looked around; I was in a large, disorganized office with people and papers scrambling with bundles of copy paper. I grabbed a paper from the desk beside an
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polaroid memory
is that what happened to you?
fitful night terror
curled up with the dregs
in the shallows of a porcelain teacup
don't be mad at him
he didn't know about the sun that shone rainbows
or Sunday morning pancakes
the crystal and the dream catcher
tuck me into your bed of false teeth
swaddle me in that threadbare security blanket
this is the eighteenth second chance
but who's keeping count?
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This story is really beautiful and slightly chilling at the same time. Loved the concept! It really captured me; I felt like I was watching the whole incident happen. I really enjoyed reading it, thank you! C: