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Seventeen candles mark the day
Nine months since you've gone away

Quickly you came and quickly you went
All your days have been spent

There are no more tears and sad goodbyes
Only truths and fading lies

One stands out among the rest
One that surely is the best

We will miss you, this is true
For you, are the sparrow, the one who flew
Today is Stephie's birthday, so I decided to write another poem. It's not as good as the first and took a lot less time to do but I still wanna share it.

The picture:[link]žion=&global=1&q=candles+on+the+cake#/d19k5n0

Stephie would have loved the cake.

The other poem:[link]
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Yuri212 Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's amazing!! what the hell!! why you say it not that good!! She would of loved the cake AND the poems I will say that now :)

Honestly Kym I really liked this poem especially the last line :)
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
:shrug: I just don't think I'm that good, Aaron
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Yuri212 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O_O You know what. I noticed something after posting this comment

THIS POEM HAS 326 FAVOURITES!!!! :iconohmygoshplz:

So YES!! You are awesome!! End of!!
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...>.>
It's my most favourited deviation. Even though the other one is better.
I think they're just favouriting it because of the meaning.
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Yuri212 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like both I can't say which is better :)

Well the other one has meaning as well though :)
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
true.
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central-of-comix Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
Look at my art: [link]
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
xD You art is awesome!
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ManboobLover69 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
aww.... :( she went to heaven?
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, if you believe in that stuff
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blahj Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very Cool !
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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GuitarGirl99f Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The cake and poem are both spectacular.
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, the cake looks amazing, doesn't it?
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GuitarGirl99f Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Heck yeah, it does!
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Betcha it was real tasty too. But it sounds like a lot of work to make.
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MissMelodyLess Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
I counted 15 candles..
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
xD It's the title of the poem, not the candles on the cake
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etaylor Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
there might be some on the other side that you can't see.
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gdpr-15681873 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A beautiful poem, I daresay I almost cried. What I find most beautiful about poetry is that it only takes a few words to have such a meaningful affect. You've done an excellent job, and I love both poems as well.

You have inspired me, if you do not mind I would love to send you a link to the poem you've inspired when I am done.
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
Send the link whenever you finish.
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gdpr-15681873 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome, will do. :)
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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Nukealias2 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wicked poem!
Wicked cake!
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
heh, thanks
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anime-art-freak579 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
Awesome poem, and the cake looks delicious! :D
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, it definitely does!
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PrinceCandyy Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this whole piece of art work!!!!
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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SoolaHoop12 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student General Artist
That is a lovely poem and an amazing cake picture!
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much
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SoolaHoop12 Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Welcome!
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Hanka-Muffin-Angel Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
WOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!! Wanna eat it so badlyyy :clap:
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Reham-Y Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
woow . that's so beautiful
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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s6334 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student General Artist
amazing poem

And what is wrong with waieuonyoisdtuvboiau, why are there so many spammers on da lately?
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks scott :]

No idea. The other poem was spammed as well.
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s6334 Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student General Artist
your welcome

I got spammed on [link] but im too scared to click the like because all it says is "More Interesting Videos And Pictures Here. . Just click the link" and i don't know what it means by " Interesting"
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm...I would probably click it. I'm curious that way. But it's probably just the usual rubbish.
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larsvegas1982 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
nice work, love it
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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CrystalzAnimeTurtle Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. :')
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Please don't spam me.
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laureheline Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
This is a beautiful poem :) And today it's also my seventeen's birthday :) I love it :D
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NicolaRachel Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student General Artist
happy birthday!
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy birthday and thank you
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MrOrangeCreamsicles Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
naw I love this poem :D
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RainbowShroom Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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