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The Final Assault

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Great work! I love the color of the crystals on the rock while reflecting the light, and how Rarity's magic looks liquid-y while holding the sword for dear life. Her eyes reflect how awe-struck she is while looking at the sword, momentarily forgetting the dangerous crabs around her. The lava effect is breathtaking; it almost looks as if you took an actual picture of lava and pasted it onto the painting. Also, the shafts of light in the distance are a very nice touch.

One thing I have a small problem with...I can't see the crabs very well. I had to read the description and then look at the painting again in order to see the crabs. I think you could either make them bigger, or have more light on them, because Rarity holding the sword is a little distracting, if I might say. Speaking of Rarity, this is a really stupid thing to point out, but where are her eyelashes? This might be because of my obsession with eyelashes, but I only see one eyelash on her eye. Wait, never mind, I just zoomed in on the photo and saw more eyelashes. But still, I could barely see them.

Overall, it's a great piece. Keep up the good work! <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>