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Cyborg 2

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Let me start off by saying that I fell in love with your work of turning the figure into these robotic like people. With that said I really like this piece and it really works well as a composition, with the perfect text for it. However her foot isn't really working for me. For me to see her foot untouched while the majority of her body has been made smooth makes me feel like either this work is unfinished or her feet and hands are out of place.

My suggestion would be to either work on the hands and feet to make them match the rest of the body, or add more noticeable parts of her natural skin through other areas of her body. I can see you kind of left her elbow and right leg, but they don't stand out enough to help link them together.

But like I said earlier I really do like your work, so I think this can still be pushed further. Maybe you could even experiment with adding bulges that push up skin in areas to imply robotic parts. Good luck to you!