I like that this one is such a different style from the other, but still really good. Your design/composition is good, with the border and the textured teal area to the right of her head. I really like your use of color- the way you put little strokes of bold color in her hair, etc. Again, that's something that really appeals to me, but for some reason I never do it.
I want the iris of the eye to be moved up a bit, within the eye. It is pretty much that way in the photo, but we're more apt to notice it in a painting. It is distracting. Other than that, I have nothing but high praise.