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I made a Ratchcee fanfic decent enough to post
Ya'll can click this link if ya wanna read it
When you thought I couldn't be more obsessed
Crituques on how I can improve are most welcome and appriciated (/; w ; )/
If you bother to read it of course

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HeapingScrapheap Featured By Owner Edited Nov 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright, first, this fic was REALLY cute. ;v; There were misspellings, as you said, but they definitely didn't take away from the story. ^^ It was well-written, and I really like how Arcee kept calling Ratchet "hun"; super cute! ;v; It was a little sad, when they were talking about having nightmares about what happened, and it added something special to the story. ;v; It made you think that yes, they are a nice pairing together, but they also have a bit of a sad, shared history , too. And that just makes their connection seem a lot deeper. ;v; I liked how  Ratchet had been panicky a bit, at the beginning of the story, because it reflected on how much he doesn't want to make Arcee think less of him, and it was really sweet that he cared about what she thought of how he looked. uvu I loved the care you poured into this, and I just love how you wrote them so accurately. ^^ I died of laughter about the bit with Bumblebee, because it was hilarious. xD Poor Ratchet... OH. I forgot to mention; I really like how you not only had Ratchet go to Sari for advise, but that you also made him question the thought process behind his choice to ask her for help. ;v; It seemed like a realistic thought process, and it was a really nice detail. ^^ Overall, it was a fantastic fanfic, and I'd love to read anything else you write~! >w< You're very talented; please, keep up the amazing work. OwO
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RadioactiveRays Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hnggg Thank you! >////>
Yea, spelling is not and will never be my strong suit xD one day I'm gonna spell check that thing and try to correct all the errors
I can't not imagine Arcee not being that motherly type to always refer to bots she cares about as 'hun' it just seems to fit her Q w Q
idk why but I found their backstory together to be so interesting, it got my gears rolling when I first watched that episode, and I can't help but grin every time I re-watch it, so I kinda had to add that in I also kinda have a theory that he may have ptsd but I'm not too sure yet. I think I could've put more care into it, I wrote the first couple paragraphs a couple weeks before I started writing again, and then I couldn't stop and finished that day, usually I'm bad with endings, but I was able to figure out how to end that one x w x. That part where bumble bee was mentioned was based off a story my band teacher told us when she was watching her former teacher teach her class, keep in mind this was at a time where it was very uncommon for schools to spank kids, but it still happened but it still happened, so anyway this kid was jacking off and the teacher yelled at him if he wanted her to some over there and lick his rear. The teacher was kinda old so it wasn't an uncommon term for her, but it got my band teacher to laugh. I'm the kinda weirdo who is obsessed with the Myers's Briggs 16 personality types, and just how the brain works with that sorta stuff in general. So me being the weirdo I am I believe Ratchet to be an INFJ which if you don't know, stands for: Introverted, Intuitive, Feeling, and Judging. I also spend a lot of time re-reading the Allspark Almanac on Ratchet's part, and one's where he was doing the talking, mostly because of obsession, but also to get his speech right without having to use the internet or anything big to watch the show.
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HeapingScrapheap Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem; happy to give my honest opinions! ;v; Spelling doesn't matter, to me, personally, as long as the story is good. ^^ And the story was VERY good. <w<  Besides, your typos weren't that bad; I could still read everything without any trouble. ^^ You're right; with her having that motherly type of personality, I could TOTALLY see her calling people hun. ;o; She's such a dear, especially how you've written her! ^o^ 

Everytime I see the episodes where they're involved together in it,  I do wonder if Ratchet had feelings for her. ;o; Look at how distraught he was over having to wipe her memories and whatnot. Like, you and I both know that bot has seen Some Seriously Bad Things™ in life, but he was really shook up in particular over that. So, I can see where they're very shippable. ;v; [Also, as someone with PTSD, I can confirm what he experiences LITERALLY is almost exactly what experiencing an episode is like. It's different for each person, but. He's got some of the more common symptoms. So if he doesn't have PTSD, he's got something REALLY close to it. Poor Ratchet. ;o;] 

Well, to be fair, for you having written parts of it at different intervals, it really flows together quite nicely. ;o; I wouldn't have even guessed you wrote parts of it at different times, because it all just goes together well, to me. ^^ Also, that ending was really good, to me. ;c; I know the struggle; like. Is there even a correct way to end things? o3o Well. Except TFA; that ending was sad and rushed, and was not a good ending, RIP Prowl. BUT. Like. Your ending was pretty great, and left the story on a light note, I think. ^^ I really liked it! Also... xD That. That must have been QUITE the funny experience for your band teacher. xDD Lol, just WHAT. I know that phrase, because my grandparents are old timey country folk, so they used that word a lot  when I got in trouble. xD It's funny how different words are used, over time. BUT.  That's still hilarious. xD 

I am interested in the personality types, and I even took a test once. It is REALLY fascinating, that personalities can be briefly explained with a few words. ;v; I wish it was a more common thing. It's getting there, but. I feel like it isn't spread enough. ;o; Also, that does sound a bit like Ratchet. xox It's amazing you figured that out on your own; most people wouldn't ever take the time to do that. OvO Also, your dedication to Ratchet  is pretty inspiring! ^^ It's cool to see someone really interested in stuff, in general. OvO It's nice that you have a strong interest. >w<
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RadioactiveRays Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I personally think that Ratchet and Arcee are the most cannon thing to a ship in TFA (if that makes sense? How I worded it I mean, sorry, i'm better at talking then typing xD) it was mentioned that Ratchet talked about her all the time, and then there was that scene in the lasy episode where the held hands and my heart just died ;o; [woot! I'm not the only one who thats he does xD that old bot needs to get some help, or be forced to get some help ;; A ;; that stubborn old model!]

Well, it wasn't really the hardest thing, after all where stopped before rewritting was right before he forced the flower into her hands, I really couldn't think when I first started xD and when everything just seemed to fall into place when I was writting. I honestly didn't want to end it, but it was as good a time as any so I went with it. Since I'm planning on making it continous it, it won't really have a real ending, for a while at least. Yea, that TFA ending was so sad, I refuse to rewatch that episode, even if Ratchet and Arcee do hold hands ;; - ;;. Yea, I bet it was, I cracked up laughing when my teacher told the class this story xD. My grndparents are very old fashioned farmers, and my father was raised as a traditional, old fashioned farmer (even if he is a ups driver) so I know a lot of those old fashioned slang terms xD.

Really? Do you remember what your personality type was ;o;? I'm an ENFP = v = It is very much facinating :,D! I'm trying to figure all the main 6 from TFA (y'know, prime, sari, prowl, bumble bee, bulkhead, and ratchet) I honestly think bumble bee is an ESFP, and sari probably the same thing, I haven't figured out the rest yet, but I've figured out a few of the letters, I'm just trying to fill in the open gaps. I'm pretty bad with the N or the S so I can't be too certain, but I'm 99% sure Ratchet's intuitive o w o. I wish I could figure out Arcee's Q A Q I've kinda made her into an INFP jn this one roleplay I'm doing and in this story, but idk > <; Change "dedication" to "obbsession", I'm kinda obbsessed x,D
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HeapingScrapheap Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, it's okay! >w< I understood; I totally get what you mean, and I have to agree with you. ;v; It is one of the more canonly backed ships, certainly, with lots to go off of! ^^ Would you say Ratchet x Arcee is your biggest OTP? OuO [YES, HE DOES. DB I'm surprised they didn't do more about getting him help, because it was obvious he was struggling with something. *^* I wonder if Ratchet knew there was something going on with him, him being a medic and all...]

I could see how that might be pretty difficult. ;o; In the end, your hard work paid off big time! ^^ It really does go together so well. If you write more, could you please update us, here? ;v; I would like to read what you do next!! >w< Oh gosh, that episode is the saddest of  just about anything. ;-; Well. ONE of the saddest. OH, so you know all those funny [and awesome] old country phrases, too? x3 It's a shame that they aren't more widely used. ;o; 

OHHHH!! ENFP??? ;v; I really like that sort of personality! >w< In general, extroverted individuals are really inspirational to me. ;v; Could I ask how much of the summary of your personality type fit you? ovo I'm an INFP, funnily enough. xD Just one letter away from yours, but it's funny how different those two types are! OvO I'm thinking that I have to agree with you, because ESFP explains a lot of Bumblebee's and Sari's behaviours. X3 Ratchet seems a bit intuitive, to me, too. He does oftentimes go with what he feels rather than solely relying on facts and whatnot. Arcee doesn't have a LOT of screen time, so it's understandable you might be having some difficulty with her. But, with her being a teacher, and with what is seen of her, INFP seems like a good bet. [Not just saying that because I'm INFP. xD] Well, even if you consider yourself "obsessed", obsession isn't a bad thing, if it means you have a serious passion for something~ >w<
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RadioactiveRays Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes! Ratchet and Arcee dfinitly are my biggest OTP, I'm very much obbsessed with them but they make me so happy > v > I have a wall with all my Ratchcee drawings, I need to print out my digital ones and maybe art others have made for me of them (but I'd put them on a different place on my wall haha) [maybe optimus has tried getting him help be he's too stubborn to get any? Or if he's anything like me, he knows he has a problem but doesn't want anyone to help and thinks he can fix it on his own]

Yes, I definitly will! I'm thinking about soon making a new cover and putting the link to it in the description so maybe more people will read it. I'd probably update it when there's a new chapter and make a status update about it xD

I'm not the biggest extroverted person around. I dont really care how the word "introveted" is used around everywhere (I have nothing against introverts, I envy them), because being an extrovert means you get more energy being around people, and introvert means you get more energy being alone. Most people seems to think being an introvert means you just don't like people, which isn't the case because I'm and extrovert who hates people (in general) but I get my energy by being around a select few people, making me an extrovert.(sorry for that little shpeal) The page is pretty accurate tbh, off the top of my head one of things I can remember is wrong is that I don't know how to relax xD there was one or two more but I can't remember it right now. Tbh, I've never been able to get along with ESFPs, and the only thing is that one letter so yea, it's very interesting :,). Yea, Ratchet's a feeler, ain't no one gonna argue with that xD
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HeapingScrapheap Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I was just curious, because I know I see you draw them quite a bit. ;v; And it's good they make you happy~! >w< Stuff like that is important. ovo Also, I bet your wall  is glorious~! QoQ With all those drawings there. x3 [You know, now that you mention it, that seems really likely. I know when it comes to TV series, stuff goes on that we, the viewers, don't get to see. But, it would have been nice to see something like that, all the same. ;o; Probably would have gotten too deep, though.]

Thank you~! ;v; If you make a new cover for it, I'd love to see, and I'll look forward to your future work on it~! >w<

I don't like how people do assume introverts are just anti-social, also. xD I really like most people, but being around them makes me super tired. ;v; Being alone definitely gives me more energy. So it's interesting to meet someone extroverted, where the opposite is true! ;o; I think you're the first extrovert I've met who is more decisive about the company they keep. ovo Also, you're always welcome to talk as much or as little as you'd like about stuff~! ^o^ I like hearing about other people, anyways, so never feel like you have to cut what you want to say short. ^^ It's cool how a lot of your personality results were similar to you. ovo Also, ESFPs rub me the wrong way, sometimes, too, but they're interesting to observe. *u* Ratchet is SUPER FEELY. xD 
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RadioactiveRays Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
To me it is, it was funny, I was hanging up my drawings and my brother walked in and said "You're obsessed," and I responded, "I'm not trying to hide that fact now am I?" [This is what headcannons as for > w < I'm honestly glad I'm not the only one who thinks Ratchet has PTSD, or something like it xD I honestly wouldn't be too surprised if Arcee has it as well because she'd been through a lot as well, and then the last thing she remembered being him young, and then when she started remembering again she saw him when he is old, that must've been kinda strange]

Alright! I have no idea whether or not to put a warning because, well, you read it, I kinda have a dirty sense of humor xD it wouldn't get into 17/18+ junk of course (the legal adult age in my state is 17) ;o; but it's not the most child friendly

I don't really like to type all that much, so I never really say all that much usually, but I like how I can say more to you sense you get into more detail and that isn't a bad thing, I honestly really like that xD it lets me share more without comming off as really weird ;; w ;; I live with an ESFP (my brother), and I have 2 cousins who are also ESFPs so it's kinda tiring Dx they all REALLY love annoying me and pushing my buttons. Maybe that's why Ratcht never gets along with Bumble bee, I mean, I know he's an INFJ, but we have the sensing personality type mixing with the intuative, and I think that's how I don't get along with them, and maybe why Bumble bee isn't the most plesant to be around when it comes to the more intuative bots xD
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HMB-BellyBomb Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was so cute ;A;
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RadioactiveRays Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hngg thank you ×v×\
I'm surprised someone on here actually read it lol
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