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I am better at living a life without a 
YouTube media-reviewer,
who used to be a friend and a crush.
I no longer look back at the place we 
went together.
He is distant as my vision can see towards
the city skyline.

The man drove me into romantic madness
I never went off the deep-end of my sanity,
but in the moments of boy-craziness,
there was a revolution in my soul.
It was called feminism.

It told me that he doesn't respect me,
even though he seemed to be a "nice guy".
It drove me to graduate,
cope with a pet's death,
and working at two jobs.
It was the muse for an art show that empowers
women all over town.

Now I never dare to look at his work
His name tastes like expired fruit
The memories of what he once had with me are 
being replaced by thoughts of stories that I always
make sure to bring to life.

He may be a star in one audience's eyes
But I know times change
He is now the loser I never want to unexpectedly
see again. 
  A poem dedicated for the girls who are uncertain if they could live a life without their high-school crushes. Well, I am here to tell you that you can.
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PrincessofDreams123 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry that guy treated you poorly.  But thank you for letting girls know that their crushes are not what completes them.  
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RachbakN Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
😺😻
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PrincessofDreams123 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Foxes?
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RachbakN Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Cats.
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PrincessofDreams123 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh
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RachbakN Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
That’s ok if you see them as cats.
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PrincessofDreams123 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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RachbakN Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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reborn-galaxy Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
who?
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RachbakN Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Rather not discuss.
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reborn-galaxy Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, well I am here for you *hugs*
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RachbakN Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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:iconreborn-galaxy:
reborn-galaxy Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My pleasure.
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RachbakN Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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reborn-galaxy Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love you <3
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RachbakN Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Can you give me a theme prompt for fan fictions on this site, please?
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