you're very welcome !!! and i totally get that mannn all the time its hard to see certain stuff when you've been working on it/staring at it for so long and sometimes it just takes someone else to point out the obvious and you're like oh shit yeah LOL
i don't think i've ever written a critique before but i thought i'd give it a shot i'd like to point out that i really adore the way you shade. i especially love the shading on the clothes; speaking of which, you've pretty much mastered the folds n stuff like. the folds don't look over crowded or too flat so good job on that!! the only thing i can really think of for improvement is perhaps add some indentations where the pins are stuck in her skin? or maybe make the thickness of the rope the same as the noose?