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© 2017 - 2019 pvlimpsest
my head hurts like hell, i literally haven't slept in three days, and i want to murder my ap bio teacher.

it's a wonderful day in the neighborhood.

this is for Mikittykun's contest (which you can find here -->mikittykun.deviantart.com/jour…), the theme is seeking solace

i don't own the characters or the cover image

you own you
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kuragebotStudent Writer
this is so good im tattooing this whole fic onto my ass
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i hope you have a big ass my friend because this shit is long as fuck and i congratulate you for getting through it
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yu oh my god im -
i finally made time to sit down and properly digest this and i ?? fuck there's so much i have to say.
i'm incredibly overwhelmed, by the way you execute and structure this so well and the way you properly and subtly incorporate each character's personal section and their motivation and backgrounds and polar/affectionate relationships with the reader holy shit you did it so well
and i love how their dispositions are all so conflicting with each other, from a gentle kind of love to a rabid and animalistic one, yet they all work so well??
my personal favorites were the bit with daichi and oikawa in church:

"When we were hiding out, and you just wouldn't stop bleeding, you know what I thought? I thought, 'Please God, please save us. Please don't take this one away.'" He scoffs and crosses his arms. "Looks like the bastard got me anyway."

there's something about church that is so unique and ironic in ways that make criminals and arsonists like them human?? like as fucked up as they may be, they still have some desperation to pray for a god to keep them grounded or forgive some of their worst sins. adfhlfjfjsla and the sharp contrast you made of daichi and his feather light affections vs kuroo and his almost toxic kind of love IM FUCKIGN
YU FUCK YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW GOOD THIS IS FROM YOUR PLOT STRUCTURE AND IMAGERY TO YOUR BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL DICTION - I'M SO DAMN OVERWHELMED !! ! !!

good luck with ap bio!! study hard but remember to get some rest! sos help me with ap environmental science :+)
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pvlimpsestHobbyist Writer
//whE E Z ES

UM?????? ESSCUSE M E?!?!?!

how dare you??? come into my house???? and be so nice to me an D??? give me so many compliments!?!?!?!?

i'm sorry how dare you make me feel this way!?!?!?

how dare you give me warm fuzzies in my chest and a big smile??? ummMMM I FEEL Attacked??!

lmao, but in all seriousness, thank you so much. this is, like, a huge confidence booster bc i just didn't feel that satisfied with the way this one ended.

also lmao i feel!!! someone help us!!! why is school like this?!!?! :^))))))
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THIS WAS SO SO SO BEAUTIFUL. Your writing is just so unique and it compliments this entire plots so well, and I can't word right now because this has just taken my breath away.

This was better than amazing. It was breathtaking... And everything.
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<3 thanks babe
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I cannot properly form a sentence.
This was a gorgeous piece! Thank you so much for entering
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thank you so much for taking the time to read it! i know it was super long, so i appreciate it :^)
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bookerrorStudent Writer
I just couldn't stop reading! I was already super hyped when yous said you were writing a mafia au!! I LOVE FOR MAFIA AUS!! And I was so enthralled with the fairy tale elements you included for each character in the beginning of this piece, it really set the tone for the rest of the story.

Your ability to capture the mood and beautifully paint the setting in the reader's mind is absolutely magical! All the details you pit about the setting, the five senses, the gestures of the characters, it made all seem so real.

And speaking of characters, I love how you gave them their own little twist, again with the intros, and with their relatioships to the reader throughout! JUST GODKEFKDINFNRKTN IT WAS SO AMAZING TO READ!! I love you and your writing so much!!

I remember my AP Bio days, I remember taking it as Senior and feeling the same murderous intent towards my teacher (now that i'm a senior and no longer in her class, we're ironically really close lol). SURVIVE!! KICK AP BIO IN THE ASS!!
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<3333 AH SHAN THANK YOU 

mafia aus are always the most fun to write bc you can go anywhere with the plot and the characters and it'll be great

sigh, i'm trying to hang in there, but ap bio is seriously making me want to die
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This is everything. 
I can't put into words how deep this piece touched me, how much I love this.
The soberness fit perfectly into the setting and your style is just beautiful.
I think it was a good move to give the reader a second aspect of their personality 
and to name it, because I believe that that's what all people have and do.
That the persona they show to the world is different than what they are,
especially in a setting such as this where you have to take yourself back to survive.
I actually have no idea if anything of what I'm saying makes any sense whatsoever;
I am no writer, I am still high off that fic and what I'm writing is just what I feel in the spur of the moment.
Thank you so much for writing this!
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<33333 you're so kind, thank you!!!! i'm happy you felt something :^)
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Holy shit this isn't amazing. Everything is so well done and this is so beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this
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<3 thanks boi!
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Oh my gosh I'm so sorry! I realize that I said 'isn't' oh dear I mean to say is this is fabulous 
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This is one of the best things I've ever read.
If not the best.
Honestly, thank you.
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<3 thank you for liking it, i'm so happy you enjoyed reading it
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I wanted to cry throughout this entire thing, I dont know if it was because it was so good or what. Point being that this is a great fic to start off the new year with.

I love how every one of the boys loved the reader, and vice versa if all in a different way.

Amazing works.
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:^) thank you! i'm happy you enjoyed it 
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I did, it was amazing. You're welcome!
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AuGHHHH ur writing is sO GOOD i was hella stoked for this fic
i love how you wrote reader and Leader like they were two different people that was really interesting. and i love how much the boys all love and look out for reader in their own way??? i just this is 2much4me
i really love everything about this. your writing is so smooth and poetic and it makes everything come to life in a really unique way. this story is so raw and heartbreaking but you have those little happy moments and I JUST
i teared up a few times man
this is super good and i love it so much
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!!! THANKS MY DUDE!!! I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT

lol you've been super patient with me, ever since i started it in october and only finished it now
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I did not know that I could love like this.

The duality the reader's experiencing--as (name) and as Leader--is truly (and I say this with absolute conviction) fascinating. They're mostly opposing forces, but they work together in an odd way to shape the reader overall. And the boys do too.

Along with the reader's duality are the boys that you've meticulously weaved into the plot; they're each vastly different from each other, but they all tie back into the same source that grounds them when needed: the reader. Your writing exemplifies their traits and characterizes them fittingly for this au. I also like how they're fiercely loyal to the reader in their own ways, furthering the bonds that they share with the reader.

Your writing is lovely, being some of the finest I've ever had the pleasure of reading.

I was connected with this piece. I could see it. I could hear the gray voices.
Pairing a color like gray with a voice and using it to describe the voice leaves a heavy impression in my mind. You didn't need to use fifty different words to describe a voice. You said it was gray. I heard the gray instantly. There are other examples of when you do this in your writing. It's breathtakingly beautiful, and I'm going to have to use this strategy, too, because it's one of the many components that fills each letter of text with a small puff of air.

The commentary on God is something I've yet to see done so mesmerizingly. There are a plethora of people that debate about the existence of God, and in this piece there were subtle snips of dialogue that play with that concept. It's not forced, nor is it completely removed. A perfect amount, if I do say so myself. This adds characterization to your work as well, because humans debate about God. So did these characters. You're bringing the characters off of the paper and letting them move.

Detail. Detail, detail, detail. How do you do it? There's enough to where I don't have to force myself to see it, and it's not overwhelming to the point where I have to take a moment and think. Fluidity is one of your many strong suits. When I read one of your works, I live in amazement.

I want to learn from you. Believe me when I say this: I love your work. I love its ability to teach me how far I can love your newest piece. I love how it can keep me on my toes the entire time. I love how I want to learn from you.

Thank you.

Get some sleep, because you deserve it. If you ever want to rant about ap bio or trade writing tips, know that I'm always here! ;D
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<3 thank you!

you're so very kind, i'm really glad that you can glean some sort of enjoyment and learn things from my writing, that's honestly the highest compliment i could ever ask for 

thank you for the offer! i'll take you up on that sometime :^)
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