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Bada bap ba baaah, I'm lovin' this. :]
This is a great picture! One of my favourites in all of dA (that I've seen so far).
Vision:
Very clear vision here! I can tell what your stand on the golden arches is. Though this piece is simple, it's easy to tell your point of view and what you were thinking while you were making it. Very good!
Originality:
Need I explain here? I feel that we all know just how original this piece is. Not many see fast food this way, much less express it in art. This is the first piece I've seen like this. It would be a crime to give anything less than five stars for originality.
Technique:
Not too bad technique, but there are a few things I'm unsure about. I know where the lightsource of the image is, though I'm not sure how the arches would reflect light as they do. Certainly not a bad thing, the colours of the arches certainly add, but I'm not sure how the lighting would illuminate the arches like they are. I'm also unsure whether you used clay to create the image or if you rendered it in a 3D program, though my guess would be the latter. The text doesn't seem to fit, it seems there could have been a little more done to it. The text, in it's state, seems just a little out of place, though not by much. The simplicity of the image is, however, divine.
Impact:
This image simply blows my mind. It makes me remember how such simplicity can make amazing pictures. This picture, above all else, makes me laugh. The simple truth of the image, that dirty truth no one likes to admit, is just so bluntly represented, it's just hilarious. I certainly couldn't help but laugh at how you represented it. Nowadays, whenever I pass a McD's, I think of this image and just start laughing.

About the light - check mcd's logo the arches reflect the light from the top left, just like in my picture.
And text - it's exactly the same font that in macds' advertisement.
And by the way is it that "easy to tell my point of view and what I was thinking while I was making it"? Coz I don't hate mcd's and I was thinking about cute kittens while I was making it - can you see it in my picture?
Thank for you critique, I really appreciate it.
And text - it's exactly the same font that in macds' advertisement.
And by the way is it that "easy to tell my point of view and what I was thinking while I was making it"? Coz I don't hate mcd's and I was thinking about cute kittens while I was making it - can you see it in my picture?

Thank for you critique, I really appreciate it.


























First of all, ive got to say that this is very original! Ive never seen anything like this before, its humourous, and it looks like it had a lot of effort put into it, which is one of the key factors that a good deviation has. The graphics are great, and the quality is just as good, and it really gets its point through (whatever it is, im still trying to figure it out LOL) But overall, great work! If i were you, i would most definatly keep this up, and do more deviations like this and post them for the world to see!

Then not many people understand that a critique is designed to help the artist improve in certain areas. You must say what the artist should IMPROVE on aswell as what they're doing well. If you just point out good things they're doing, then it is just a comment because it's not really helping them IMPROVE. This isn't a hard concept to grasp.


























Well now I have to say I'm loving it. LOL but anyway. This is good work here. I can't tell if you made this from clay or just used a 3D program to render it up. But in any case you did good. It makes a statement and at the same time it is good harmless humor. We all know while McDonalds is good tasteing, their not good for you to eat all the time. And if you eat to much of them you'll get sick. Which is what I feel is stated in this Deviantation. Keep it up push.


























This is one of the best quality shots. You have very perfect texture and its very minimal which makes a very nice statement. The colors are simple and make for a great view and this is very easy to eye. On a small scale (as to what I expect it is) this shows a bigger image. You appear to be making a statement that many could be sick of the huge corporation (although you yourself may not be aware that you have done this yet). But overall, this is a very well done piece of work. Nice work and don't stop.


























Well my time has come to hang-out in the graphic section.
I cannot resist this image !! I tried and it make me laugh every time I notice it at the DD section.
Way to go for graphic interpretation, the colors and the well recognizable logo are superb, the simplicity of the image matches the general corporate graphics.
Not sure about the message of the piece, the little playdoe dude vomits it because he ate too much out of loving it or vomits because it was well proven McD's isn't the healthiest choice you have out there.
Either or whatever the intent was and everyone will have their own version - you getting A+ in my graphic books for clarity of the message, simple and clean graphics and outstanding sense of humor.
I'm Loving IT !!!


























Brilliantly made!
Love the the message that this piece gives you,
Making you have that sort of playdough feeling, reminding you of somthing you would have made in highschool for a laugh.
I think if you were to get rid of the splatter effects on the floor this picture wouldn't be as effective, as that effect really strongly shows that this poor fella has really eaten a bad burger, so that is a nice touch!
Looking at this, you wouldnt do bad as a graphical designer.
As you have probably heard before sometimes simple can be better.
A pure and simple piece, as effective as it is funny.
Well done and thanks for sharing


























Sorry i write in spanish, youre traslate later, please.
Muy bueno, me encanta el gráfico y el uso de los elementos de la marca para crear tu obra. los colores son muy buenos me gusto mucho la idea. La tipografía que utilizaste no creo que sea la adecuada a menos de que sea la tipografía parecida a la publicidad de Mac Donalds.
No se si te inspiraste en esos documentales sobre la comida rá<img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="

Es plastilina? si es asi muy bueno el personaje central. Bueno, en fín todo me gusto, felicidades.


























Fine use of humor and satire.
Use of appropriate colors, fonts and shapes are a definite plus. The symmetry around the arches works well.
Unsure if you meant to give a deliberate urinal appearance to the head, I view this as a definite plus and adding to the message.
The humor is evident.
The main concern I have isn't the work but the rating system itself. I wish there were better rubrics in place so I didn't have to guess at what to rate certain areas- I'm a professional music adjudicator and rely on those guidelines to arrove at a fair appraisal of a work or performance.
All I know for certain is this- you've created a fun piece of imagery, the humor and satire is very funny and deserving of a very positive critique. Well done! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="



Thanks for your kind reply-
I've been a Music Adjudicator for the National Judges' Association for 25 years, and I figured you deserved a positive critique from someone since you asked.
I've offered to try and get the rubrics in place to give better strength to the system.
100 words may be lengthy as well. But, I can see where people want more input than "Great job!" Most critique I provide is on tape during performance and not on the final sheet of paper- so, I can see their point there.
This is a wonderfully witty piece and veryd eserving of high ratings.
I've been a Music Adjudicator for the National Judges' Association for 25 years, and I figured you deserved a positive critique from someone since you asked.
I've offered to try and get the rubrics in place to give better strength to the system.
100 words may be lengthy as well. But, I can see where people want more input than "Great job!" Most critique I provide is on tape during performance and not on the final sheet of paper- so, I can see their point there.
This is a wonderfully witty piece and veryd eserving of high ratings.

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