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My Immortal rw Ch 11
Draco’s P.O.V
         She rejected me again, I watch her leave the room and I fought back tears pull yourself together Malfoy I stood up. “I need to talk to uncle” I whispered before waiting till the end of the day and leaving for Snape’s classroom, right now would be his planning block so I knocked on the door “come in” I heard his low voice say. I walked in I looked around making sure the coast was clear “Uncle Severus, I need someone to talk to” he nodded and motioned to a seat and I sat down, “what brings you to me?” He asked, “well, um” I coughed, “I wanted to talk to you about girls” he raised his eyebrow and looked at me “Pansy?” I gagged, “no not her, Ebony” he didn’t seem so surprised, “no wonder you can’t stop staring at her” he commented and put his paperwork away. “Now tell me what’s the probl
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My Immortal rw Ch 10
         I laid on the bed shivering in fear, my father, I just saw my father and he was terrifying. I closed my eyes and suckled on my teether and dozed off. I woke up to Willow whimpering in her sleep, I walked to her and got in bed with her cuddling her and petting her hair. She stopped whimpering and calmed down, I wonder what are her nightmare about are they about me going rogue and hurting her? I really hope not, I could never hurt her. The next morning, I checked and it was raining I smile and went to wake up Willow when I saw she bled through her shorts and onto the bed. I got her uniform ready for her, some pain medication, my spare chocolate and got a shower ready for her. I softly shook her awake and make her take some pain medication before walking her to the bathroom where she went to the shower. Meanwhile, I got her stained clothes and bed sheets and went to go get them washed while she showered. I came back to a dressed Willow who was munching on
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My Immortal rw Ch 9
         “So how do you plan to sneak that thing in?” I asked as we reached the gate, “did you forget you can teleport and speed us there?” she asked. “I am too tired to teleport, just hang onto me” I whispered “Mary go on ahead!” I called out to her and she continues walking. I held her hand and we were in our dorm in a flash, “I am still disappointed” I crossed my arms over my chest “hey it's like having a boys dick without the stupid boy” she exclaimed.
         When we went to lunch I munched on a chocolate bar and I felt a crack, I bit into a surprise nut and when I pulled back my fang was stuck in it. I panicked covering my mouth and running to Mr.Hagrid's office, he was there grading papers tears fell from my eyes. I was in a lot of pain as he got up “Ebony what's wrong child?” Hagrid asked. I uncovered my mouth and opened it “oh both milk f
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My Immortal rw Ch 8
         The most of my Thursday and Friday was spent doing makeup work for all my classes, whenever Draco and I made eye contact we'd glare at each other. I was finally on break Saturday and I walked down the hall with black ripped tights a black long-sleeved turtleneck crop top (that I made myself) and dark purple cardigan. I adjusted my thin choker as I walked passed Willow who was staring out the window, she smelled like blood. I stopped and walked to her, her eyes were half lidded and she stared blankly out the window, hand on chin very out of it. “Willow? You feel ok?” She nodded, “just on my period, the hormones make my depression worse” she whispered. I pet her back, “how can I make you feel better" she shrugged, then I got an idea and grabbed her hand dragging her to the dorm and I knock on Mary's door. She opens it, her orange hair a big tangled mess and she was in a pastel green tank top and shorts “morning" she ya
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My Immortal rw Ch 7
         When Willow fell asleep, I stepped out of bed I adjusted my pj shorts and I grabbed Willow razors and speeded out of the school. It was snowing out and freezing, but I didn’t care, I wanted to freeze to death then and there. I walked to the forbidden forest, I sat on a trunk and open the razor package. “I won’t be here to be called a whore” I whisper to myself, I opened the package and pulled out a razor. I started to cry and I dragged it across my wrist, blood dripped onto the snow burning it and I kept going sobbing out. “That’s not going to change that we had sex” I heard his voice behind me, and I felt something warm wrap around me, I smelt his cologne on it. I looked it was his robe, “what do you want?” I felt him sit beside me he grabbed the razor and threw it somewhere, my wrist already healed but it still burned and stung. “Be honest with me Ebony, what are you a succubus? A demon? Wha
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My Immortal rw Ch 6
         We sat down as other students piled in, I turn to Willow and she smiled having a few scull hair clips holding her bangs back; however, she wasn’t wearing any makeup today. “Why the bare face?” I asked curiosity laced in my tone, “s-sorry do I need it?” She asked blushing, “no not at all, you’re actually really pretty without it, seriously all you need is lipstick and that’s it” her face went bright red and she fidget in her seat “oh your fucking with me,” “no I’m serious” “I’ll go get breakfast.” I looked at Mary who sat across from me, she grabbed a bowl of fruit “has Willow interviewed Diablo yet?” “No, why?” “To make sure he has good intentions, we protect each other remember, since Willow hasn’t done it I will. He doesn’t have a class next block does he?” she shook her head. “Good me neither, te
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My Immortal rw Ch 5
         After the nurse dismissed me, Willow didn’t leave my side, she helped me pack a bag as Dumbledore got into contact with my mom. It was 8pm and I sat in Draco’s favorite chair and went on my Gameboy and played Pokémon red, I know extremely American but I couldn’t help myself. The last time I saw my mom was four years, since she constantly moved, I stayed with Willow during summer breaks. “And where do you think you’re going?” I heard Gregory growl, “someone is on his period” he yanked me out of the seat “look you little cunt” he lifted me off the ground. Willow acted quickly pulling out her bine wand with unicorn hair out and waved it “Petrificus Tatalus” she shouted making him freeze and she pulled me out of his grip. “What have you done to Draco?” he shouted as I shook and started to cry into my sleeve.
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Draco’s P.O.V

         She rejected me again, I watch her leave the room and I fought back tears pull yourself together Malfoy I stood up. “I need to talk to uncle” I whispered before waiting till the end of the day and leaving for Snape’s classroom, right now would be his planning block so I knocked on the door “come in” I heard his low voice say. I walked in I looked around making sure the coast was clear “Uncle Severus, I need someone to talk to” he nodded and motioned to a seat and I sat down, “what brings you to me?” He asked, “well, um” I coughed, “I wanted to talk to you about girls” he raised his eyebrow and looked at me “Pansy?” I gagged, “no not her, Ebony” he didn’t seem so surprised, “no wonder you can’t stop staring at her” he commented and put his paperwork away. “Now tell me what’s the problem,” I took a deep breath, “we like each other but she keeps pushing me away. I think me keeping my death eater persona wasn’t the best idea,” “Ebony was the one who’s mom said you weren’t good enough in front of you right?” I nodded he chuckles “your life is going to be a living nightmare if her mom doesn’t like you” he said.

         “But I’m serious Uncle Severus, I think she’s scared to date me because of my blood status, mainly how father will react” he nodded, “yes your father will not approve of that courtship” I balled up my fist. “I don’t care how father thinks anymore! I’m 17 I should make my own choices now” I said with anger, “don’t get angry with me. You know your parents want the best for you and they believe that to be a pureblood.” “Then why did they let a half-blood like you be my godfather, they must have exceptions. Ebony, she’s my exception she…” I trailed off. “I’m listening” I took a deep shaky breath, “she’s not like any other of the witches in this school, she doesn’t fear me at all, she broke my walls down and embraced the real Draco Malfoy. And I don’t want to give up on her especially-” I gulped stopping myself remembering Ebony’s blood melting the snow. “Especially?” Severus pushed, “especially since we had sex. It was technically all my fault and we didn’t really want it” “that’s not how sex works Draco.”

         I sighed sorry Ebony “I kissed Ebony’s neck forcing her body into a vampire breeding heat and the pheromones hit my nose and I couldn’t control my body so we had sex and if she’s pregnant I feel like a huge asshole for at least not trying to be with her and she became suicidal after our first time-” I took in a big gulp of air, “and I promised to not tell anyone we had sex or that she’s a vampire but I told you so PLEASE DON’T TELL ANYONE” I panted. He put his hands up defensively “don’t worry I won’t. But wait you had sex with a vampire? And now you fear you could’ve gotten her pregnant” I nodded. “Draco Malfoy what situation did you get yourself into” he pinched the bridge of his nose disappointed. “Ok, so first things first, she won’t get pregnant by you. Vampires and mortals can’t mix blood very easily” I felt a huge weight lifted off my shoulders then it came back ten times folded, if we do end up together, we can’t have kids together. “Second you know your parents will be furious if you have a courtship with her. Your mother disowned her own sister for not marrying a pureblood. Her heart is too soft to do that to you, but your father isn’t like that. Third if you do truly love her, you’ll have to become a vampire to be able to have kids together and live together forever, which of course will distance your family from you. Fourth is that vampires are hunted down, and if this word gets out then you and Ebony’s life are at risk until she or the both of you are dead.” He explained, “vampires are forever lovers, that’s why they are known as the most romantic mythical creature. Once they fall in love they can’t ever go back, you might believe you love her now but if the next 30 years you may not and you’ll leave a heart broken vampire behind who will never find love again.”

         I nodded and scratched my neck, “I hear what you’re saying but I still want to pursuit her. She’s the only one who sees the real me and understands me. How can I woo her heart?” He pondered for a minute, “she seems to be the girl to like handmade things, perhaps write her a poem or create something for her. Remember handmade not wand made.” I nodded, I sensed her nearby, the charm I used to track her was buzzing in my head “she’s coming” I whispered and hid before she knocked on the door. “Come in” Snape said and she walked in, her low heals clacked on the floor as she carried a stack of papers, “here you go, all my missing and makeup assignments done.” “Nice job Ebony” she smiled and nodded, “thanks Mr.Snape” she rubbed her thighs together, for God’s sake why did she have to come back with weight in all the right places. I remembered gripping those thighs and her squishy hips when I plowed into her, I shook my head rushing the perverted thoughts out of my head.

         I see her nose twitched as she sniffed the air, she looked in my direction but didn’t seem to see me. She then left and I emerged, “cowardly I see” “she just rejected me I don’t want her to feel pressured” he nodded. “Goodnight Draco,” “goodnight Mr.Snape” I said before I left his classroom and went to my dorm something handmade, well I’m not good with words. Maybe a painting? Something to impress her I thought before showering and going to bed.

         Her scent was still in my room, an earthy rose scent, it was comforting as I dozed off to sleep. My eyes snap open “but wait who else likes her?” She won’t tell me, so I’ll have to investigate. Ok now I went to sleep with an agenda tomorrow. All I could dream about was of her, her pale white skin her short stature that makes all her actions look cute, her soft hair that smells of muted flowers and how childish she looks with her missing fangs. She’s so adorable, I don’t care if she has no chest like Vincent and Greg pester me about, it adds to her cuteness and how spicy of a personality she has to that cuteness.
Friedrich's bio sheet
The colors in the background to show that his wings are transparent. 

Name: Friedrich Otto Raven
Age: 745 
Culture: Traditional vampire
Ethnicity: Born in the middle ages from the "Holy Roman kingdom" (possibly German or French decent)
Orientation: Straight
Relations: Ebony's father. 
Mariana Sophia Herrera Cortez's ex-husband 

Traits: 
-Traditionalist
-Radical
-Manipulative
-Apathetic
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         I laid on the bed shivering in fear, my father, I just saw my father and he was terrifying. I closed my eyes and suckled on my teether and dozed off. I woke up to Willow whimpering in her sleep, I walked to her and got in bed with her cuddling her and petting her hair. She stopped whimpering and calmed down, I wonder what are her nightmare about are they about me going rogue and hurting her? I really hope not, I could never hurt her. The next morning, I checked and it was raining I smile and went to wake up Willow when I saw she bled through her shorts and onto the bed. I got her uniform ready for her, some pain medication, my spare chocolate and got a shower ready for her. I softly shook her awake and make her take some pain medication before walking her to the bathroom where she went to the shower. Meanwhile, I got her stained clothes and bed sheets and went to go get them washed while she showered. I came back to a dressed Willow who was munching on the chocolate, “lets go to the great hall” I said and she grinned at me, “don’t need to tell me twice.”

         We walked to the great hall and I sat down as she got food, Mary was playing with her green streak looking very nervous, “what’s wrong Bloody Mary?” She looked up and blushed, “I-I don’t think Ash is who he says he is” she whispered, “when we were dancing last night, I didn’t feel anything I thought I’d at least feel like a bulge or something” she fidgets. “What are you suggesting?” I asked knew she’d find out “I think he’s gay and only dating me to hide it. The no bulge isn’t the only evidence I have. He acts very feminine and even has a swagger to him” she looked like she was about to cry. “That isn’t it,” I almost shouted “I can guarantee he isn’t gay, before making assumptions how about you ask him?” Mary nodded and ate her breakfast, I felt eyes on me and I looked up scanning the room till I fell on the Hufflepuff table. A boy with honey blonde hair was staring at me with his chocolate brown eyes, his freckled face was in a scowl as he stared at me. I’ve seen him around, I think his name is Ness Higland he was a fourth year I’m sure but why is he staring at me so fiercely like I killed his whole family. I stared back just as harshly until one of his friends tapped him on the shoulder and he had to break his gaze ok that was weird I thought to myself as Willow sat her cross body sugar skull bag down and began to eat.

         Curiosity struck me when I saw the bag, she always had it during her period (I never really had a period, mother said us female vampires only have breeding heats once a year) I grabbed it and opened it. There were many bright yellow squares in it and I pulled one out, “what the fuck are you doing?” Willow harshly whispered snatching the bag and square, I gave her a bewildered look “what was that?” She leaned over and whispered, “it’s a pad, it catches the blood so I’m not leaving a mess everywhere I sit” “oh, I really need to learn about the mortal body more” I said and she nodded “don’t you think?” I smiled and we were off to class, in Ms.McGonagall class I was assigned to turn a pencil into a lizard while everyone else was doing the current lesson. If I was successful, I could join them quickly, I waved my wand and chanted a spell and the pencil puffed into grey smoke and out ran a red lizard with ultra-blue dots on it. It was so fast a barely caught it “I did it Ms.McGonagall I did it!” She smiled at me, “good job, now you have to turn it back” I nodded and did the spell again but it changed into an albino hedgehog “aww” I said loudly catching Mary, Hermione, Willow, and some other students attention the girls awed too. I try to pet its belly, but it hissed at me “can I keep it McGonagall? Please” I gave her puppy eyes, “I did miss my last yule ball,” I argued giving myself a leg to stand on.

         She pursed her lips together unsure then nodded, “just take loving care of her alright?” I nodded and I gave her to McGonagall so I can pick her up later at the end of the day. I sat with the rest some who were transforming glass into sand and others turning things into birds. I got the turning into bird’s section and I was successful with the cups, book, and papers all beautiful blue yellow and green song birds. I smile at my success then I felt a pang of fear hit me, my father’s voice echoed in my head ‘redeem yourself’ and I gulped. When class was over “hey Ebony-” Willow started but I ran out creating distance I cannot put you in harm’s way, I cannot put anyone in harm’s way I screamed in my head. I sat in the common room and sucked on my pacifier to calm myself down, it didn’t help that the aching of my gums traveled to my temples and made focusing difficult. Probably why the lizard turned into a hedgehog; I sighed to myself I do not doubt that my father is probably watching me, but I can’t kill Draco or any of my close friends. The thing is what will he do if I don’t? Probably kill them all, maybe the whole school who knows? I started to shake then cry curling up on the love seat.

         “Ebony, what’s wrong?” I felt his hand on my shoulder and I didn’t look up “there’s no one here” he whispered, and I looked up. His icy eyes soften as he wiped away my bloody tears “can I talk to you? In a more private place” he looked around again cautiously, I nodded and grabbed his hand and he led me to his room. I felt an awkward silence go over us as we sat on his bed, the only other times we were here was us sleeping together. He seemed to be collecting himself before sighing and laid back in his bed, I turned my head because all I could see was him without his uniform on god fucking dammit these cursed teenage hormones! I cursed to myself. “I know it’s a long ways away but, wanna go somewhere on Valentines day?” Draco broke the silence, I looked back at him but all I saw was the shirtless Draco that pinned me down. ‘Redeem yourself, kill that little boy lover of yours’ was all I heard in my head as I processed his question, “I-I’m sorry Draco, you are a somewhat sweet guy but I can’t wake you up on your offer. I-” “can I at least know why?” Oh boy he loves doing that, putting me on the fucking spot!

         I gripped the edge of my skirt (it was Mary’s but now it’s mine, she can afford getting another one), “I am a danger to you Malfoy, I know you think I’m not and that you can handle me but you are completely wrong. Don’t let that pureblood arrogance get to your head because wizard magic doesn’t work on us vampires,” I remembered what father threatened, it explains why that paralyzing spell only works for a few minutes. I stood up “you’re a mortal and I’m an immortal, it’s best if we stop crossing paths and stop playing this love game. It’s to keep you from getting killed, don’t complicate things by doing this” he pulled me on top of him and I felt my face burning. “I’d take the risk, I like things being complicated” he gave me a shit eating grin, I pushed off “I mean it Malfoy” I said before leaving.

         As I walked through the halls of Hogwarts going to my next class, flying, I bumped into that Ness kid. “Hey kiddo,” “we are literally the same height and you’re supposed to be 17” he said flatly, just right in the fucking pride! I growled, I shot down quickly grabbing him by his ankle and holding him upside down “what was that?” I asked smirking, “n-nothing! Please just let me down” “as you wish” I said as I dropped him. “Tell me why were you giving me the stink eye at breakfast,” I crossed my arms, “you know what us Higlands are famous for right?” I nodded, “yeah accurate predictions of preventable things” I remembered off the top of my head, “so you have a prediction for me?” He crossed his arms and nodded, “only on one condition,” “shoot kiddo” “you teach me all your cool flying moves.” I shrugged, “fine, I’m going to flight class now, now whats the prediction” “I saw a lady with a whip made of blades, she got your leg cut off because the heal of your shoe slipped under you when you tried to run.” I gave him a weird look, “that’s it?” “Yes, now please teach me” I looked at him, no he wasn’t lying unfortunately “fine lets go” he cheered.
         “So how do you plan to sneak that thing in?” I asked as we reached the gate, “did you forget you can teleport and speed us there?” she asked. “I am too tired to teleport, just hang onto me” I whispered “Mary go on ahead!” I called out to her and she continues walking. I held her hand and we were in our dorm in a flash, “I am still disappointed” I crossed my arms over my chest “hey it's like having a boys dick without the stupid boy” she exclaimed.

         When we went to lunch I munched on a chocolate bar and I felt a crack, I bit into a surprise nut and when I pulled back my fang was stuck in it. I panicked covering my mouth and running to Mr.Hagrid's office, he was there grading papers tears fell from my eyes. I was in a lot of pain as he got up “Ebony what's wrong child?” Hagrid asked. I uncovered my mouth and opened it “oh both milk fangs are out, they are gonna take a while to grow back. You'll be teething soon, hmm” he walked back to his desk and opened the drawer and pulled out a baby soother,  it had rubbery teething spikes on the nipple. “I got this just in case you needed it, here” I grabbed it and opened the package “thanks, this hurts though” “the pain will go away,” he smiled and I left.

         On Sunday I woke up with my gums in pain, I grabbed the paci and started to suckle and chew on it. Ok that feels a lot better, I woke Willow up and she gave me a weird look “you judge me for stealing from the sex store?” She quirked her eyebrow, “no Hagrid gave it to me because I'm teething,” I said before flinching in pain and popped it back in. I pulled her up and she got dressed and we went into the library, we saw Hermione and Mary studying at a table. Hermione was reading to Mary as she wrote down notes, these books were very hefty for her; additionally, they small print with practically a tiny single space, I don’t have dyslexia but I can only imagine how difficult it must be to read. “How do you spell that?” Hermione started, “i-n-v-i-s-i-b Mary thats a p not a b” “oh sorry,” she erases and writes it down again. “L-e-o-s-a-s” she finished spelling.

         I walked towards them and sit down across them, “why the pacifier?” Hermione asked, i popped it out “it’s my fetish leave me alone” I said quickly, she gave me a weird look and shook her head, “someone will see you and question it, you might get in trouble” she said cautiously. “Don’t worry Hermione! Everything will be fine,” Willow waved off as I suckled on it, I slept to Hermione reading softly. I woke up to Mary shaking me, “let’s go get dinner” she whispered, “Willow is already in the great hall” I nod softly and follow her. I leaned on Mary as we walked to the hall, she was 5’4 so the lost I could do was rest my forehead on her shoulder blade as we walked. “Want me to get you coffee? Can’t have you snoozing at the pub” Mary asked worried and I nod.

         She sat me down at the Slytherin table and I leaned on Willow I dozed off again and I wake up to Mary shaking me again. Everyone was staring at me, Hufflepuffs, Ravenclaws, and Gryffindors Mary whispers “you were snoring really loudly” “Willow why didn't you wake me up!” I whispered harshly, “you looked peaceful so I didn't want to disturb you” I put my head down hiding my face and Willow stood “STOP STARING YOU CREEPS” she yelled and I heard a shift in seats. I looked up as Mary handed me a coffee I sniffed it, good no milk or sugar I gulped it down. “I'm gonna go to my room” I stood and slumped out, I finally got to the common room and sat in the love seat suckling on the paci. Someone opened the doorway and Draco walked in, “for fuck sakes why my chair!” He questioned and I only opened one eye and closed it. He stepped towards me and yanked my paci out and I groaned in pain, it was a necklace on me and there was blood dripping off the teether.

         “What in God's name is with this?” he asked, “I'm teething” I bore my absent  fangs and I put it back in my mouth. “Why not go to bed?” “I'm going somewhere” “where” “I ain't gonna tell you, you tattletail” he clenched his fists. “Are you going to eat?” I shrugged, cuddling into the seat, it was just his cologne and it calmed me down and I started feeling sleepy again. I felt a hand grip my thigh I opened my eyes again, he had a very angry face “why do you keep making this harder for me” “what do you mean?” I rolled my eyes, “purposefully being adorable and acting innocent, you make this harder for me” he forced my legs open wide and put his knee in between pressing against my womanhood. He softly knees me and put the paci back in my mouth, I softly moan on it “now you know how I feel” he grunted in my ear. I pushed him off, the moment we ceased physical contact I teleported to my room. At least he didn’t put it in his mouth, with my blood on it it could’ve turned him into a vampire and that’s the last thing I need, the immortal pain, the cute immortal pain… ugh focus! Wait what if i turned Willow into a vampire by accident? Images flashed before my eyes, her wearing a suit to our midnight wedding and us adopting a few kids I then shook my head. More images pass but with Draco, me turning him into a vampire and we having a few kids some blond some with ebony hair like mine. I felt my face go hot and I slap myself get yourself together this is embarrassing! I grabbed my Frankenstein book and started to read it.

         After a few hours it was time to get ready, I put on a black tutu that was covered in glitter, I then put on a skeleton tank top, ripped tights over fishnets and black sneakers. “Willow please help” I asked her holding out lipstick and an eye shadow pallet, she smiled and nodded she had on a simple black Green Day t-shirt on and ripped light-wash jeans she didn’t put on her shoes yet. I closed my eyes and felt her soft hands do their magic, “let’s bring out the blue in your eyes and purple in your hair” she whispered as I felt the brush touch my eyelid. After ten minutes she was done and showed me the mirror and I didn’t see myself only the wall behind me, “oops forgot about that” she giggled and I laughed. I looked into her eyes, I could see my reflection in those mortal eyes I said “hey can you look over there” I pointed to the wall so I could look in the whites. I smiled, she smoked my eyes out with the blue and used the dark purples as a base “amazing job again Willy” “ew gross never call me that again” “ok Willy” she growled and I laughed. She put on some red platforms and we met Mary in the common room.

         “So why meet us here, they are about to check on us” Willow said looking at the clock, “don’t worry” she pulled out her wand “learned a new spell that can help,” she took a deep breath “invisibleousas” a few sparkles left her wand and coated us. Suddenly Mary and Willow disappeared, “hey where did you two go?” I asked very worried, Mary voice came from where she stood “we are still here, just invisible now. Follow my voice and grab my hands” I walked towards her and caught a hand “Ebony” “here” “Willow” “here” “alright let’s go!” She said excited leading us outside of the school. When we were finally at Hogsmeade she took the spell off “wow impressive,” “thanks Hermione read it to me.” We met up with Ashley and walked to the pub that was right outside of this little village and as we went to the bouncer I smiled, my eyes flashed red and so did his and he let us in hypnotism is so fun!

         Switchblade Symphony was playing, they played a song called dissolve by what Mary told us. It had a really long intro, but I nodded and swayed to it “can you see me falling down down down, down..down” the lead singer sang. I kinda liked the band, especially a lot of their songs. Mary and Ashley seemed to be enjoying themselves, he was wearing a leather jacket with studded shoulders that Mary couldn’t stop petting. She rubbed her behind onto his crotch as they swayed to the music, Willow giggled at it “our little Mary is growing up.” She wiped an imaginary tear from her face and sipped her vodka. “She’s gonna find out he lacks a dick if she keeps that up”  I said, ok now this isn’t really funny anymore i walked over and grabbed her pulling her away “calm down girl” “ok but a few more songs before we go?” I nodded.

         It was getting too hot in there so I asked Willow to watch over the two horn birds as I went outside to cool down. I stepped out of the back of the pub and smiled in the cold air, my eyes snapped open, that damn coffin smell again I shouted in my head. I heard a laugh and looked up, on the roof of the neighboring building was a tall dark figure whose hair flowed in the wind covering the full moon. It jumped down landing in a bowing position, this person had bright red hair and they stood up. I gasped, it was a vampire, he looked like he was in his mid 40s in vampire years (an: so like 700ish); moreover, he had piercing ice blue eyes eyes that stared right through my soul, his ears were slightly pointed like Dobby’s and his fangs were very thick and went right past his bottom lip reminding me of a saber tooth tiger. He grinned at me “Ebony Dementia Raven,” I gasped that was the voice I heard in my vision, who is this man “h-how do you know my birth name?” I asked trembling as I backed away slowly, he easily towered over me and could probably sit me on his shoulder like a young child. He charged towards me, he was so quick even I could barely see it, his clawed hand got me in the cheek and I fell on my ass. I stood up quickly and jumped back far, he licked the blood off his claw “oh my dear Ebony it looks like you’re whore mother did lie about her birth status” his eyes glowed red, “hey you watch your tongue no one talks about my mother like that!” I yelled baring my absent fangs, he was in front of me again! He grabbed my chin squeezing my cheeks forcing my mouth open “you’ve grown so much since I last saw you, you just lost your milk fangs. You fucking bats have so many defects including your mother” a memory flashed in my head, it was very dark and I was in water the noise was muffled but I could hear it ‘I know you’re her mother but I know I’m right, why so sympathetic to humans? We can’t let our Ebony grow like that’ tears started to fall. “F....father?” he grinned, “the one and only” my eyes widened and he let go of my mouth, “she raised you to be suck a fanger it’s embarrassing. Kissing a human boy and stealing with your human friends have you no shame? You bring shame to the Raven name you staker. You are no real vampire!” “STOP CALLING ME THAT!” I screamed, tears running down my face, “I am a real vampire I am!” I was shaking with rage at this point, “no you aren’t” he grinned “I burn in the sun! I eat human flesh and drink human blood how can I not!” I asked, he chuckled “then let’s see if you are a vampire as you claim to be, kill that little boy lover of yours. I know your mummy told you not to fall in love with a human, so let’s see if you can redeem yourself” he opened his wings, one wing could be my height alone. “But-” “no buts Fanger, I’ll be watching and don’t think telling your mortal teachers, your wizard magic has no effect on us sangre puras” he flew off into the night.

         All I could do is stare at the sky where he disappeared, what do I do? I wiped my face and I heard Willow calling for me, I left with them back to Hogwarts.
My Immortal rw Ch 9
Vampire slurs

Bat- came from when vampires were portrayed as stupid bats, means to call that vampire stupid and unable to be taken seriously.
Fanger- given to vampires who gave up their fangs to not suck on human blood anymore. Essentially the vampire version of cuck 
Staker- A vampire who will be the end of the vampire race because of them being 'tamed' or 'mastered' by humans. 


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Well since I am rewriting it I will have to keep the main features in it. This is subjective alright? These features are what I think make My Immortal My Immortal.

  • Ebony's full name
  • Ebony being a vampire
  • Ebony, Willow, Mary, Dracula, and Diablo being alternative
  • A love interest is Draco
  • More than one love interest
  • Breaking rules like sneaking out of Hogwarts
  • At least three of the characters being LGBT
  • Characters self-harming
  • Male villain telling Ebony to kill someone
  • A character being a "satanist"
  • Illegal drug use
  • Another language that's seen as cool or sexy
I think that's all I can think of. 

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