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Marie's Magical Mishaps Page 43 by PudgeyRedFox Marie's Magical Mishaps Page 43 by PudgeyRedFox
Nikki and Marie defeat the snow demon! Aurora has been rescued! Yayyy!! Read More!
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YesImDeadpool Featured By Owner May 31, 2016   General Artist
Yay! :D
lectraplayer Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know this has been last year, but I may want to do some sparring with her. :)
kiramaru7 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
YAY! Aurora's been saved! :dance:
ChessYoshi Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Wish this fight would've been a bit longer.
PudgeyRedFox Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
this comic already is very time consuming as it is with the expanded format. I gotta cut things so it fits.
Vulpine-Jessica Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are the artist.  You should do whatever you feel like doing.  I would never tell you what to do, but I will always give advice. So, take or leave it, I think you should increase the number of pages your story has.  

I feel that the part of the story that is on this one page, would work better if it were spread across two pages.  I'm aware that increasing the number of pages will increase how long it takes to get to the end of the story, but does it really matter how long it takes to tell the story.  Unless you have a deadline or are held back by other constraints, story telling shouldn't be a race to get to the ending.  

You have a great story to share with us, right?  Then make the story great for us!  Tell it the way you want us to see it, and don't worry about how long it takes.  We're with you every step of the way.  In fact, for me, when I'm really into a story, I may be anxious to see how it ends, but then I become a little disappointed.  I have to leave that world behind, because that story is over.  Feel free to extend the plot, add more detail, get your readers deeper into the plot, keep them riveted, keep them in suspense!  Just don't take it too far, like Dragon Ball Z did, and let one duel last an entire season!  lol  
BlackSniperx3 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
what happening with aurora? 
PudgeyRedFox Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
if you read back on the previous page, she was frozen by the snow demon, and now shes slowly thawing out and awakening.
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