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this was my old wallpaper - [link]

I always had the idea that Anna was an overgrown Yotsuba.

(I still need to edit it a bit), I will upload other resolutions in a Winrar.

I know I know, if Anna would be real she would think I'm a complete weirdo, I promise I will draw the rest of the characters from now on.
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First of all: You did a great job. It looks amazing.

The four-leaf clover she is holding appears almost real to me.
Anatomically, everything seems in place, although the eye seems a little weird
(I don`t know if it`s just me, maybe it was intended anyway).
Her smile is cute and fits in with the rest of the style, and so does the hair.

How you drew the wrinkles in her clothing seems almost perfect to me, regarding the fact that you drew her in this simple style,
but on her left sleeve (the right from your point of view) there appears to be something missing.
I don`t know if you didn`t want to, but in my opinion, you could have done more about the shading.

The background you chose is amazing. I love it. I would associate a more serious or at least neutral atmosphere with it, though. The symbol should be slightly more in contrast with the petals (Those are petals, right?).
That shiny line-thingy in the middle and how the background becomes brighter to the right side give the picture a lively, optimistic mood.

I am still not sure how I should assess Anna´s character yet, but in a way she has tomboyish tendencies, so the smile suits her.

All in all, a very charming picture. Keep up the good work!
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Critique by iluvEBF May 19, 2013, 6:09:28 AM
First of all, the sheer quality makes it incredible. The art itself is high-caliber one place, epic anime the next. Again, I say this as you can see with the four-leaf clover.

Second of all, originality.
It doesn't copy kupo707's drawing style or his way of animation. It's a full, one-piece animation. However, I gave you 4.5 stars since the one non-original thing is the character origin. Kupo707 came up with the EBF4 team, and though this is much different than the original, it still shares the inherent character idea.

Third, technique.
In any case, from everything I can see, it was made by a hybrid of graphic design and good-old-fashioned anime. The bow is a nice touch. I don't know if I would be willing to put 12 hours into making fan-art. I think Yotsuba is a cute version, and you didn't accidentally make Anna a Yotsuba.

Fourth, impact.
Not completely sure about the said impact, but all in all, the picture is amazing. I'd say it aces all four tests.

This IS my first critique, PM me if it's unfair and tell me how to improve please!
All in all, an incredible work of art that deserves the ratings it got. Don't stop!
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GabrielEBF4Fan Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Nod aye,pretty cool.
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iluvEBF Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Writer
It crashed my computer. If you get it, be prepared for that!
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
is just a .png picture, why would it crash?
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iluvEBF Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Writer
Actually, that was my brother. He hacked my DA account and posted that. I apologize.
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iluvEBF Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Writer
WTF my brother hacked my account and made me say that! Even though it did crash my computer. Might be the size discrepancy.
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hmmm...., nah, is just a PNG image, it should not crash your computer in itself.
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iluvEBF Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Writer
It crashed the display driver. It might be because it's 1366X768 and my monitor is 1920X1080, do you think so?
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nah, it stretch the picture, center it, make a mosaic or anything similar, it should not crash.
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iluvEBF Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Writer
The NVIDIA driver went dead, that was all.
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iluvEBF Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Student Writer
I just made it my desktop background!
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IceDarkBen Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love the way her little hand comes out of her big sleeve, she is damn cute.
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
my version of Anna is based of Yotsuba (Yotsubato), Ranka Lee (Macross frontier) and Link (Legend of Zelda)

so yeah, she is the cutest xd, Natalie don't fall behind on cuteness, I just need to draw her more X_x
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kittimitti Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lucky Anna!
Her hair looks a bit..weird.
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's my style, I like untidy hair but since this one is not shaded at all, it might lacks the volume that the shading usually gives.
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kittimitti Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm, it looks great!
I wish I had a wallpaper like this.
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PtolemaiosLS Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you can download it and use it if you like.

if you want another character, that could be your request xd.
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kittimitti Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright! XD
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww! Look at Anna and that clover! :3
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