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July 26, 2015: This project has been discontinued and is no longer actively monitored.  Please check out Comment Tag instead!




The Targeted Comment Thread is a pilot initiative started for ProjectComment.

It is similar to our existing Comment Thread but gives you the chance to focus the response you get on a deviation with targeted questions. This is specifically targeted at those who actually want or need to improve their artwork. Please do not participate if you are not willing to accept constructive criticism.

This project is open to anyone and everyone to participate in, and feedback is guaranteed for all participants!

:star: Note: This thread is for visual art pieces only.  For constructive comments on literature, please visit Targeted Commenting or Commenter System.  Thanks for your cooperation! :love: :star:

How does this work?
  • Find the last post made on this blog.
  • Comment constructively on that deviant's work using the link he or she provided. (Mention ProjectComment somewhere in your comment!)
  • Post a link to your comment on this blog. (FAQ #14: How do I create a link to a specific comment?) Also, post a link to one of your pieces along with one question (minimum) about the piece that you would like to have answered. (Examples: "How can I improve the shading in this piece?"; "Is this piece anatomically correct?"; "What are your overall thoughts/opinions for improvement?")
Posts should be made in the following format:
  • Commented on: (insert link to your constructive comment that you made on the previous person's work here)
  • Next: (insert link to one of your deviations here)
  • Question: (e.g. "How can I improve the shading in this piece?")
Quick Guidelines and Rules:
  • If you do not include a link to the comment you made on the previous participant's work, your comment will be hidden by one of our volunteers and you will be skipped.
  • Leave a useful and constructive comment that answers the specific question the deviant asked. As a rule of thumb, try to make your comment at least 50 words long.
  • If you receive more than one comment through the chain, we will request that you comment on the skipped artist's work. We will keep track and notify you if needed so everyone is guaranteed to get some feedback.
  • With the time it takes to write a comment, it is inevitable that delayed and simultaneous posts will cause the thread to split from time to time. We try to monitor this so as to keep a single continuous thread and ensure that a comment is given for every comment received.
  • Only leave a comment, don't reply to other comments on this blog.
    If a reply is required (for a skipped user) we will inform you where to respond with a link to your comment.


If the thread gets interrupted, the admin will post on the blog giving the name of the current user in the thread, (the person to be commented upon next).

Stay friendly and respectful, and have fun with it, since that’s mostly what it’s all about!


Admin: CameronKobe
Feel free to contact me if you have questions/comments about this game :)
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:iconcameronkobe:
CameronKobe Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:star: July 26, 2015: This project has been discontinued and is no longer actively monitored.  Please check out Comment Tag instead! :star:
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:iconjooweeuh:
jooweeuh Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Student General Artist
commented on: zeeria.deviantart.com/art/OC-A…
next: some--art.deviantart.com/art/Z…
question: how do you think i can further improve my work? how do you recommend i improve hair and poses?
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:iconzeeria:
Zeeria Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015
Commented on: comments.deviantart.com/1/5338…
Next: zeeria.deviantart.com/art/OC-A…
Question: What can I do to highlight black hair a bit better? What do you like about the drawing and what do you think needs improvement?
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:iconazuregriffin:
AzureGriffin Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Commented on: thexenops.deviantart.com/art/C…
Next: azuregriffin.deviantart.com/ar…
Question: What can I do to improve my artwork?
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:iconhestia-edwards:
Hestia-Edwards Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Commented on: comments.deviantart.com/1/5239…

Next: fav.me/d8pomiy

Questions: what stands out to you? Anything specific that I need to improve? What do you like about it?
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:iconsayuyazawa:
SayuYazawa Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Commented on: unihaks.deviantart.com/art/Req…

Next: sayuyazawa.deviantart.com/art/…

Question: How can I improve with skin coloring and lineart, especially? 
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:iconunihaks:
Unihaks Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Commented on: Asleep

Next: Request : 01 : Willow Creek Volunteer Fire Company

Question: What can I do to make the piece look more professional? 
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:iconsaiyron:
saiyron Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
commented on ravenotaktay.deviantart.com/ar…

next saiyron.deviantart.com/art/Asl…

is the folds done well or they are flat ?
is the skin colored right ?and what do you think of the blush ?
any advice on those thing would be great !
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RavenOtaktay Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Commented on: comments.deviantart.com/1/4851…

Next: ravenotaktay.deviantart.com/ar…

Do I show the idea of the wolf being injured in the picture?
Is it obvious this is made with seperate stock? Is it blended well?
Overall thoughts on piece.

Thanks.
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:iconsaiyron:
saiyron Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
commented schokopir.deviantart.com/art/T…

next saiyron.deviantart.com/art/Wit…

is the proportion right ?!
what do you think about the background ?!
is the character intresting ?!
your overall thoughts ?!
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:iconschokopir:
Schokopir Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I commented on : arandombluepony.deviantart.com… by :iconarandombluepony:

Next:  schokopir.deviantart.com/art/T…

What do you think about the intensive colours? Is it too much?
What are your Overall thoughts?
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:iconwhitecheddakoopichu:
WhiteCheddaKoopichu Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I commented on comments.deviantart.com/1/4894… by :iconschokopir:.

Next: fav.me/d850w57

Do the pink ribbons look like they're actually moving?
Does the sky look realistic?
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:iconschokopir:
Schokopir Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I commented here on :iconredsamys:'s work: retsamys.deviantart.com/art/D1…

Next: schokopir.deviantart.com/art/W…

What are your Overall thoughts?
Do you think that the spider's web is not visibe enough?
What do you think about the Focus - is it in the right place?

Thank you.
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:iconretsamys:
RetSamys Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Commented here: comments.deviantart.com/1/4841… on :iconschokopir:'s work.

Next: fav.me/d7ti7zw
Overall thoughts? Is the speed OK? Also, I mapped a pattern, is it too visible?
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:iconschokopir:
Schokopir Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Commented on: doubledande.deviantart.com/art…

Next: schokopir.deviantart.com/art/S…

Question: What is you first Impression of it? Do you like the way I edited the colours? And is the berry ''lost'' in the Picture or is the Focus on it? I just want to know what you think of it, feel free to write down all your thoughts :D
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:icondoubledande:
DoubleDandE Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014   General Artist
Commented on: cameronkobe.deviantart.com/art…

Next: doubledande.deviantart.com/art…

Question: Is the overall anatomy of the character needs some work? What can I do to create better backgrounds that help make my character pop out? Any tips and help would be appreciated. 
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:iconcameronkobe:
CameronKobe Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Commented on: comments.deviantart.com/1/2799…

Next: cameronkobe.deviantart.com/art…

Question: Is it a decent cat drawing? (Animals are not my strength.)
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:iconrakshiel-mogaidren:
Rakshiel-MoGaidren Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I commented here; comments.deviantart.com/1/4646…

And this is what I need; rakshiel-mogaidren.deviantart.…

I'd like to know; Does this grab you and make you want to read on? Is there something missing? First impressions? (I know it is more than one question, feel free to choose just one to answer if you like)
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:iconschokopir:
Schokopir Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I commented here: vivyi.deviantart.com/art/Aunt-…

And this is mine: schokopir.deviantart.com/art/S…

I just want to know what your impressions are and what could be improoved.
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:iconvivyi:
Vivyi Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I commented here: dtkinetic.deviantart.com/art/M…

Here is mine: vivyi.deviantart.com/art/Aunt-…

Question: Overall flaws in anatomy and coloring, anything else. Clothing mistakes. I am quite new to criticism with art, though I have gotten writing criticism and taken it well, all I ask is that you aren't TOO stern with me and are very clear, haha. :)
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DTKinetic Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I commented here: dtkinetic.deviantart.com/criti…
Here's mine: dtkinetic.deviantart.com/art/M…

Just tell me your general impression, primarily what you think his expression communicates about the character (but not limited to what the clothing or surroundings say), and note any anatomy mistakes. 
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:iconsundanceann:
SundanceAnn Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Commented on: dragonboy08.deviantart.com/art…
Next:  sundanceann.deviantart.com/art…
Question:  Flaws in anatomy, coloring, shading,  and anything else you notice (you can be harsh:) )
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:iconryudashi08:
ryudashi08 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Commented on :someday89.deviantart.com/art/S…
Next:dragonboy08.deviantart.com/art…
Question: What are your overall Thoughts/ opinions and suggestions for improvement?
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:iconcameronkobe:
CameronKobe Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Comment: (This is the kick-off post!  Does not apply.)
Next: fav.me/d7k12fx
Question: What are your overall Thoughts/opinions and suggestions for improvement?
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