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A BAD DAY AT THE FUNLAND FACTORY SCRIPT by THEMYSTERYWRITER, literature

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A BAD DAY AT THE FUNLAND FACTORY SCRIPT

(Once START GAME is selected, the screen slowly fades to black. Suddenly, as if a TV is turned on, lighting up the screen as the theme music plays. An ad for FUN LAND Amusement Park begins to play, introducing the various characters.) Female Narrator: (Everything the narrator says is plastered in big yellow font against a purple background.) Hello, boys and girls! Come on down to FUN LAND, where fun is state-of-the-art! (Children cheer as the video image of FUN LAND appears, slowly zooming in towards it.) Female Narrator: (Cut back to the purple background and yellow font.) Come see all your favorite characters, like Harrison Hare! Harrison Hare: (A cartoon version of Harrison Hare, an anthropomorphic purple rabbit character dressed as an Elvis impersonator, appears on the screen. He poses like the singer as she speaks, moving in an exaggerated cartoon manner.) Well, thank ya! Thank ya very much! Female Narrator: (Cut back to the purple background and yellow

Update 3 by EmyyWolf, journal

Update 3

Feb 16, 2021

Hello my little DeviantArt friends! I hope all of you are doing fantastic today, but if not.. then I wish you luck and my best wishes. Update: Today is January 29, and recently I turned 23 years old. I wish I could stay 21 or 22 so that I don’t age, but the truth is that.. at 21 I looked like a whale and was in every sense miserable and extremely overweight . I only began living my life and enjoying life; as a normal woman at 22. So therefore , I wish I’d stay 22 forever. :( I wish there wasn’t any more New Years and Birthdays. I wish the days would slow down. Just stay on standby. Forever and ever. :( The only thing that calms me down from our inevitable aging and moving forth with the years , is knowing that EVERYONE is going through this. EVERYONE will get old, EVERYONE is growing older as the days appear and disappear. People who are younger than you and people who are older. Knowing that I’m not alone with this whole GROWING OLD PROCESS. And reaching our END PROCESS.

Ranger's Adventures APM - Chapter 2 (Part 3) by SoundFX09, literature

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Ranger's Adventures APM - Chapter 2 (Part 3)

‘Into the Desert’ Unknown Date – 01:25:43 Dry Dry Desert, Mushroom Kingdom Ranger Lawson Independent Mercenary “If you can, let me know about your findings in the Ruins. I want to know anything and everything you find.” I stopped in my tracks as I reached the Desert Road. Despite seeing Mount Rugged in the distance to the west, I turned back eastward and sprinted back towards the Outpost. I wasn’t done with the desert just yet. I had Two Objectives to complete: One was simple, the other difficult, but possible. First and Foremost, I had to report back to Moustafa on my findings in Dry Dry Ruins. He won’t like that I’ve basically buried two...

Shelcy and Kiana's Cruise Adventure (Days 1-2) by GlitteryLemonCookie, literature

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Shelcy and Kiana's Cruise Adventure (Days 1-2)

Introduction: Before we start this story, please note that this literary story will be like those novels where two or more characters take turns being the narrator. Enjoy this adventure of Shelcy, Kiana, and their parents enjoying a cruise adventure of a lifetime! Shelcy | Friday As I was in my Language Arts class, summer is only half an hour away, and it is currently 2:30 p.m. on the final day of school. To pass the rest of the time, some students were playing some board games the teacher had kept in the classroom closet, some students were playing video games on either their phones or on the school computers, and I was making myself a light blue sunhat made of felt. I have been working on it since the middle of May. As I finished making the felt sunhat, I put my sewing and knitting tools back in my messenger bag, and I took out and used a hot glue gun to attach some pink flowers made of felt. After that, I gave my hands a good rest. I am bursting with eagerness by showing an

The Anime Character Convention, Part 1 by GlitteryLemonCookie, literature

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The Anime Character Convention, Part 1

One day on August 19, Tabitha was having a playdate at her friend Makenna Hironaka's house in the front yard. Both girls were drawing pictures using chalk on the sidewalk. Tabitha used a light blue chalk to draw herself with butterfly wings, and Makenna used four different chalks to draw herself dressed up Kaia Mei-xiu, her favorite anime character from a manga series she enjoys. "Wow, Makenna!" comments Tabitha, showing Makenna a stunned impression. "That drawing of you cosplaying as Kaia Mei-xiu looks magnificent. What inspired you to like that character from that manga series you like reading?" "Huh, interesting question you'd ask, Tabitha." replied Makenna, ready to respond to Tabitha. "See, Kaia has the power to transform herself into a mermaid and a Tang Soo Do fighter. Her special weapon is a staff that can be used as either a katana or a Bo staff. As of now, I've read seven out of the twelve books in the whole series, and I cannot wait until the author and illustrator who

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The Quest has Ended by NobodyX7, literature

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The Quest has Ended

The quest has ended Every trial has been run Once heroes battled evil Beneath a brighter sun The maps were yet complete Great wizards transcribed lore Now the boarders are in place The dragons fly no more No mountains left to climb Vast oceans go unsailed Chivalry was slain by peace Where force and spell had failed In fear we are united Cowardly our ways No one can be trusted While toil fills our days Though chaos surged around us Back then we had the knights Now freedom is our coin Silk and linens our delights The sword remains unwielded The champion’s work is done In the spoils they have purchased The villains finally won

When Gemstones Chime by AbNom, literature

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When Gemstones Chime

“All the times A gemstone chimes A kobold gets its wings!” Marzanna the Devastator woke alone in her great, gold-filled lair beneath her towering mountain in the center of her barren lands, with a hunger she did not recognize. Raising her head from the arum mass of coins, she inventoried her tremendous collection as it spilled from her massive, horned skull. The accumulation of almost a thousand years, her hoard covered the cavern’s floor, filling the smaller chambers and spilling into her personal apartment where it was deepest. It had been long since the red dragon had felt any kind of hunger at all. A grand wyrm of her power and size consumed mana from the land and when she did eat, almost nothing went to waste. She needed no one and nothing - save the earth itself. Thanks to her great flames and powerful magic, nothing grew or lived for hundreds of miles around her barren mountains. No living thing had any reason to traverse those lands; all its mana fed only her, and she took

23 - Pay the Piper by AbNom, literature

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23 - Pay the Piper

Pay the Piper Fenris lay chest down, nose to the floor, chained and spread-eagle in the cold, dark cell. It was in the lowest hold of the ship, below the waterline. Here the heavy wooden planks just above the bilge were damp but had been holystoned smooth. This was not a typical sailing ship in anyone’s navy, nor any normal pirate ship. This was the private ship of Cordonza and the wolf knew it only sailed when the man himself was onboard. The werewolf’s head was covered by a shiny two-piece helmet. Small holes in it were for him to speak and see through, but the eye holes were presently covered by a visor. There was no light where he was anyway. His bulky chains were held tight to four stout beams connected in a square, an iron muzzle over his snout. The beams were presently fastened to the floor and held him face down with their weight, chains preventing any movement, neck bent in a way that ached from the night there. His fur was all that kept him warm in the cold ship, locked

Ubba and the Mother of Bastards CH 9 (Ubba x OC) by BirdsAndWordz, literature

Ubba and The Mother of Bastards CH 10 (Ubba x OC) by BirdsAndWordz, literature

The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 22 (2e) (Gabriel) by Jeremy-Burner, literature

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The Black Candy Circus. Chapter 22 (2e) (Gabriel)

The last thing I remembered was running. Rachel had fallen, and the monster circus tent was chasing us. Then suddenly, darkness. It was all around me, choking and suffocating me. In the darkness, a voice I recognized whispered to me. “Not much left of him, is there?” The words of the ringleader echoed back to me. I still remembered how it had felt when the beast tamer ran from me. The thrill as I gave chase and closed in. Even before then, when he was helpless on the stable floor. I hadn’t even tried to fight it. Worse, I had tried to convince myself he deserved it. I knew she was right. Had known the truth for a while. Soon, there would be nothing left. Soon, Gabriel would just be the name of a dumb animal. For hours, I struggled with the darkness. It clung to my skin like writhing tentacles made of tar. I pulled and thrashed and bit until all thought and reason abandoned me. An eternity of blind torment passed when, finally, without warning, it peeled away. I emerged from

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Olgola

Jun 6, 2025

Hi, comment here:

I would like to submit:

Jules Verne - Journey to the centre fo the Earth

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NobodyX7

Jun 1, 2025

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Would like to submit to 300 words folder

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The Quest has Ended

The quest has ended Every trial has been run Once

3wyl

Jun 2, 2025

Accepted, thank you!

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Feel free to comment on anything in my gallery, I don't have anything specific at this time that I would like to have a comment on! So all is appreciated!

3wyl

May 7, 2025

Thank you so much for commenting!

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May 7, 2025

Of course! It was a lot of fun tbh! Thank you for the diamond badge!!!