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How Far Would You Go? II Pt. 5 (TMNT x Reader)One month passes.“Everything is going to be ok.”Another month passes.“Everything will be ok.”And another passes.“It’s ok… it’s ok… it will all be ok.”When this all started, you really did believe those words. With that encouraging smile of his, Leonardo would promise on his honor everything will be ok. You’d smile when you’d heard those words, especially coming from him. You had faith in him. You had faith he and his brothers would keep you safe. You had faith he and his brothers would find and put a stop to Agent John Bishop once and for all. You had faith he and his brothers would reunite you with your family, and you would at long last have your life back.You had faith. Had.Now, you can’t remember the last time you had faith. You can’t remember the last time you found hope in those words. All you feel now, and growing with each passing day, is—dare you say—frustration. But you’re afraid to admit it. It’s not like you’re mad at the turtles or April, but you’ve been stuck in the lair for four long months, being fed one empty promise after another about getting your life back soon, free from Bishop’s terror. With that mad man still out there, you’ll always be in danger. Hiding down here was the safest option. Even though you understood this, you never imagined that your life with the turtles—your best friends—would be so… so… lonely.Bishop still hasn’t resurfaced. With April investigating during the day and the turtles searching at night, you’d thought maybe a trace would’ve been found by now. Meeting one dead end after the other makes it discouraging for everyone. Of course, the turtles would try to keep you company as often as they could, but now that you’re completely healed, they are out more often, trying to find any leads while you are left alone most of the day. Sometimes they would return home with pieces of busted junk, which you’d hardly consider progress. But when the turtles are around, there is a different kind of loneliness you feel that not even they could help, but you kept it to yourself. It makes no sense. You’re lonely with or without them. You can’t understand why you are feeling this way, until it finally dawns upon you: You haven’t spoken to your family ever since this whole mess began. You just up and left without saying goodbye. You’ve always seen the turtles, April, and even Casey as your family—your second family—but you’re missing your real family, the ones you willingly sacrificed yourself for in the first place. You did this for the turtles, but you also did it for them.When was the last time you heard your (mother’s/father’s) loving voice? When did your (brother*s/sister*s) tease and banter with you last? When was the last time you were in a safe, warm embrace, laughing, and spending time together? Like mist fading in the sun, the memories are vague and out of reach, slipping from your mind’s grasp, no matter how hard you try holding onto them. An unbearable pain suddenly tugs at your heart. Not a physical pain; an emotional pain, but it hurts just as much. You suddenly miss those hugs, those mornings and those dinners together, their voices, and the times spent with your loved ones. As much as you love the turtles like family, you finally admit they can’t replace your real one.Having the courage to finally admit that to yourself suddenly makes you feel sick. Your throat strains and you gag on a sob as the room starts to spin. Your gut wrenches so much that you bend over, crushing the air right out of your lungs. Quickly, you stumble into the bathroom, locking the door behind you as you crumble to the floor, curling your hands into quivering fists. You clench your jaw, trying to hold back the loud cries from escaping your straining throat. Air is sucked in through your teeth, then forced out in breathless whimpers as hot tears pour from your swelling eyes and stream down your burning face. You can’t hold in anymore. You miss your family.You barely sleep that night, your mind full of nothing but distant memories of your family—even the sour memories. You recall a time long ago when a fierce argument broke out between you and your loved ones. Overwhelmed by anger, you lost control and declared how much you hated them. You cursed them, saying you didn’t need them in your life; that you didn’t want to see them ever again. Back then, you told yourself you could be just as happy, if not happier, with the turtles as your family, replacing them with your real one. You rub your face into your pillow, wiping away your fresh set of tears, muffling your sobs as you realize how stupid you were to say such a thing back then. Of course, you still love them. You always will. And now you’re separated all because you thought you could face off against Bishop alone.You take a deep, cleansing breath and roll over on your back, staring blankly at the ceiling. Wallowing in your sadness makes this night feel like it’ll never end. You give the digital clock by the side of your bed a quick glance and huff impatiently. 2:55 AM. You haven’t slept at all. Time is moving too slowly, and even if morning did arrive, what would you do then? Wander aimlessly around the lair, being told ‘everything is going to be ok’ by which ever turtle you bump into, like how it’s always been for the pass few months? You groan and roll back over on your stomach, burying your head underneath your pillow.Squeezing your eyes shut, you rummage your restless mind, trying to think of some way to calm yourself, but all you think of and see is your family’s smiling faces as they welcome you back into their arms. If only there was a way you could know they were alright. If only you could talk to them. Just hearing their voices would be enough. If only…You practically choke on a gasp as a jolt of energy has you spring into a sit up position in bed. An idea has struck you. Donnie has explained several times before why you can’t contact your family. Ever since all the past alien invasions New York City has experienced, Bishop has been known for stealing, gathering, and experimenting with all kinds of advanced, alien technology. Surely, he would be using his spoils to keep you and his other victims under his sadistic thumb. Donnie would say, with the deepest apologies, that for all he knowns, Bishop could be tracking every cellphone in the city with such technology at his disposal. The risk is just too great. Not even a text would be safe. Even the turtles had their shell cells destroyed until this whole ordeal is over.But what about pay phones and phone booths? Bishop can’t track those. They’re public call services. And Leo did say your family was staying with Casey in his grandmother’s log cabin outside of the city. You personally haven’t been there, but you’ve overheard April saying things about it. It’s an old cottage, but there are some things about it that are a bit modern, like the landline. If you could get the phone number from April and collect a bit of change, maybe you could finally call your family.It’s such a great idea that you suddenly feel more optimistic and more at ease than you’ve ever felt in a long time. Why didn’t the idea cross your mind sooner? You smile to yourself and settle down in bed, snuggling with the blankets as you finally have enough peace to close your eyes. You’re set on telling Donnie your plan tomorrow. At long last, there is a way you can finally talk with your family again.***Morning finally arrives. You’re so excited that you don’t bother changing clothes. Still in your pajamas, bedhead, and all, you quickly make your way to the kitchen in time to see Donatello carrying a clipboard and a mug of fresh coffee to his lab.“D-Donnie!” you call out, tripping over your baggy pajama pants.He looks up from his papers in complete surprise as the two of you crash into each other. Thanks to the force of momentum, you lose your balance. As you fall over, the purple-clad turtle quickly stoops down, and you flop over on his arm while he grips the clipboard with one hand and holds up his mug with the other. “Whoa, whoa!” Donnie nervously chuckles, regaining his balance. “Slow down there, Clumsy.” He carefully raises his arm to steady you on your feet as he stands up while lowering his other hand with his coffee. “Sorry,” you smile bashfully, straightening yourself up, as well. “I got a little carried away. I have something to tell you.” Donnie curiously raises an eye ridge. “Something to tell me? You’re certainly livelier than you’ve been in weeks,” he says as he continues his way to his lab, encouraging you to follow. “Livelier?” you ask, flustered from embarrassment. “Oh, you noticed? I’m sorry. Really.” You close the door behind you and follow him to his desk. “I’m just a bit lonely. I’ve been missing my family a lot and I need to know they’re alright.” Donnie slumps in his chair and sets down his coffee with a sigh. “(Name,) I thought we’ve been over this. You know why we can’t contact them. If there were a safe way for you to do so, you know I’d let you do it in a heartbeat. But it’s just too dangerous…” You drop down beside him to meet him face to face, your eager, (color) eyes locking with his. “But there is a way: payphones! Bishop can’t track those. And even if he could, someone else would be on the line before he’d even get there in time.” The apologetic expression on Donnie’s face doesn’t change. “Payphones are up top, (Name.) Last time you were outside was with April, and it only took half a day for the two of you to run into trouble. Especially now, what do you think will happen in an hour? We don’t know how many disguised spies Bishop has wandering the streets every day.” You hardly take these warnings to mind and urge on. “I could go under the cover of night. I can wear a disguise, too. I’ll do anything, and I won’t be on long! I just need to know if they’re ok, and they need to hear from me, too. It’s a good plan, Donnie. Please!” Donnie breathes your name again as he tenderly rubs your head, but you cut him off, snatching his hand off your head and holding it to your pounding heart, your voice practically turns into a whimper. “Please!” Your desperate begging saddens Donnie’s face even more. You can tell he wants to say yes, but something is holding him back—and you know what that something is. He squeezes his eyes shut and flinches as he says, “Let’s see what Leo says.” You were afraid of that answer and you drop his hand in defeat, the confidence completely disappearing completely from your face. The tone of his voice makes him sound like he has no choice, which only dashes your optimism to pieces.“Donnie, no; come on. It’s Leo. He’s going to say ‘no,’” you keep pushing.Donnie holds up his free hand to politely interrupt. “Now, now. Hold on,” he says. “I may have found something last night that could help in our search for Bishop.” He takes back his hand and turns to his computer, typing in some mathematical equation and entering a set of numbers onto a graphed-out map of New York City.You groan with irritation to yourself as you walk around and stand by his side to get a better view of the screens.When he has all the documents he needs pulled up, then he starts. “Our findings on patrols have been pretty slim, but when we do find items linked to Bishop, it’s always once a month in a specific location.” He points to highlighted sections of the map. “I’m noticing a pattern to all this, and not just in the technology we’ve found.” He directs your attention towards a table piled with their technological finds. “These are pieces to a device. I’m betting he wants me to rebuild and active it.” He suspiciously frowns. “Don’t know what he could be scheming by forcing my hand to rebuild this thing, but what choice do we have if we want this to end? Once I reconstruct this this, we should finally have some answers.” “Like, finding where Bishop is?” you hesitate to ask. “Could be,” he answers as he shrugs. “Like I said, I don’t know what this thing is, but I’ve thoroughly checked over the pieces and found no trackers whatsoever on them. So, it’s safe to build. I can for sure say it’s progress.” After all that explaining, it still wasn’t the answer you want to hear. You lower your eyes, but nod as if you understand. Donnie lifts your chin, giving you a reassuring smile. “I promise, Leo will hear of this as soon as he gets back with Raph. It’s been a while since they brought anything back, so maybe they found something this time that will help make things more flexible for you to call your family. It’s going to be ok, (Name.) Just keep hanging in there.” You wince when you hear that empty promise again. Being told ‘everything will be ok’ just rubs you the wrong way now. You know Donnie means well, but how much longer until those words mean nothing but a lie? You pull your chin out of his grasp and heave a cleansing sigh. You force a smile for him, nodding again as you falsely accept his encouragement.He pats your cheek and turns back to his computer and monitors. “They should be back soon. I gotta get working on this, so until then, why don’t you get some breakfast.”You say nothing as you leave the lab, overcome with failure. Though Donnie is an honest turtle, you feel like he didn’t even listen to your idea. Usually when you come to Donnie with ideas in the past, he would offer some compromises or considerations to stabilize your plan so it would work. But this time, it’s like he didn’t even try and just passed the decision making to Leo without a fight. Also, knowing how overbearing and protective Leo has become since that day, it now feels like an impossible dream you will ever get your life back.“Hey, (Name!)” Michelangelo calls from the kitchen.You look up, quickly rubbing your face with your sleeve to keep Mikey from seeing your frustrated tears as he bounces over to you.“Glad to see you’re up! Ready to chow down on some amazing scrambled-eggs and delicious, crispy waffles?” He swings his arm around your shoulders and yanks you in like a long lost relative. “Sprinkled with Mikey’s homey touch, these are eggs and waffles fit for a king, if I do say so myself!” He runs his hand over his head like he is flinging his hair back in pride (if he had any hair.)But you find yourself more annoyed than amused by his friendly gesture and you—as respectfully as you can—push him back.“No thanks, Mikey,” you say. “I’m not hungry.”He gives you a confused-puppy-look; sad eyes and all. “Not hungry? But we’re breakfast buddies.” He pulls his hands up into “doggy paws” and whimpers. You look at his silly face, cracking a little smile, but it wasn’t enough to convince you to change your mind. Before you decline him again, Mikey chuckles a bit and pats your back. “Hey, no worries. If you don’t wanna eat, you don’t wanna eat. Can’t force you to. Still, I’ll leave you a plate if you change your mind. But I may go crazy with the syrup, so don’t come back look’n for it,” he jokes. You feel awful blowing Mikey off, but you try to humor him with a forced smile. Mikey smiles back, turns around, and jumps back to the kitchen.You immediately retreat into your room and plop back on the bed, still hung up on Donnie’s hollow promise. Anger churns your stomach and stubborn thoughts twist your mind. What are the chances of Leo allowing you to go up top again? Walking escorted through the sewer tunnels to the nearest storm drain was as close to ‘getting fresh air’ down here as it gets. But if Donnie is truly onto something, maybe you will get your life back soon enough. He seems pretty sure of it; however, there is also the possibility he could be wrong and it’s back to square one. Meaning, you could be separated from your family even longer, and the idea of that makes you mad.A rebellious thought suddenly worms its way into your mind. Why do you have to listen to Leo? It’s not like he has authority over you, and you’re confident enough in your plan that you truly believe you can do it on your own. But of course, the only reason you’re in this mess is because you thought you could do something dangerous on your own in the first place. But this isn’t dangerous. You’re just making a quick phone call and coming right back. They wouldn’t even know you’ve gone.You lie down and let out a sigh as you juggle your options: stay here for who knows how long and never know if your family is safe or stay here knowing your family is safe. You hug your pillow tightly and burry your face in it again, muffling any sobs that may force themselves out. You don’t want to betray your friends’ trust, but what choice do you have? You just want this to be over.***You drift off into a nap and, after what feels like seconds later, suddenly jolt awake when you recognize Leo’s and Raph’s voices the lair. They’re back! It’s now or never. You scramble off the bed and strip out of your pajamas. You then change into some clean clothes and head out to the common area where a worn-out Raphael slumps against the couch with both arms resting over the backside of the furniture. He rolls his head towards you as you noisily stumble into the common area.“Hey, kid, we’re back,” Raph chuckles. “Good tah see yah walk’n ‘round again instead ah drift’n ‘round here like a ghost.”You blush. Seems everyone has noticed your gloomy behavior lately. You bite your lip and shuffle your feet. “I’m sorry,” you say, lowering your eyes. “I never wanted any of you to see that side of me. I’m real sorry.”Raph grins and shrugs his shoulders. “Hey, don’t sweat it. Tah be frank, I don’t blame yah. If I were stuck down ‘ere like that, I’d go stir-crazy, too.”You’re thankful for Raph’s understanding, but you’re too restless and distracted by your own priorities to linger around for a decent ‘thank you.’ Immediately, you ask, “Where’s Leo?”Raph gives you an odd look, like he could tell something is weighing on your mind just from the sound of your voice. He looks like he wants to ask, but the anxiety he’s sensing from you urges him to just answer your question. “He’s in there, talk’n with Donnie.”You nod a thanks to him and run to the doors. You yank them open, colliding with Leo as you scramble into the lab. He catches you effortlessly, gripping your shoulders to hold you steady.“Geez, (Name,) slow down,” he says with a smile. “You’re hyper today. What’s the rush?”As you regain your footing, stabling yourself from the impact, you look up at him and breathlessly say, “Sorry. I’ve… I’ve been meaning to talk to you. Donnie hasn’t told you anything yet, has he?”Leo raises an eye ridge. “Tell me what?” He looks curiously at Donnie.You, too, look at Donnie and he gives you a calming gesture, trying to settle you down. “Easy, (Name,)” he says from his workspace. “Easy.”As you make your way over to him, Leo follows behind. “What’s going on?”You turn to face him, scooting closer to Donnie for courage as you take a deep breath and say, “Leo, I want to talk to my family.”That curious smile lessens from Leo’s face as he lets your words sink in. You nervously hold your breath as you watch him.As he glances at the floor, Donnie adds, “We’re not that far away from getting some answers, Leo. When I figure out what this thing is, it might make things more flexible for (Name) to finally call her family.”Leo is still silent as he takes his time to juggle your request and Donnie’s statement. The pulse thumps so hard in your ears that you feel nausea’s sliming fingers making ripples in your stomach as you anxiously await his answer.He’s quiet for a while, but then finally, he looks up, his eyes full of remorse as he slowly shakes his head. “I’m sorry, (Name…)”Quickly, you move into action, stepping forward assertively. “No, wait! Listen to this,” you say, as if you didn’t even hear him just deny your request. “I can talk to them by payphone. Bishop can’t track those. They’re all over the city. And even if he could pinpoint my location, I’d be long gone before he even finds where I’m calling from.”You thought for sure you’d see a spark of acknowledgement in his eyes when he heard your plan, but just like Donnie’s when you first told him, Leo’s face doesn’t change. “(Name…)” he says again, a trace of pity trailing in his voice.You look to Donnie for support, but he doesn’t challenge Leo’s answer. He places a hand on your shoulder, urging you to do the same. Your confidence is jostled, and you can feel your stress building up again. You yank your shoulder away from Donnie and urge on with Leo, trying not to let your voice crack as you continue explaining. “I know, I know; payphones are up top, but I could go under the cover of night or maybe during the day. I can put together a disguise so none of his spies will recognize me. I could hide the crowds and…”“(Name,) that’s enough,” Leo says again, stepping closer.You deny Leo’s advances and ignore Donnie’s attempts to calm you down. Stepping back as you go into a frenzy, you keep pushing, “Leo, please!” You clasp your hands together, begging for his permission. “I just need to hear their voices. And they need to hear mine. They need to know I’m alright.”Just then, a beeping sound catches your attention. Leo’s, too. Donnie turns his attention towards the now activated device.“But it’s…” Donnie says, very confused as he walks over to it. “It’s not completely assembled yet. It turned on automatically?”Leo pushes you behind him and you watch as the lights on the device began to flicker. Donnie, too, steps back as electrical noises crackling and ripping through the air. Then finally, a light glows red.“Bravo, Donatello,” a static voice says from the speaker of the machine. “Your intelligence never ceases to impress. Though, it took much longer than I anticipated for you to figure out the intention of my little trail, so consider myself more disappointed than impressed.” Your eyes widen and your stomach aches with sudden nervousness. You recognize that voice.“Agent Bishop,” Leo growls.
LRFT PART 3,Hello my little DeviantArt friends! I hope all of you are doing fantastic today, but if not.. then I wish you luck and my best wishes.Today I will be telling PART 3 of LRFT. So “LRFT PART 3” A.K.A "Little Red Fat TinkerBell PART 3”.But first.. a little Update:Update:Today is January 29, and recently I turned 23 years old.I wish I could stay 21 or 22 so that I don’t age, but the truth is that.. at 21 I looked like a whale and was in every sense miserable and extremely overweight . I only began living my life and enjoying life; as a normal woman at 22. So therefore , I wish I’d stay 22 forever.:(I wish there wasn’t any more New Years and Birthdays. I wish the days would slow down. Just stay on standby. Forever and ever.:(The only thing that calms me down from our inevitable aging and moving forth with the years , is knowing that EVERYONE is going through this. EVERYONE will get old, EVERYONE is growing older as the days appear and disappear. People who are younger than you and people who are older.Knowing that I’m not alone with this whole GROWING OLD PROCESS. And reaching our END PROCESS. Another thing that puts me at peace from this reality that is life, is My belief in that “re-birth” or “reincarnation” is real. So maybe we all get to live again as a different person or only some of us. But who knows right. WHO KNOWS! We will all perish because we’re not immortal.We either die early or we die of old age but we die bro.None of us chose to be born, so might as well take life like BadAsses.Now “as for so some of the newer things happening in my life”..... other than:-Having had rehomed/ gave away my Leopard Geckos....-Getting Eye Surgery which can come with several complications ... & ruin my life-Aging onto 23...There is 4 new things: Weightloss, Saving Money, Hair Cut, and PCOS________________________________Umm I’ve been keeping up with my weight loss.. with a little practice called ADF or “Alternate Day Fasting”.And yes I HAVE dropped a few pounds. With ADF you get to eat anything you want during eat days.And you get to lose 10 pound in a month.In my case I add cardio to every day .And even though I did lose the “10 pounds in one month” I’ve ended up hitting a PLATEAU .Which means no matter what.. my body doesn’t want to drop any more pounds.It is at a standstill. Which means I need to ADD more workouts or gym or change “something “.IDK , that made me kind of discouraged lately. But I’m proud of my progress.I’m glad I can finally see some hand bones sticking out and some jaw line,, and my body looking more like a normal human being.Don’t get me wrong I’m still on the overweight range and chunky-looking. BUT GUESS WHAT. I’m not gonna stop .Ever ever ever ...... ever. I’m gonna make it so that I become an Instagram Athlete.________________________________Another thing that’s been new in my life. Well.. I’ve been saving up money. I don’t have an exact reason as to why I’m saving up money. I guess I just really took an interest in saving money. And just having a lot of money to back myself up with.And in my case; I’m not really the type to “spend money” go on “shopping sprees “ or “buy rags and trinkets” from malls and stores. I basically am the more militant type of person, I just buy simple things that I need. If you wonder what my room and closet look like. It is a very strict/organized looking setting. Don’t own a lot of clothes, shoes, and materials of any kind over all. Very simple.I think health, both mental and physical is the most important thing for me.I see money as more of a support. A lot of people say that I’m money-driven. But I’m not. I don’t exactly wish to be a millionaire or an in any way am looking for ways to make MORE than a decent living. But if chances show up where I can earn more of that support I’ll take them. But that’s all “money” really is to me. “ a support”. And talking about “support” .. You can kinda make a couple bucks from donating plasma.. BUT SHHHH! You didn’t hear it from me ;)But yeah. To me “ health” will be the most important thing.And then Family. But not money.________________________________Another thing that is new in my life. Well I cut my hair real short. Kinda like that Photomanipulated-TinkerBell Version of me.The story goes that:At first I had gotten highlights on my hair. .. then; Last year, I had dyed my hair to “Red” MULTIPLE TIMES.And finally I had my hair permanently straightened. Which all ended up causing a lot of breakage and was overall a disaster.It caused SO MUCH DAMAGE to my hair... Where I ended up Having to chop my hair real short. And it’s all healthy and growing ;)________________________________And last but not least:“I was diagnosed with PCOS".Yup. I went to the gynecologist, so that he can see where I’m standing in regards to my reproductive health and female health.. or whatever.The one who checks the health of your HOO-HAA. lolJust saying.. once you become of age and you’re body is capable of reproduction and making babies..You really should check in with a specialist on all that reproductive stuff. It’s necessary.My ignorant self was blind and careless of my well-being for years. I’ve never seen a HOO-HAA Doc until I turned 22 and cared more for my health.Anyway IT WAS SOOO DIFFICULT to set up early appointments to see the results of my Tests and HOO-HAA results. It took months and months to see this Doc at all! >=[I was also missing appointment after appointment. And they would reschedule me for the next month or the month after that.So basically I didn’t get instant results. It took MONTHS until I was finally able to see my HOO-HAA results. >=[Anyway.. When I was finally able to see my results.The Doc said that my health down there was fine and I tested negative for anything bad. That I was healthy and my HOO-HAA had no issues whatsoever.But then he said; the thing that concerns him is that my testosterone levels are too high and that I have got cysts in there. Cysts in my Ovaries!!! :0I wasn’t exactly worried or surprised by this. Another Doc told me the same thing when I was 14 years old. But I was so careless in that time that I disregarded it and Ignored it.This Doc basically said that. I have this condition called “PCOS” or Polycystic Ovarian Syndrome. Which causes extra testosterone (the male) hormone, exes hair growth (like a man), weight gain, obesity, difficulty loosing weight, acne, and in some people “hair loss of the head”like some men. Basically my hormones are all messed up because of these cysts.And it makes me angry. I’ve been mistreated all my life for being overweight, for looking like a whale. For being shy because of it. I’ve been miserable for most of my life because of this issue that I “apparently have no control over!” It makes me upset to my core. I was mistreated by my own Father and Sister for YEARS. I was bullied in school FOR YEARS. I was single and a virgin because of this FOR YEARS. I had a very small amount of friends in school because of this FOR YEARS! I was afraid to talk to boys, up until I turned 21 or 22, because of THIS!I felt that; If I ever looked or liked a boy, I’d scare him off. (Especially because of some of the bullying experiences ) I had when I was in elementary school. —I’ll talk about those another day—ButDuring my time in HighSchool; some decent-looking boys would show interest or try to talk to me; and I would always think that they’re either trying to bully me, or that “it was all in my head”. That “them liking me was all in my head”; Because of how much I was trained to think that “I’m disgusting”.. :’( ... by my own family members more than anything “at that time”. Nowadays “at 22”, I regret not having given these guys a chance. I regret not having given myself a chance at love or what could’ve been beautiful relationships.Because my family during those HighSchool years; had my younger sister looking like a skinny Barbie, and me looking more like a chunky girl; I was treated poorly for YEARS ON END. And I understand that people who are fat or overweight, most of the time “it is their own fault”, they’re perceived as messy or careless or inconsiderate. But then there is people like “ME” who are gaining weight and having difficulty loosing weight at all; due to an underlying condition that was there all along! Of which I can do little to nothing about!:’(It took “ SEEING A DOCTOR” for him to say: “Hey, you being fat and gross; is not entirely your fault”.Anyway it’s been YEARS. And it took every little bit of strength that I have, to finally make peace with the people who gave me HELL throughout the years. To make peace with every person that put me THROUGH HELL. :’( THAT PUT ME DOWN.I’ll talk about all those stories of bullying and being single in a YouTube video.-but where getting a little bit off track here, I’ll leave those stories for another time-But back to the PCOS:The Doc then decided to put me on some medication to control the excess Testosterone, & another medication to cause me to loose weight, something that Diabetics take. He said all he cares about ; is that excess Testosterone that my body is producing, to try and get it under control and level my hormones. And I decided to loose some weight first and then follow his protocol. Which I haven’t yet informed him that I chose to go this other route and since then I HAVE been losing weight.But I’ll tell him when I see him again. -.-Idk. That’s what I’m going with ..(Mainly; I hope to get the cysts surgically-removed from my body and later meet with a psychic who can erase the bad memories from my mind) THATS WHAT I WANT (-.-)#1 remove cysts#2 erase memory________________________________Well, moving on.To update you guys with some other stuff..My Art.I made a post a while back, about how I am no longer gonna be using colors for my Comics and Stories. They’re not gonna look as sophisticated any more. They’re no longer gonna have detail and 3-Dimensions or watever. From here on out they’re gonna be a little bit more Simple. They will be more like Doodles and basic Comic Strip lines. (UNFORTUNATELY).And If I ever add color or more detail and quality; it will be because the art piece is more important, or because it is a character presentation, (where one character is presented). Or basically anything that I want to be colored. Other than that , most things will be black and white, will barely have any life or detail. What can I say. ..(-.-) (all you got is time.) So I hope that you guys don’t mind the dramatic change to my work. The only story or comic that will be colored is the Dragon one. The “Dragons of the Sky” one. Since that story is the most important to me. And fun fact: that story is the most important to me because it contains Real Life experiences of MY real life. I won’t disclose those experiences until I finish the story. But basically that is why it’s very important to me.And that’s pretty much it...Let’s begin the story.This story: LRFT PART 3, also has some of the same characters from the first stories "LRFT PART 1" and "Part 2". If you haven't read LRFT PART 1 & 2.. I suggest you do so, since it'll help you understand the characters better ---> LRFT PART 1 > LRFT PART 2The Creepy StalkerAfter having experienced some of the most despicable most unfair treatment at her new Job. LRFT is now considering finding another job. At that point she could care less about how “THE KING” is handsome, or how a "handsome man" happens to be her Top Boss.She barely got to see THE KING on a daily basis, and he was always busy, minding his own business and not making eye contact with anyone. He would be there in the morning and as soon as LRFT came into work the afternoons, he’d leave extremely fast. As if he could tell LRFT had a thing for him. Not making eye contact with anyone. (Jk he couldn’t actually tell if LRFT had a thing for him, he was just the “don’t talk to me, I wanna mind my own business”” type of guy) He never really was in this tiny office all that much either, he would spend his hours or his days with the owners of the Maze, elsewhere. He barely made an appearance in the tiny office at all.LRFT also didn’t want to go to the KING to make him aware of the behavior of her supervisors. She didn’t want to tell on them, because she felt that they all were really close with the KING. (Why would she go and snitch on the Harry Potter and the Robocop, if both of them get along with the KING?) The KING was on their side! LRFT was just this brand new female employee who was easily replaceable. Not only that but LRFT was still on her ( 90-dayprobationary period ). Which, if you had never had a job yet; basically all jobs are required to spy on you, manage you, teach you and see your abilities at a job. So, If you perform poorly within those 90 days; the job can easily rid of you, or fire you.LRFT couldn’t trust the KING. Or ANYONE at this job at the Maze. LRFT was considering quitting this job. She was sure that more bullying and more stuff would happen if she stayed there. The Harry Potter and the Robocop were bound to make her life HELL.LRFT was scared to continue working there. Remember how in the first story “The WriteUp”.. I talked about how this job had a lot of cons to it, but some of the pros were outweighing the cons..? Well having had been bullied with “THE WRITE UP” and then the “LOST PHONE”... the cons were now outweighing the pros, and LRFT was now trying to leave! LIKE WHY WOULD SHE STICK AROUND???!!!LRFT applied to other jobs. But at the same time she decided to not allow people to step all over her. She decided to stick around for a little bit to see if those Psychos tried something else. She decided that she was gonna record them if they tried anything. But mainly she decided to stay because of the money she was making and those pros that the job still had. LRFT was still pretty poor, and she liked the monetary gain ($.$)...But DONT GET ME WRONG.. she was still applying to other places while keeping her Head Held High at this job full of Psychos!The days that followed “The Lost Phone” .. the 3 jerks hadn’t tried LRFT’s patience any longer. Every Supervisor was really busy day in and day out, and they were all really just minding their own business.There would be times that Harry Potter and Robocop would try to “Low Key” make fun of LRFT. But not to the extent of those other times. LRFT was working with Angel Guy mostly, and not making eye contact with the 3 jerks. LRFT was probably giving off this vibe that she wanted nothing to do with them.Throughout that time LRFT continued to mind her business and keep away from the 3 jerks in “every and any” way that she knew how. HarryPotter and the Robocop began to notice how LRFT was avoiding them in every sense. And just when she thought that those Jerks had forgotten her...........HarryPotter decided that he’d mess with LRFT a bit more by changing around her Schedule. Since he had the ability and power to change people’s schedules and days of work. Remember how I told you in the first story “The WriteUp”.. that HarryPotter was the Schedule-Maker??.. well yeah HE LITERALLY WAS.He took advantage of that Job of his; to F*KK with LRFT some more. To mess with LRFT some more. To bully LRFT a tad bit more!The KING in the beginning of that January of 2019; had hired LRFT to work the Afternoons, and be off on Monday- Tuesday. That was basically LRFT’s set shift forever. Where she mainly worked under The AngelGuy. LRFT would barely see the 3-jerks except for those 2 days in the week. So .. the 3-jerks didn’t like how LRFT was in a way “protected” by AngelGuy and mainly seeing him for most of the week, and having him as her main Captain/Manager. BTW.. AngelGuy had been working at that place for YEARS, for DECADES. Angel Guy again; was this quiet , mind his own business type of guy , but he seemed like a peaceful person. He was always locked on his phone, he was way older than mid 20’s clearly. But from all the stuff LRFT had experienced from the 3-Jerks who were in their mid 20’s and young college age boys... she was still clueless about if;; ALL the men at this job were all COOL with eachother, if they were ALL in on it, if they ALL covered eachother up, If the AngelGuy TOO might be best friends with all of those Jerks and best friends with the KING and all of them... etc.So LRFT stuck to herself. She kept her mouth shut. She would NOT tell these little stories to anyone, and keep them to herself. Or b!tch about all that stuff to ANYONE! Not the AngelGuy not the KING, not nobody!!!! Nobody! Nobody could know her bullying experiences because she saw EVERYONE as an enemy.Well fast forward a month or two; and like l said: HarryPotter begins to ruin LRFT’s schedule. So basically he would change LRFT’s days or shift. He’d put her to work mornings , or change her days off.. stuff like that.And that meant: She would have NO CHOICE but to SEE and be in CONSTANT COMMUNICATION with the two main Jerks; Robocop and HarryPotter himself!Now.. there is no knowing if HarryPotter did this with KING’s permission or not. But it was clear that whatever he was doing with people’s days or hours; he could just do it just like that, like if it’s nothing.SURELY and CLEARLY,, HarryPotter was looking for some kind of reaction from LRFT. He was looking for LRFT’s response to this manipulation of her schedule. He either wanted her to complain or B!tch or fight or scream or beg. SOMETHING!HarryPotter wanted a response or reaction from LRFT. And he wanted it baddd.LRFT decided that: she was not gonna give it to him. Luckily; LRFT was single/lonely, without kids, not in school, or in any secondary jobs, no friends, no plans. So LRFT had full availability and was in every sense flexible with her hours in her life. She could work mornings, afternoons, overnights, ANYTHING. And the 3-Jerks didn’t even know this about LRFT.xD... >=]..So if HarryPotter was looking to Bully LRFT using her hours and days to confuse her and ruin her?... HE was gonna end up looking stupid in the end!!! HAHAH! >=]He had another thing coming.HarryPotter either (Found Pleasure and Power if LRFT would cry and B!tch and Complain and Fight) OR (He literally wanted her to Complain so that he could now have a real reason to fire her for sure).Option 1: Have fun seeing her CryOption 2: Fire HerOr bothWhatever the reason, LRFT wasn’t gonna let them win. This time she was gonna play the game. At that point LRFT was a master at getting fired and quitting jobs. So she thought I’ll just give it shot and go down fighting.She was gonna use her secret power. “HER FULL AVAILABILITY TO WORK” lol xDSo the weeks that followed, LRFT was showing up at work, mornings, afternoons. She was working on days that she was supposed to be off. She would have separate days off, she would be there overtime.So, even though it was obvious to all the jerks and the victim that HarryPotter was bullying her and manipulating her days and hours. LRFT deep down wanted to also give the impression and show everyone at this job that; “She really is an exceptional worker”. That “she gets her job done”, that she “is flexible”. That “she will follow rules”.She not only wanted to play HarryPotter’s dumb little game and make him look stupid and like a bully, but she also wanted to impress the KING. She wanted to show them all that she is reliable.LRFT was also still in her 90-Days. So it seemed that HarryPotter was taking advantage of those 90 days that LRFT still hasn’t gotten through. To get her fired. (The 90-day probation period in any job.)Another thing that the 3-Jerks knew; was that in some mornings; the Captain of the shift, the Supervisor, the Manager of the shift would be “BossBattle”... the scariest, meanest, most strict Supervisor of them all! And I’ve mentioned BossBattle in my other stories. About how LRFT never really saw him all that much, and about how every employee had an issue with BossBattle all the time. And how every employee like TinkerBell there was “scared” .. TERRIFIED of BossBattle. BossBattle was also very close with the KING , so employees like LRFT would keep away from the 3-Jerks and anyone above them.. but mostly BossBattle. It appeared that BossBattle bullied people THE MOST, mistreated people THE MOST, scared people THE MOST. And was in every sense this vile man who hated all the employees and treated them all with absolute disrespect.When employees would talk to LRFT who was also in their rank.. about the Managers. They would only complain about BossBattle. BossBattle would give them the most trouble. Sometimes they’d complain about Robocop and barely HarryPotter, and never the Weedguy or AngelGuy.. but mostly their complaints and stories of bullying and disrespect would be regarding BossBattle more than anyone.Now LRFT had met BossBattle a few times. And when she got to work under him. He did not give her any trouble. And it didn’t take long before LRFT noticed something about this infamous man “BossBattle”. He.. (get this); begins to hit on LRFT. He seemed to like LRFT. In other words; BossBattle seemed to have a THING for LRFT.xD xD xDSo “no wonder” LRFT was all confused when her coworker buddies would complain about BossBattle, while BossBattle went out of his way to treat her like a Princess. xD xD xDSo not only was HarryPotter trying to use LRFT’s-90 Days, and his Scheduler abilities against her. BUT was now also gonna use BossBattle’s vile nature.. against LRFT.LRFT found out about how BossBattle had an interest in her. And with her full availability and will to work anytime or any hours. SHE LITERALLY was gonna win this fight against HarryPotter. She was gonna make HarryPotter look real stupid.>=] >=] >=]None of the 3-Jerks or the KING or anyone knew about how BossBattle liked LRFT or any of that, but it was clear to LRFT herself and how he treated her like a Princess behind closed doors.Well anyway.. The weeks move along and while all of this is going down, and Harry Potter switches her days around and tries extremely hard to make LRFT miserable... and expects BossBattle to bully her/ yell at her... and expects LRFT to Complain about all of this.. and give up and quit with tears in her eyes...Other coworkers begin to notice the subtle bullying that HarryPotter is doing to LRFT. They begin to ask LRFT; “Why are your days all scrabbled up and you work mornings and afternoons?” .. and all LRFT would answer was; “I don’t know”. and she’d change the subject immediately like if she didn’t care. She would make it known to coworkers and Supervisors that NOTHING on planet Earth, is bothering her! She was making it clear that she was this “Good girl, that minded her business and did her job”.So, even though all of this was going down and HarryPotter was going back and forth playing this game against LRFT to get her fired, day in and day out, and people were noticing that she is this victim...and she just behaved like everything is fine.She actually ENJOYED some of the schedule manipulation from HarryPotter. In reality LRFT loved to be put in the mornings sometimes because she was able to see THE KING of the jungle himself. The BIG BOSS, the man with all the power. Lowkey- lowkey.. LRFT was enjoying every second of those morning shifts because LOWKEY, she was able to see the love of her life, her crush: THE KING.<3 <3 <3 <3That’s another reason LRFT didn’t really complain and didn’t really quit at all. THE KING was this grown ass man in his 30’s, mid 30’s .. but MAN was he a handsome thinGG ! LRFT couldn’t help but fantasize about her 21-year old self , dropping her pants for this 30-year old MAIN BOSS of hers. AT WORK<3 <3 <3 <3LRFT made it seem like she isn’t in love with anyone, that she doesn’t care or crush on anyone.. but Everybody knew.. that THE KING was the most Handsome man in the entire MAZE. <3 <3 <3 <3And it made LRFT a bit sad to know that “THE KING” , you know.. being a man in his mid 30’s to late 30’s being as attractive and handsome as he is; might obviously have his wife, and kids, and pets and the picked fence and all that. But regardless she COULDN’T help but imagine herself giving in to this man. This man that was 10 years older than her.<3 <3 <3 <3Dropping the panties at work with him ... or behind his wife’s back. NAHH I’m Jk .. u get it. LRFT was in love with this man. And was now enjoying every bit of HarryPotters tricks.And that’s the thing. Nobody knew this about LRFT. Nobody knew her true intentions or feelings or emotions or plans. And THATs what made this job so Fascinating to her.Fast forward to maybe a little over a month, and LRFT began to notice something new. Something has now changed. HarryPotter at that point was still kind of messing up her Schedule and days, but it just seemed like this unending game that wasn’t having much of an effect on LRFT at all. Some employees would still ask her “so why don’t you have a set schedule like me”.. and LRFT could really care less.Now... this new thing that started happening. It might’ve been around.... MARCH 2019.So we’re talking about 2 months down from when LRFT started.LRFT!... (Get this)....!LRFT begins to notice her Captain “Robocop” in every area of the MAZE! The second main Jerk, “Robocop”!He was involved with both stories of “The WriteUp” & “The Lost Phone”. For those of you who are new to these stories.Now. Here’s the thing. Robocop did follow the coworkers around the MAZE and would show up every now and then just like BossBattle did. They were both in fact Supervisors and it really is their job to make sure employees like TinkerBell did their job and weren’t breaking the rules. You get it. Other Supervisors like AngelGuy and Weedguy wouldn’t really leave the office at all or babysit the coworkers. They wouldn’t give their employees HELL or try to manage them or any of that nonsense. AngelGuy and Weedguy would always be the “mind my own business- leave me be”.. type of people. And of course BossBattle gave LRFT that "privledge" because he wanted to woo her since he was crushing on her.But this whole “Manage” “Supervise” situation took a whole new turn with Robocop by MARCH. LRFT began to notice Robocop in every area, every location of the MAZE.And when I mean every single AREA and LOCATION, I mean every single one!LRFT would begin to see Robocop every 15 to 30 minutes. He would walk around in the MAZE. Or go out to the outskirts of the MAZE, it doesn’t matter if he was inside the MAZE or outside on the ParkingLots, but he was “EVERYWHERE!” and I mean “EVERYWHERE!”.One of those moments; LRFT caught Robocop's gaze as he was approaching her.. and as he passed by her, he says “How you doin’?”(with his ghetto newyork accent and his deepass manly voice) as if he was greeting her, all while wearing his sunglasses like if he's cool.LRFT didn’t respond as she’s shown clear signs of how much she cannot stand him and the other idiot HarryPotter.. and she breaks the stare, doesn’t respond and continues on with her walk. She probably had also given him a "stank eye". There is no knowing why Robocop was trying to greet LRFT at that moment. There was no knowing if maybe it might have been some form of joke.. or if it might have actually been genuine. But from the buulying behavior Robocop had already presented to LRFT with "The WrIteUp" and the "Lost Phone". Having had snitched on her to HarryPotter and then, possibly created the sickening "Lost Phone" prank... LRFT was not about to trust that Jerk..WHATSOEVER. Robocop and HarryPotter were now (Bad People) in her book. They were BULLIES.Regardless of whatever the Robocop was trying to do with that little greeting, with that little smile.. LRFT tried not to pay any mind and continue her day like a BadAss.. she wasnt about to let anybody put her down.As the days go on. LRFT could not help but notice Robocop showing up everywhere at every location and every post. She would see him almost 40 times in one day. It felt almost as if Robocop was going out of his way to follow LRFT around the MAZE day in and day out. It felt almost as if he was intentionally looking for her specifically… out of all the coworkers there at all.And since she was this new employee still.. she didnt exactly know all the ins and outs of the Entire MAZE, Robocop on the other hand did. So this boy would many times pop up out of NOWHERE! Out of thin air!So as all of this was going down. LRFT began to think.. began to wonder: "Huh, could this be part of HarryPotter's plan to rid of me". "Did HarryPotter set Robocop up to follow me around and spy on me and try to catch me doing something at work?". "Is this HarryPotter's and Robocop's little plan??" "Their little new form of bullying??".Robocop's following became excessive throughout the weeks that followed. Robocop would never say a word and simply stare at LRFT while moving along on his way. Every time that he would appear or show up; he would just stare.Sometimes he would be wearing his shades, other times he wouldn't, he would just pass by while looking at her, and never interact. LRFT would have no idea what his problem was.(( Now; I've talked about how there happened to be a "Paper"... a List of posts presented on the office where everyboby could see where everybody would be posted at. So anybody can easily find anyone they wanted. This was mainly used by these Supervisors so that they can know the Location of every employee that worked that shift. So it would simply say:"Ricardo Employee Number 11 will be posted inside from 3PM- 6PM, and then he will drive from 6 to 8"Shit like that, you get it. It was this stupid little List that had everybody's name written on it. In this job they didnt call people by their names, they would call them by their number. So in this story.... LRFT's number was 21.. (were just gonna use that number for privacy reasons and because that was her age). So they just had everyone posted at different posts while naming everyone with a number: " 11 will be in the tower.. 13 will be inside the MAZE.. 21 will be on the outskirts of the MAZE.. and so on." and then everyone would switch every hour , depending on that List.))((The crazy thing is; The Captain of the Shift, would be the one that had to create and assemble this little stupid List before the shift began. The shift Leader/Supervisor was the one to manipulate every employee's post throughout the day. In this case ROBOCOP was the one that has to create and set up this dumb little List before everyone came in to work, to tell every coworker where theyre gonna be. YA'KNO...Since he is the Supervisor. It is simply his job...SO CLEARLY: Robocop and any Leader or Employee there on that day would know of LRFT's location. Robocop could easily walk his little Punk-Ass into the Tiny office, take a look at the stupid List he printed out, and seee where LRFT would be at during 6PM-8PM if he wanted to find her.So Robocop could located LRFT in the enourmus MAZE with ease. But the problem was that , even though the list would say "Oh you have to be outside the MAZE or inside of it".. nobody could really know EXACTLY where you were at either inside or outside. The list could only say "you're either gonna be inside or outside".. So Robocop being the CRAZY/EXTRA strict manager he is: would take it onto his own hands! to supervise everyone by walking inside the MAZE himself and driving on the outskirts of the MAZE himself. And if that wasnt enough.. he literally would ask for a "20 check" every 20 minutes from everybody. Basically asking everyone "what is your exact location".. so you would have to answer with "Im literally next to StarBucks".. Or something along those lines.Sometimes he would be walking inside while watching you and asking for your "20" to make sure that you're not lying about your exact location. nothing that LRFT experienced.. but other coworkers had experienced from Robocop. So they'd warn LRFT: “ try not to lie about your "exact 20". Cause he's strict like that.”AngelGuy and the WeedGuy being the laidback guys that they are.. didnt really do any 20 checks or location checks or leave the office. It was really more of a Robocop, BossBattle thing. Nobody knows if the KING made them be all strict and force them all to ask for peoples location.. but WHATEVER..who knows right. They could just do it, and do it freely. ))So not only was Robocop using his power to Post every coworker where he wanted at whatever place, and his ability to ask everyone were they are.. but he was literally going out of his way to Patrol and be out and about to Supervise/Manage everyone.But in this case.. it appeared as if he was focused on LRFT more than anyone. And like I said; LRFT wasn’t sure if HarryPotter was behind Robocops behavior.. or if there might be another reason for the extreme level of following and popping up out of nowhere every 15 minutes. But from the vibe that both HarryPotter and Robocop had given her. From their bullying behavior and the whole "WriteUp" situation and the "LostPhone" situation, and all that….LRFT took it as "This is HarryPotter's plan, and he is behind all of this, and Robocop is trying to catch me breaking the rules, so that both of those Jerks can get me fired". Or so that both of these Jerks could have a laugh.'''LRFT was gonna show them that they can’t get to her. That they're not gonna put her down like that. That theyre not gonna win against her. No level of following, or schedule changing, or contact with BossBattle; was gonna scare her and make her quit or get her fired.There was days that LRFT didn’t know whether to say something to him , like "confront him" about the following or go to the KING about it. But since I mentioned about how they all might stick up for eachother; .. she wasn’t gonna try doing anything like that. She really just allowed the Robocop to do his thing. Even if he just wanted to stare at her and intimidate her, BY NOT INTERACTING AND BEING ALL QUIET.Well anyways guys, that was the story of "THE CREEPY STALKER". The story of the "CREEPY STALKER" is actually longer and crazier than just this you guys. I'll keep you guys posted
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Comment Meme, my five centsWhen did you start commenting on artwork, and why? Until now I only commented on the artwork of my best friend who regularily sends me pictures of his newest paintings and asks for my honest opinion. I do this because feedback is very important, especially when you are an artist. I don't see me as a painter, I'm an author, but painting helps me to visualize feelings I use in my poems and novels. And I give feedback on other authors writings, too. I guess commenting artwork will not be too different and I'm looking forward to it.What kind of art do you like to comment on?The kind of art that sparks something inside me. There is no certain style I prefer, the painting, sculpture or sketch needs to stir some kind of emotion inside of me. If a painting is executed perfectly, but there is no story behind it I can relate to, I'm not able to comment. Nowadays, do you often like or comment, and why?Well, I started on deviantArt yesterday, so I'm relatively new to liking and commenting, but I'm about to change this. It's important to be seen. I hope that there will be people seeing me and my work (and hopefully enjoy it), but I hope to discover art that I enjoy, too. And if I do, I let the artist know. What motivates you to comment? Can you name three things, minimum? The artwork is stunning, so I let the artist know. 2. The artwork shows potential, but needs work to fully unfold it. If there is something I can point out to help the artist improving, I will do so. 3. Commenting means communicating. I like to communicate. What is difficult about commenting? What do you usually do about it? For me, my lack of knowledge. Sometimes I see something in a painting I don't like, but I can't name what's bothering me because I don't know the exact terms. (English isn't my native language, so that makes it harder still) If this happens, I usually try to find out how to express my thoughts, learning something in the progress, too. What is a constructive comment, in your opinion? Everything that is aiming to help improve artwork or to cheer the artist on.Is there a difference between a constructive comment and a critique? If so, what is this difference? I don't know. I think the differences aren't that big.How often do you think you comment constructively and post critiques? I actually try to always comment constructively. But communication is tricky sometimes. What I assume is constructive may be found useless by the recipient.Do you use a specific technique when you comment? (e.g. sandwich method) I try to be kind. Always.What kind of comments do you like to receive? (e.g. constructive, critique, 'normal')I'm aware that I am barely a novice concerning my paintings, so I don't mind comments to point out my shortcomings as I will grow knowing where I have to improve.Do you have any comment expectations regarding your artwork? (e.g. tips for improvement, likes and dislikes, etc.) Everything that helps me grow. It's ok to dislike my artwork, too, nothing is loved by all. I just want people to refrain from being intentionally mean.Do you have any pet peeves with the comments you receive, and the comments you give? Comments with the only purpose to hurt. Comments with the sole intention to get a like or comment back (like: 'Wow, so awesome! Want to check out my stuff?')In all honesty, when you comment, would you like to receive a comment back? I would like to get comments, yes. But when I comment, I don't expect the painter to comment back. I expect people to comment on my stuff because they can relate somehow, not because they feel obliged to do so because I commented their artwork.Do you have any tips and suggestions for new commenters and artists looking for feedback? Not exactly, because I'm new myself. But when art is relatable to writing, it helps to join groups, chat with other artists, enter contests and being an active member of the community.Ask one question about comments you would like your tagged people to answer!Would love to, but I don't know enough artists yet. Hopefully that will change soon.But if anyone want to fill out this meme after reading this, here is the place to do so: ,CComment Meme! Fill out ProjectComment
Comment Meme!!Fill out ProjectComment's comment meme to win comments, features and ! When did you start commenting on artwork, and why? I started commenting on artwork since I started Deviantart. I found that commenting on people's artwork helps to show artists that there is people out there that likes their work. What kind of art do you like to comment on? I comment on all sorts of people's work that I found really fun, cool, interesting, and truly amazing. I find that looking at artwork is amazing and especially when the artist makes it. Nowadays, do you often or comment, and why? I often comment because I like to post about good things to artists about their artwork. What motivates you to comment? Can you name three things, minimum? Well, 1) their artwork inspires me to makes a comment on the drawings, 2) maybe they need some feedback to help them with their work and 3) it makes me happy to comment to show that there are people who love their work and inspired by it. What is difficult about commenting? What do you usually do about it? I don't think there is much difficult about commenting. The one thing I'll mention though is when people don't comment. I wish they do that so other artists know how the public feels about their drawings and to make it better too. What is a constructive comment, in your opinion? A constructive comment in my opinion is a comment that brings people up with positive feedback. It's like positive comments you hear like 'that is really good' or 'your an amazing drawer/artist'. Is there a difference between a constructive comment and a critique? If so, what is this difference? I think that constructive comment is like inspiring them that their work is good like a positive comment. While on critique I find that they go honest about it in a bad or good way. They don't tend to be mean, they are just honest and want to help by their opinion. How often do you think you comment constructively and post critiques? I mostly post constructively because I send a lot of positive comments about their artwork looking good and how they did a splendid job on making it. I hardly post comments about critiquing. Do you use a specific technique when you comment? (e.g. sandwich method) I don't use special methods. The only thing I would say is that I just express myself on how I feel about the artwork and say that their work is good. What kind of comments do you like to receive? (e.g. constructive, critique, 'normal') I like constructive mostly, but I do would like critique ones too. Since the critique would hurt, but would get me to overcome my mistakes about my drawings. Do you have any comment expectations regarding your artwork? (e.g. tips for improvement, likes and dislikes, etc.) I would like some comments about improvement because I do want to know that if I'm improving and if I'm making mistakes too. Do you have any pet peeves with the comments you receive, and the comments you give? I don't really have any pet peeves when I think about it. In all honesty, when you comment, would you like to receive a comment back? I honestly would like the feedback if someone commented on my work. I know the criticism would hurt, but it would help me know where my mistakes are within my artwork and to grow past them. Do you have any tips and suggestions for new commenters and artists looking for feedback? Well, if anyone wants to send feedback, try to express yourself on how you feel about the artwork. Also, when you notice that someone is having struggle on a particular part in their artwork, don't be afraid to point it out. Just explain about it and give them tips on how to fix it too. So the artist can be able to fix it and grow from that msitake. Ask one question about comments you would like your tagged people to answer! How do you express yourself through your comments?I tag FaithWalkers...
Comment memeTemplate@ ProjectComment's comment meme When did you start commenting on artwork, and why? As soon as I started publishing my art online. It was the main incentive to even put it there. I like interpreting other people's art and hearing interpretations to mine, and sometimes i comment just to interact. It's nice.What kind of art do you like to comment on?Is this about medium? Then visual art, mostly. Rarely poems. If the question is about other things, perhaps... art by friends, art that I admire, or art that reminds me of something.Nowadays, do you often favourite or comment, and why? I favourite less, comment more. It's not that I like less art now, but i hate having bulky folders with 2.000 + favourites, that I will never be able to look through again. I should really sort more. And comments just... give joy for a longer time than a favourite. They are more personal.What motivates you to comment? Can you name three things, minimum? The hope to make someone's day, my desire to show appreciation for someone's craft and just a tiny bit of interaction.What is difficult about commenting? What do you usually do about it? Treading carefully. Especially with interpretations, I keep wanting to say all my associations. But especially if it goes towards a popular (or less popular) series, it's better not to. Mostly I'm good at that though. In contrast, pointing out the obvious, gosh, I... just keep doing that. What is a constructive comment, in your opinion? One that is aimed to help the artist. It needs to have specific suggestions on what to do better. The commenter should speak from their own experience.Is there a difference between a constructive comment and a critique? If so, what is this difference? In contrast to a comment, which can be subjective, a critique should strive for objectivity, and mark own opinions as such. It should carefully analyze what went wrong in the first place. Of course, politeness is key.How often do you think you comment constructively and post critiques? I've only posted a critique once, but I try to comment constructively about twice a week. Depends on mood, really. Do you use a specific technique when you comment? (e.g. sandwich method) I do sandwich a little. I try to always include a lot of praise, because mostly, there is a lot to praise! It's not easy to comment in a way that is good for the artist, and not just me wanting to say stuff. Especially, as some may not want suggestions or interpretations at all. I try to make an educated guess and generally be polite.What kind of comments do you like to receive? (e.g. constructive, critique, 'normal') Depends. On pieces that I went all out on (backgrounds, posing, colouring), I want constructive or critique style comments, unless stated otherwise. I feel a little uneasy if i didn't give my best an then receive critiques, because that little voice of 'i could do better' is already there. Like... i know. I know this isn't what it should be. But I want to get away from that feeling, because I want to improve my art. And I need other people's eyes for that.Do you have any comment expectations regarding your artwork? (e.g. tips for improvement, likes and dislikes, etc.) Generally I'm thankful for any attention. Even just a smiley, though it will puzzle me to no end. As said before, I adore when people really think about my work and the story i'm trying to tell, and if they can give me tips on how to tell it better- grand! Magnificient! But I would never expect that from any old wanderer that just happens to stumble upon my art.Do you have any pet peeves with the comments you receive, and the comments you give? Comments I give: I like to please. uwu Sometimes I need to be more careful, but sometimes i need to be bolder, and stand my ground. I've been in art communities for a long time, and I do have advice to offer, even if my own art doesn't always show it.Comments I receive: Comparing my characters to existing characters, I guess. There are stages here, from 'ooh, kinda like that guy' to 'you completely copied that'. I recently got a copy-pasted promo comment, and just as weird, an answer on the promo-comment, defaming said commenter. I felt like a stage to their little fight across the internet. :,D But none of that happened often enough to be a pet peeve. In all honesty, when you comment, would you like to receive a comment back? No. It's absolutely fine if you don't want to comment. Yet, despite that, I sometimes hope for a karmaic effect, leading other commenters back to me... This is what i look for in the comment project, but do not tell~Do you have any tips and suggestions for new commenters and artists looking for feedback? Look around what people are doing whose comments are received well! And I don't just mean gushy comments, although they have their place too! If you want feedback, ask for feedback. Join clubs. Don't be afraid of negative feedback, just concentrate on your journey, improve, and try again. Be kind. Be kind (in any way you can). Be kind (to yourself). Ask one question about comments you would like your tagged people to answer! Maybe later. :)Tag as many people as you want to answer ProjectComment's Comment Meme
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Fenrir-Twilight-Star Featured By Owner Edited 1 day ago  Hobbyist
I had commented on: Pokestudy 691 Dragalge by m3scti

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AbyssalEros Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Well met, all.
Let me first thank you for inviting me to this group.
Now, I think I should briefly introduce myself.

Foremost, I am a writer of dark erotica, Lovecraftian horror, and dark fantasy, and a few more genres; but I am also a fledgling 3D artist and an indie game developer
who is still in need to improve.
However, most importantly, I am a creature of the dark myself, as you can see in my self-portrait.


I am happy to join your group to get more connected with other artists and have the chance to learn from them.
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m3scti Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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Stages of Grief (Ranboo Fanart) by NathaAmore

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Pokestudy 847 Barraskewda by m3scti
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m3scti Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
commented: Jackson Wang by CierinBlue

submit(200 words folder): Pokestudy 691 Dragalge by m3scti
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