Good Master Piece!
Takorto: *leaning over a desk, reading The Economical Physics of The Rapture Federation*
Alpha: What are you doing?
Takorto: reading one of your books. you've got interesting taste, Alpha.
Alpha: Why thank you! So what is your favorite part?
Takorto: oh, I don't prefer picking favourites. the pilot from Z-Squadron wrote this, didn't he? he has nice stories to tell about the economical fall and rise of your empire, doesn't he?
spark: *walking and whistles*
Alpha: *Reading some documents*
Great design. Sort of reminds of Fulgore of the Killer Instinct series.
Ah yes my friend!
Takorto: yet another worthy challenger..
Pretty good. Though something to keep in mind for boredom, you still have a contest entry to work on.
That's not bad dude. I really like it!